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Reviews for D/s Naruto

By : Hestia
  • From llyoung on April 26, 2007
    Chapter 22 - Thanks for another great chapter. Naruto and Sasuke are so cute together.
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  • From promise2003 on April 26, 2007
    Hestia, I just finished chapter one and I want you to know that you are the only one that could ever, EVER get me to read this. XD Damn you and your good writing, making me want to overlook the fact that I really don't like D/s at ALL. Well, enough whining, on to chapter 2.
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  • From ANON - Kristal on April 26, 2007
    I'm not that great at giving literary review, but I have to express how much I love this story. I'm not really into the scene, but I love the insight into the thought and emotional relationship between the master and sub. In a show of appreciation I drew up some fanart for chapter 22 :3 http://community.livejournal.com/kakairu/1232072.html thanks!
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  • From Vesca on April 25, 2007
    I want to be like you when I grow up... *blinks* Oh wait, I'm grown up already, shit.

    I want to say how much I'm loving this fic. You're keeping it hardcore and true to fact. It's great that you're going ahead and posting warnings instead of skipping over the areas of D/S that some might find less appealing. I,personally have never tried or read much about it, and while I don't find myself curious; I find the imagery to be stunning. Kudos to you!

    For me, Kakashi and Iruka are my OTP so I love what you've done with them, but I'm loving all the pairings you're writing in this fic. The scenes between Gaara and Shika were so good :D

    So, is your fic coming up to Pride Week? Will there be happiness abounding? How soon will Sasuke realize that Naruto's for real and not going to dump him in a week.. -I was able to read the deleted epilogue- I'm so glad you decided to continue this fic.
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  • From llyoung on April 25, 2007
    Thank you for another Iruka and Kakashi chapter. Reading Iruka telling Kakashi that he loves him makes all the pain worth it.

    Thanks for taking the time to write this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 25, 2007
    LOVE YOU! love the fast updates live all the characters you use, just antasic keep writiing
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on April 25, 2007
    Mmm.

    First, I want to say: You're my hero. I think it's really brave of you to write what you do, here, even knowing that some people will *really* not be up for it. Strong author. Awesome.

    I loved the enema, and the ass-torture; not so much the *actions* (though I wasn't disturbed by them), more the emotions behind them. Love this line: 'his own excitement and the thought of not only being emptied, but the promise that came with that—for what Iruka emptied, Iruka filled.' Gives me shivers. And yes, Kakashi's pain is beautiful. Because he withstands it for Iruka. Love, love, love. I use that word a lot, but I mean it. I love this story.
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  • From ANON - Lin on April 25, 2007
    Just read the new chappie. More cringing but I got it done. My husband says that you are turning me into a masochist because I was cringing and biting my nails but I kept reading. Although, I must confess I head to get up and walk around. Kakashi has my sympathy, although I am sure her would laugh at that and probably pity me for not knowing the pleasure of the pain Iruka gives him.
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  • From LifeonHiatus on April 25, 2007
    wowzers! two chapters in one day? ::goes into cardiac arrest:: but i've got to say, that last chapter was .... woooo! normally that *stuff* isn't my cup of tea, but its way to seductive for me. i am just enamored with this irukaka pairing. just keep 'em coming! ^^
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  • From ANON - Dani on April 25, 2007
    This fic blows my mind. I absolutely love it! And you update so fast that after a couple days I'm completely addicted. Now in your later chapters the plot is twisting and unfolding after all the incredibly hot smut in the beginnging, I'm so excited. I especially love how you got into the stream of consciousness of Naruto, Sasuke, and Kakashi during some of the different scenes they're in. I'm just in complete awe of you! *bows down before the master* I can't wait to see where this is gonna go, poor insecure Sasuke, he has such a fucked sense of self esteem. You've got me hanging onto your every word now, I've checked AFF lately like mad for your updates. You've got an adoring fan in me. :)
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  • From Allys on April 25, 2007
    Lady you have just crossed the line into some Hard Core Shit (pun fully intended) XD. Don't worry I know it could have been worse, but I liked your balance. I have long ago come to terms with some of my baser perversions, but I'm really glad you put the warning. I was prepared. I have to say I enjoyed it. Although the Iruka factor O.O, Kakashi I'm not so bothered about, but I'll never be able to look at Iruka the same way again LOL XD.

    I felt so bad for Kakashi in the car! God damn it's bad enough to be in the car and need to pee, far less for having all those things stuck up in you - I fully sympathise and give him big respect for that display of obedience and willingness to please. And thank you very much for not using boiled eggs, and for administering the enema :Huggles: for being a most considerate Dom.

    The entire night had that sense of surreality to it, that I enjoy so much about this fic. I especially liked that they made love at the end there. He definitely earned himself some vanilla.

    XD - Happy dancing - You put Kakashi in my leather strap XD!! WOOT!! He was definitely on display tonight, and tonight, when everybody came out, are we going to get to see everyone's reaction? Oh one question though - I thought Itachi said none of that in the dining room? Or does the stage not count? Hmmn, oh and I went back and checked - Yay for May!! O.o pardon the rhyming :)

    Hooray the night is finally upon us and all those other things I'm dying to find out about will happen soon! I'm not as good at being patient as I'd like to be. Ja ne, until next time, Allys.
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  • From ANON - Lin on April 24, 2007
    This chapter 20 was painful to read. I was cringing the whole time.
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  • From ANON - LRL on April 24, 2007
    *falls over*
    this has got to be one of the best fics i have ever read...had the pleasure to read may i say...holy crap...
    it isnt what i traditionally read for pairings...but youve written it so well it doesnt matter...
    i couldnt stop reading...
    its serious...and yet has good comic relief...its just spun so well...
    what can i say? awesomness for you!
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  • From Allys on April 24, 2007
    Oooh IruKaka XD, they are seriously one of my favourite couples, they fit they so well together and they're so part and parcel of NaruSasu :D. I love how you wrap up their philsophies of life, with their jobs, their love and the sex. You seem to like to find out what makes people tick, I like that too. Are you a Paolo Coehlo fan? LOL that was random, but stragnely enough something about the introspective quality of your writing reminds me of him. I love the adornments, cause they've gone past jewellery into the realm of adornment at this point - Gorgeous. This entire fic is full of beautiful imagery and things, i wish I had more time so i could draw it all. I also really like that Kakashi didn't have to misbehave two days in a row, but that he was more than willing to do it anyway. Thank you for the update, you seem to have relaxed into a chapter a day pattern, so I'll be here tomorrow waiting hopefully. Much love, Allys.
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  • From llyoung on April 24, 2007
    Thank you so much. I really loved Chapter 20 with Iruka and Kakashi. I look forward to your next update. Thank you for writing.
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