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Reviews for D/s Naruto

By : Hestia
  • From llyoung on May 04, 2007
    Thanks for the inserted chapter with Naruto and Sasuke's session. It was very hot. Looking forward to your next update (and hoping for some more Gaara and Shika soon).
    Thanks again for writing.
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  • From ANON - burr on May 04, 2007
    that chapter was great! it was intense and really hilarious. i like it when sasuke's so short-tempered. many forget that under his non-emotional mask he's as passionate as naruto. the story's getting more and more interesting..
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  • From DevilnBlue on May 04, 2007
    omfg... I couldn't stop laughing at the last chapter... That was wow... I had never seen that coming and when Sasuke came I was like 'Oh shit' and then all hell literally broke loose. I hope Naru-chan and Sasu-kun don't get band... Can't wait to see what your devilish little mind comes with next.
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  • From Kimra on May 04, 2007
    This chapter was absolutly brilliant. You got the action and pace perfect and I found myself reconsidering it all day after reading it this morning. Excellent work. Can't wait to read the next update. :D
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  • From on May 04, 2007
    yet another brilliant chapter!
    keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 04, 2007
    wow, that was the most random chapter by far. but still amusing. i like a jealous sasuke, but i'm kind of sad lee got that far with him. maybe if it was gaara flirting with naruto >.< then sasuke would be really pissed. sasuke is such a girl, i swear. but all the cracks about him giving lousy head are so great. and poor naruto comes to his defense. (no pun intended).

    Naruto seemed different in this chapter though. Just his interaction with Itachi. I dunno. I'm not sure how I feel about Sasuke and Itachi sharing Naruto... I mean would Sasuke be okay with that since he obviously has issues with Naruto being with other people? I'm so confused! Naruto loves Sasuke, yes? But he's cool with fucking other people if Sasuke allows it? Or... prior to Sasuke barging in, he would be okay with fucking other people? But okay... then Sasuke probably has feelings for Naruto, he's just freaked out. So... would Sasuke get with someone else? I can't tell. But he doesn't want Naruto with anyone else... those two are messed up. But I just think they're good together. I don't know. I'm so biased anyway. I don't like them to share either! But what I think would be hot, if one was pissed and they did that to purposely get the other jealous (preferably Naruto with someone else)... but neither of them seem like they would do that to the other. So confused. Yet it was funny. I can't wait to see what Naruto's like as a sub. He seems like he'd do just about anything Sasuke wanted. I hope it's as hot as it was with Naru as a dom. No pressure. LOL.
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  • From ANON - Travellyr on May 04, 2007
    Oh my god, TRAINWRECK, and with half the people there just sitting and watching the floor show. *applause*
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  • From ANON - Kimberly on May 04, 2007
    Haha, that last chapter was so funny. Poor sasuke in such denial!
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  • From hisoka on May 03, 2007
    such anger, that was great cant wait to read the next ch.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 03, 2007
    Nice, that was fucking beautiful. Your story's HOT. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From Picspixie on May 03, 2007
    o m g!! you just keep getting better and better , i sooo can't wait to see what u write about when naruto subs like that hehe, i just luved how sasuke got jealous, oh yeah he's not in luv YEAH RIGHT!!! lol please update soon i want to see more sasu/naru/sasu baby yeah! lol
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  • From ANON - Cookie on May 03, 2007
    Hoah! I had the laugh out loud at Chapter 28! Of course Itachi is going to be the “weasel” since he has an emotionally controlling interest in Sasuke, but this was definitely Naruto’s chapter. I loved the fight scene (Ooo~ knifeplay just sends chills up my spine!) and the way he took over and hauled Sasuke’s ass out of the club over his shoulder. Like a good dom should! But I also liked Sasuke’s jealous rage. He’s starting to sound more like Kakashi in that he is sub-material, but he’s not a whimpy sub and doesn’t take kindly to anyone touching what his master gives him (whether its nipple clamps or blow jobs). Next!
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  • From Allys on May 03, 2007
    Okay no, Fuck that, I take it back, Itachi knows exactly what he's doing, fucking smirking bastard, XD. He coulda done this shit in private, Nooo! Has to be stupid bout it, Fiiine... W-Hat-EVER!!! XD Naruto is the smex man, I really didn't expect him to come down and lay all his shit bare like that. Most people would be ashamed, God I love him, to be that secure, he doesn't know these freaking people, that's just fucking awesome man. And OMG - I love the wax play idea, always have, I was that idiot kid that would sit and run their fingers through the flame and dip them in the wax, when ever current went and we needed candles. LOL, I used to get yelled at a lot XD. LOL, and oh yeah, more highlights - Naruto’s passionate statement might have been more believable if at that moment his eyes hadn’t crossed, and he bent forward letting out an “ooofff.” Hehehehe XD. And ZOMG! Where the Hell did Sasuke come from!! XD LOL, Oh what a mess XD. I Love it XD. Speaking of Sasuke, slap a fucking wig on him and call him Lucy, cause he's got some splainin' to do. Naruto may need to borrow Iruka's cage, O.o Damn... Oooh oooh, Or the torture thing for bad slaves from Beauty!! "String him up Naru-chan!" LOL XD. OH God and the Bitch Slap LMAO!!!! XD O.o, Did Naruto fight that whole fight with his slong swinging XD, hehehehe, Man tits, LOL XD You're gonna kill me one of these days you know. LOL, I don't think that'll Ever get old XD. Thanks you so much my Goddess, you've made my day, yet again XD. :kisses feet:
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  • From llyoung on May 03, 2007
    Good. I didn't think that Naruto was buying Sasuke's bull. Thanks for another chapter.
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  • From roro237 on May 03, 2007
    Hey, every chapter just keeps getting better and better! I'm bowing to you right now. Do you see me? :) Ch.29 was funny, hot (sexy). Sasuke gettting jealous, love it. Naruto saying Sasuke can be the only one sucking him for the rest of his life. (yea baby) The big show you have plan for Saturday. I'm drooling and sweating. I'm bowing to you once again:) Looking forward to the next!!!!!!!!!!!!
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