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By : Hestia

From Allys on May 06, 2007
On the Newer chpt 29 - LOL, so you just decided to go back and spice that shit up XD From Sweet to Hawt! in like 9 sentences, XD. You are something else - I am so hearting right now XD.

On chpt 31 - LOL, I thought that about the sand too, but I didn't want to spoil anybody's fantasy's of sex on the beach XD. This was the sweetest, nastiest, kinkiest fucking thing XD. LOL, I love that they were watching Bleach, yum - Renji, LOL. Demerol and beer, cute drunk Shika XD. I totally agree about the facial tatt's though, Gaara's is hotter, although, Renji's go all down his back, so lickable. But, the BEST, was the list. Gaara is so adorable, you write him so well - a big gauche, yet graceful ball of unrestrained violence mixed with naieve sweetness :D. LOL, and I love that Shika's fucking Kinky as all shit XD, LOL. MMmmmnn, my face hurts from grinning to hard at one o'clock in the morning. Thank you, again, Luffles you.
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From Hen on May 06, 2007
More great chapters! A question for you: is Itachi's club for men only? Or for gays only? Will we ever see Anko and Hinata there or even some het couple? Either way, you rock!
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From llyoung on May 05, 2007
Chapter 31 with Gaara and Shika was just so sweet. That was really wonderful. You are wonderful. I love this story and check multiple times a day for updates. Thank you so much for sharing your writing talent with us. I don't know how you do it but I'm very glad that you do. Thanks again.
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From ANON - aggie on May 05, 2007
Okay, very very good fic! Everything is so detailed and awesome. BUT! Please please PLEASE stop changing the order of the chapters around. Finalize the chapter order before you post, but it's confusing as hell, seriously. And a little annoying, too....
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From ANON - ClarinetCandy on May 05, 2007
Ok, I am totally hooked on "The Sound of Dreams" story and almost every chapter she puts a plug in for D/s. I thought it was some Dracula story or something so I never bothered. So last night around 10:00 pm I finished reading her chappie and she said that she loved the story D/s. O MY Fuck! I started 10:30 last night and now it is 10:21 am Saturday. WOW. 12 hours straight! Really good. Passion, sex, bondage, humor. It has everything! Would write more but sooooo tired. happy Cinco de Mayo!
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From ANON - Anon on May 05, 2007
wow, the shika/gaara chapter really put a new spin on things. i loved how we got to see the domestic side of things. i enjoy reading about the subs when they're really getting into it. it's like i can actually feel it too, and my heart starts beating a little faster. and you kind of wish you had something like that *sigh* i just live in the wrong part of the country i guess. and all the little details about shikamaru cooking and how he didn't do that for neji and now he does it for gaara. and the way you described gaara... just... so wild, but obviously he has a gentle streak. i personally love gaara. i think he's a great character so i want him to be happy >.< it's good to see... kind of... if they're a committed pairing that not only do they, well, have sex but there's still someone to come home to, that cleans, that takes care of dinner.

*sigh* i'm almost jealous of them, damn it. thank you for another chapter. i hope you're not exhausting yourself with all the writing. i love this story so much, but i don't want you to get burnt out writing it. unless you don't mind updating as much as you do. i love it when there is one though, it's the first story i'd read. thank you!!!
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From MissMayumi on May 05, 2007
mmmm..i loved the shika/gaara part!..it was yummilicious!...please let the next chapter be about Naruto getting two cocks up his ass..(Sasuke and Itachi's cocks to be exact)!!
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From llyoung on May 05, 2007
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you so much for the Gaara/Shika chapter. I loved it - it was wonderful. Thanks again.
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From Allys on May 05, 2007
Now that's what I'm talking about. That was thing of beauty. Lyrical and warm, filling up the senses. Balmy May nights, with moonlight and white sand; gorgeous red heads, and Shika in curls. They were so in accord, so Right - Without a smidgeon of doubt. Do you think either Uchiha will ever reach that place? Be able to finally let go like that? That's the goal here - the Gold standard. That thing to measure everything else against. And oh my God the house, that place, can I go live there? With them? I won't make a peep, I promise. A fly on the wall, a sensational jasmine covered wall. Fantastic. I adore you, @--'-,---
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From HumanInfiltrator on May 05, 2007
Mistress.

Thank you.
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From Sapphirexkat2 on May 05, 2007
can't wait for next Saturday!!!
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From Selow on May 05, 2007
ahaha omg... sasuke and man tit... great chapter of comic relief XD
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From ANON - Anon on May 05, 2007
Thank you thank you thank you thank you for the new scene with the toilet brush. I feel like I don't even deserve to have this story be updated as much as it is. OMG I just about cried to see this chapter up! It was so good. Poor Sasuke, but it's just sooo damn hot. And Naruto is so good. Ah, I can't get enough of this story, damn it. And I'm STILL dying to see what Naruto is like as a sub. I can't even flipping take it!!!! I LOVE YOU. I can't control the level of fangirling. Thank you for the chapter, thank you for the story. It is THE BEST. MORE, please. Whenever you want, but don't stop!
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From Allys on May 05, 2007
Oh God... first off I have to say that with that ending, it makes the next chapter even more heart-breaking. Oh God ;_; poor Naruto. I really don't fucking blame him for just getting up and leaving. I mean I didn't before, but now... :sigh: and then Sasuke, begging: punish him, do whatever to him, just don't make him watch someone else serve his master ;_; that puts a whole new spin on the fight. Poor Sasuke, thinking: look what I did for you, I fucked a toilet brush for you, and not 15 mins after you leave me, you've got your cock down someone else's throat. I don't know what I'd do if I were either of them, but hey need to fix it soon, that's one of those things that will not benefit from having slept on it. You didn't seem as into the smut as you usually are, but it was still really Hott. I definitely enjoyed the beginning with Naruto showing his sadistic side - Don't shake? O.o Don't shiver? O.O Yeah I'd be failing that test, Horribly, LOL. Oh god and the dancing XD, I was torn between wanting to laugh and biting my lip and fanning, Damn... do we ever get to find out how Sasuke knows how to dance? I mean it could just be natural genius, but hmmn... I know what was missing - that in depth view you give that sinks me into the character so very far, that I forget myself. It came out to play when Sasuke was dancing for Naruto, again some parts of that were just mmmnn spectacular, and the lashes with the crop, and the descriptions of the ribbons moving. Hmmn, but I'm kinda sad that I didn't get to see the actual pleasuring you promised at the end, I missed the rush of overwhelming feelings. I also wish we could have seen at least a little bit of Sasuke's pov - I guess that's how I know I'm not cut out to be a Dom :smirks: I'd always be wondering what was happening on the other side. I missed being in subspace. That's the fantastic thing about your writing; just reading the words can bring me to within an inch of that place, where all I want to be is a good little girl and have someone to please. Do I need to tell you, I think you're awesome, or did you get that ;D, LOL. Don't let us pressure you, write what you want to write. Thank you so much for the update, it's always nice to know you care :D, Luv and huggles, Allys.
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From ANON - Jen on May 04, 2007
I love you story btw! I don't know if I've reviewed before but I'm a big fan of bdsm, particularly the D/s portion of it. I love the way you write and being the grammar and spelling fanatic that I am, I'm happy to say you don't have many, dare I say none at all, typos or mis-spellings. My comment comes not about your story but your chapter naming. With all the inserted chapters that are coming before the newest chapter, it's a little hard to decipher which chapter is new because a different chapter has NEW next to it as well. I thought maybe you could change some of the chapter names so only one chapter at a time says NEW next to it, and it might clear it up a bit for those people who have been reading for a while. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Jen.
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