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Reviews for D/s Naruto

By : Hestia
  • From ANON - Tati on April 28, 2007
    **Speechless**
    Um... **still speechless**

    Asuma... **still vey speechless**
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  • From roro237 on April 28, 2007
    All I can say is mmmmmmmm! This chapter took my breath away! I'll just keep re-reading this untll you post again, it's mmmmm! I so love what you do with Naruto and Sasuke!:)
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  • From Allys on April 28, 2007
    Oh man I need to have patience and wait for a while, that's okay i can do it. Another amazing chapter here. It ended on a slightly sad note though, it made me sad for Naruto, even though I'm pretty sure that Sasuke would agree anyway, Naruto is the kind of guy who would likely not ask, because of the obstacles in his head. But then I guess it'll make them cherish the time they do spend together before they come to terms, even more. I love that Sasuke feels like he's being spoiled, it's just so right, because he is spoiled, but he's always been spoiled with the wrong things, the things he doesn't need, while the things he does have been lacking. Naruto will fix that, Naruto will spoil him in every way possible :). The outfit was amazing in my head, I loved it, but my favourite part was the jewellery, very closely followed by the ribbons and the butt plug. The care and ceremony that went into dressing Sasuke was also amazing, is there anywhere I can see the slave bracelet? That entire scene in the apartment, so hott, so thoroughly distracting and engaging, that now I'm just a little jealous. And OMG!!! They just walked out just like that in full regalia, I was like O.O "Holy Crap!" Embarrassment! I would have died, but Go dhow I wish I was that brave, or that firmly entrenched in that place where I wouldn't care. I love this, it's like every little fantasy I've ever had and didn't know I wanted to have, come to life. That may be it, the reason why I adore your stories, I'm always trying to pinpoint it, but I suspect it may be a multitude of things. I didn't even notice when you changed POV from Sasuke to Naruto you did you so smoothly :D. And Itachi's little interference, was it meant to cause as much trouble as it did? It was a very subtle mind fuck, reminding Naruto of their status and turning and tainting things Sasuke would have associated just solely with Naruto to include his brother. That was masterful, a move truly worthy of Uchiha Itachi. Naruto's reply was also masterful XD, a little not so subtle reminder that he would fucking Sasuke within an inch of his life, all night. Damn lady, maybe I read too much into subtext, but those are some dangerous games. The scene with Gaara, oooooh! Talk about dangerous games, I love how staff just appeared out of nowhere. The power plays going on in here tonight, hhmmmmmn, very very gratifying, one of the reasons I love anime so very much, all the damn power plays XD. You do them so well. This story of yours, I adore it and it's stumping me, I don't feel like anything I could say would possible express fully how I feel. Thank you, Allys.
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  • From ANON - Flameofthenight on April 28, 2007
    *Sorry I'm not logged in*
    You're writing is some of the sexiest I've ever read...and I'm not really into heavy D/s. I want to congratulate you on your skillful role switches...it makes the story even more intricate, and seems to give the characters involved firmer relationships. I do wish there was plot involved, it make everything so much more exciting!
    Thank you for the frequent updates.
    ~The Flame Reviews~
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  • From ANON - Cindy on April 28, 2007
    Ok, how about Lee to Dom Neji. I know it's OOC but I think you could make it work. :D
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  • From motacristi on April 28, 2007
    love it!! The only person I could think of being Neji's Dom is Morino Ibiki, just because he is a master of mental torture and can mentally break down Neji.
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  • From Dragon7 on April 28, 2007
    Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.
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  • From Allys on April 28, 2007
    Squee, you've totally made me fall in love with GaaShikaGaa, LOL, sounds like bad porn music - Gaa Shika Gaa Gaa XD!! LOL, so wrong - ignore me. They are definitely one of my fav couples in this fic... ... LOL, I just realised I love ALL the couples in this fic, okay maybe not the GaiLee pairing XD. God I'm so off track now, review the chapter. It's amazing how you got them to fit together, LOL, I'm very almost done with a pic I was working on the for the first ShikaGaa encounter, but now I wanna change it to GaaShika. LOL, it's too far gone for that, and the Gaara in the pic isn't really skinny at all, wiry but not skinny, anyway I'll send it later today, my brain can't seem to focus right now and I see there's another chapter, so O.O, yeah... The part about him smoking was sweet, in a gut wrenching sort of way. It made me sad, but glad all at the time and is it bad that the contents of Gaara's medicine cabinet reminded me of my brother, LOL, but then when you skateboard and do martial arts, you're bound to be real friendly with pain killers. I can't communicate how much I love this story. God, Gaara has to get Shika's stuff from Neji, LOL, they're not even gonna be in the club together an they're still gonna cause a stir. LOL, Naruto what you done XD. Wai!!!!! XD, the next chapter is a NaruSasu chappie and it's Looong XD, I'm gonna go eat and come back... It's not like you'll care or you'll know, why do I tell you these things XD LOL, It's too early in the morning to think straight - Forgive me :huggles: Allys.
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  • From ANON - arry on April 28, 2007
    love how often you update. Isnt often you see fics like this! Btw was it really only yesterday sasuke and naruto met? I thought it was two days ago since there was the night, then shopping the next day, then.... isn't this the day AFTER that? But maybe I'm just confused ^^; Gwa. Great job tho!
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  • From ANON - kitty-kun on April 28, 2007
    um for neji's dom you could put in kankuro or maybe genma or even asuma, or maybe even ibiki... just suggestion ^^ love your story keep up the good work
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  • From Digitalkisses on April 28, 2007
    Once again you blow me away with the latest chapter, this story is amazing I love everything about it, I must confess I like the Naruto/Sasuke parts best but that's because I just love those two together, even is this story is totally OC I still adore and love it.

    Can't wait till you update again, I totally understand about being busy, us fans will understand ;)
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on April 28, 2007
    Oh mistress please don't abandon your faithful!

    I loved how Naruto didn't even look at Kakashi.
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  • From ANON - Cousel on April 28, 2007
    Read this you might like it.

    http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=26666

    I thought some of the stuff there were very creative.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 28, 2007
    Chapter 5... where Sasuke "broke..."

    wow. just wow.

    that was amazingly described. i think you really captured the feelings between a dom and the sub in a way that just... was so emotional and without the reader realizing what was really happening. must. keep. reading.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 27, 2007
    aww so sweet
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