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Reviews for D/s Naruto

By : Hestia
  • From yaoiismyantidrug on April 29, 2007
    Oh my, oh my. You update too quickly for me to keep up. Am I complaining? Hell no! ^_^ Itachi's move, with the note and the check - all the subtleties... very titillating. I loved the chap with Gaara and Shikamaru - the one where they decided Shika was moving in. And the way you described that orgasm (the third one Gaara gave him, I think?)- God, I can't even remember how you said it now, but it was beautiful hyperbole, pure poetry. And - goodness, Sasuke's so far in subspace now... he's gorgeous like that. If I was in possession of a cock, I would get hard just thinking about his oh-so-sensitive and needing-to-be-touched nipples. *ahem*

    It's good to see that you're updating sooner than you said. You're making me ashamed of myself. Two weeks between updates... I should be taken out back and shot. I blame this on you. I can't write when there's soooo much good stuff to read in this fic, and it's updated like twice a day. Right? Right.

    There was a line - 'Kankurou, like Sasori, had a way of manipulating people one-on-one that Kisame was envious of.' You're doing it again, and I love it! The flawless translation from anime characters to RLish AU characters is amazing!

    And that last line... It was time to tame his bitch. Oh, yes. Oh, oh, yes. Hm hm hm. You can bet your ass I'm looking forward to THAT.

    You are awesome. Keep up the awesomeness. Please?


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  • From ANON - Anon on April 29, 2007
    gah! so hot i love you! omg i have never even heard/thought about temporary piercings! thats so hot!....i love it! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE! LOVE!
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  • From ANON - burr on April 29, 2007
    what a tease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    *speachless*
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on April 29, 2007
    Oh, mistriss. So many couples, so many people, so much drama, so much want, so much need!!!!!

    Wow.

    You've done it again. This twisted my brain in 5 different directions, and I loved it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 29, 2007
    *dreamy face* A new chapter... that corset piercing was hot, all of it was just so hot. Damn, and I love the potential tension between Naruto and Gaara. That amuses me for some reason. Hmm, but I'm content with the NaruSasu... it's so intense! I've never felt so into a scene. I feel just how Sasuke does when I read it. Egads. Mm.. who could dominate Neji in that way? And someone that hasn't been mentioned then or someone already in the club? I can't think of anyone who hasn't been mentioned. I forget Kankurou's background... crap. I don't know! But poor Naru, he's too kickass a dom to suddenly doubt himself because he can't afford that ridiculously expensive collar. I can't even describe how sexy and attractive your Naruto is... I'm done rambling though. But >.< I'm so glad you updated!!!!!!!!!! THIS MADE MY NIGHT!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Travellyr on April 29, 2007
    *giggling* Oh, Naruto, Naruto.... some things are more important than money. Besides... you're a jeweler! While I understand this means you have very little liquid assets (the rest of it being tied up in gems and metals).... I'm sure you can work something out. XD
    *Snickering HARD* Gosh... has it taken him this long to realize Gaara's a bit weird?
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  • From ANON - Travellyr on April 29, 2007
    Awh. Shika and Gaara... love. ^^
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  • From on April 29, 2007
    I admit, when I first started reading D/s, I was horrified at the utter chaos of the Master/Slave & Dominant/Submissive factor. However, now that I have read the whole thing, I congratulate you on the your wonderful writings.

    I found it hard to see Iruka as a Dominant and Kakashi as a Submissive (as you usually see it in reverse) and Iruka's odd fetish with pain and anal abuse. It was also had for me, personally, to see Naruto as Dominant and Sasuke as Submissive, because I usually read that in reverse.

    But I commend you on your story! It is wonderful and enjoyable to read. I hope that you will continue on D/s as well as you may start some other fiction!

    Best wishes,

    H.O.I.M.S.
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  • From ursweetheartless on April 28, 2007
    *stares stupidly* omfg, i have ALWAYS wanted corset piercings, ever since i discovered suicide girls in highschool (there are two absolutly gorgeous girls on there, who have corset piercings) and i have to say, i've never really understood gaara/shika, but you made it make so much sense here, and you kept shika IC, i think, which i can /never/ do so im awed on that, and naruto very carefully getting sasuke ready to go was highly highly erotic, very well done scene. and itachi, *giggles* as much as i love itachi, and im normally all for Uchihacest (is my first otp, the thing that got me into naruto actually ^.^) i feel like he's being sneaky and evil right now, so IC, and i feel sorry for naruto, and what he must think, even if i honestly don't think sasuke, the way he's been laid out here, gives a fuck what his brother thinks, and only cares about naruto, only accepts it because naruto made it, and put it on him. mmm. i really hope naruto gives sasuke a few more piercings, and maybe even a tatoo before the fic closes. i feel like a tatoo is so much more trite, but also more climactic, because while it's technically possible to get it taken off, it's much much more permenant than a piercing in reality. and naruto feeding sasuke dinner with his fingers. just... just... *dies of bloodloss* FANATIC AND STALKERISH FIC LOVE ^.^
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on April 28, 2007
    Can Neji have a female dom? just wondering. if not, then


    (5 minutes later...)

    seriously, I have no idea
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  • From Inigeshi on April 28, 2007
    yet again a sexiful chapter. i read b4 leaving my house and saw a girl on her laptop on the train reading it too. yu sure are popular in nyc... oh as for neji i think shino would be ineresing or maybe even idatae... well anyway i look forward to the next installment and what do you subscribe to?
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  • From llyoung on April 28, 2007
    Thanks for another great chapter. As for a dom for Neji - I vote for Ibiki.
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  • From ANON - burr on April 28, 2007
    ha! that was the best chapter ever! :)
    the idea of corset piercing appealed to me in particular; that would really look good on sasuke. you can get reeeally nasty infection from those, but i put faith in naruto's skills ;p. i'd draw a fanart of it but sadly i have too much projects going on, i'm a bit fed up with drawing and designing at the moment :(. anyway, the idea was great. i can imagine naruto would be a good partner in real word :)!
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  • From LifeonHiatus on April 28, 2007
    ah lovely, as expected. :-D the description of sasuke's dressing was so erotic but ooo will he be getting a tattoo also? that would be kinky. as for neji, ::thinks:: perphaps shino, he seems understanding and compliant. his yang to match neji's yin. but a really fun, but challanging guy would be KANKURO he's an awesome character and underated in most yaoi, and on the plus side he's gaara's brother, so that can make for interesting plot. update soon!
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  • From ANON - MissMayumi on April 28, 2007
    I think maybe it should be Kiba/Neji...or maybe Shino and Neji??..
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