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Reviews for D/s Naruto

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  • From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2007
    love it! love it! love it!
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  • From ANON - HumanInfiltrator on April 23, 2007
    Evil mistress for making us wait, but oh how good and intriguing. Please, please don't let us wait so long again!!!!!!

    Uhm, question. Why do you refer to Shika as Naru? His clan is the Nara, ya?
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  • From gazelovr on April 22, 2007
    You've written an absolutely wonderful story thus far. I really enjoyed your colorful depiction of the white ocean w/ blood red surf. I'm sure it'll stick w/ me for a long time to come. I look forward to many more chapters from you, including Naruto's submission and the Sasuke's piercings. Keep up the great work.
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  • From llyoung on April 22, 2007
    Your story just continues to get better and better. I loved the part with Naruto and Sasuke in Naruto's shop and Gaara and Shika together is great. Thanks so much for writing this story.
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  • From ANON - Cindy on April 22, 2007
    HOLY SH!T

    Your description of Gaara and Shika is the best thing out of this gorgeous story. Rock on ...
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  • From ANON - CoLiN67 on April 22, 2007
    Would it be possible if you could write more of itachi? Pretty Please.
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  • From suzie on April 21, 2007
    more oh god please more
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 21, 2007
    That was so hot and sweet! I love your Naruto, he's just perfect ^^;

    Can't wait for Sasuke's collar ceremony ;)
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  • From Allys on April 21, 2007
    Sasuke is so confused and Naruto needs to get his act together - They're such a mess XD. But isn't love meant to be messy? That knife of Naruto's still kills me, I think it's one of those matters of trust - talk about instant focus, fear does that. Fear and pain make you very aware of yourself, mentally and physically. Are you going to change Sasuke's safe words? I like beloved, but will Naruto let him keep Itachi? Those boys need to sit down and think about what they're doing, get their feelings sorted out - I don't want anyone to get really hurt. Hmmnn, retraining - do you have a plan for that? Who'll be in charge of them? Iruka? Itachi? Ibiki? They're so sweet, this chapter made them both seem incredibly young, like new, and it was adorable - especially when Sasuke said "Master isn't pleased and he won't fuck me now" LOL, and then when Naruto got all "Where do you hurt, baby, tell me?" God I wanted to huggle them to death. The mini "your idiot" conversation was also really sweet and Sasuke saying "exactly" was a perfect end note. I was a little surprised though that Sasuke accepted the fact that Naruto loves him so quickly. Naruto certainly has the capacity, but Sasuke can be such a cynic. They're moving really fast- it's one of those relationships you look at from the outside and you're all - "you're going to Crash and Burn - Slow down" Iruka's already all mad at them, and everyone else seems to be in shock. LOL, Naruto's been there what 2 days and already he's set the whole scene on its ear XD. I mean between Kakashi misbehaving, Sasori finding out about Itachi and Kisame and Shika leaving Neji to Dom for Gaara, O.O LOL!!
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  • From ANON - mee on April 21, 2007
    omg!!! this story is sooooo cool :D i love it. and it keeps getting better with every chapter :D
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on April 21, 2007
    mmm so hot. Naruto's in love. I can only hope Sasuke feels the same?
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  • From on April 21, 2007
    amazing chapter
    as usual
    keep up the AMAZING work!

    ja ne!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on April 21, 2007
    Yummy. I read some of the reviews and I have to agree: where is Sai and Ibiki? They are soooo good together.

    Please, please more!
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  • From ANON - Inoshi on April 21, 2007
    All I can say is wow. [chuckles and smiles] When I was first started reading this I wasn't sure how I'd react to IruKaka and NaruSasu; especially since I am a firm supporter of Naruto uke. However, the way you've approached it, with a unique balance between Sasuke and Naruto really made me reconsider Naruto-seme. It's truely perfect in my opinion and a nice change from the norm. I'll be honest in saying I'm not really a fan of KakaIru/IruKaka, I think simply because I am a 100% KakaNaru fan [sighs] It was too bad (at least in my view) that Kakashi isn't as fond of Naruto as I would have liked - but as they say, can't please everyone. Also, considering the theme of the story and him being subby to Iruka, I suppose it wouldn't make sense otherwise.
    It's truely an interestign story, one of which I hope will be updated soon. After all, this fic is diffrent, creative, steamy and so much more. Thank you for creating the work.
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  • From MyOwnTigerEyes on April 20, 2007
    I am loving your fic. You are doing one hell of an amazing job. I've always been interested in D/s stories, never actually been to a club though. And I wasn't even upset about your references to urine and fecal matter {I am squeemish about this}.

    And I adore you for having Judo as a topic in this fic. I, myself, am a judoka {Judo player}. The perfect site that my Sensei even recommends is www.judoinfo.com

    Keep up the good work. :)
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