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Reviews for D/s Naruto

By : Hestia
  • From llyoung on May 15, 2007
    Thanks for another update. Would love to see how Gaara/Shika, Kankuro/Shino and Iruka/Kakashi spent the rest of their Sunday too.
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  • From cynaga on May 15, 2007
    I don't understand why Sasuke would want to have sex with Sai and involve Naruto too. I thought the Master/Slave relationship was special/exclusive? Am I wrong here?If I would have been Naruto, I would have left.

    I really like Neji and Sai though -- somehow since they are both willing to share, it makes it seem ok and fun.

    Much appreciation for the wonderful and incredibly fast updates!
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  • From ANON - Niemand^^ on May 15, 2007
    I really really like your fanfiction.
    One of my favorits and some of the best D/s I' ve ever read. Normally I'm total in NaruKaka and even I don't like some of the pairings (like Kakashi and Iruka normally I can't see them together), you made it work quite nice in my mind.^^

    By your form of writing and describing it's possible for me to imagine the characters in all situations/suroundings/emotional states. (It's like a little film is playing in front of my mental eyes) And it seems their way of behaving and acting together is so natural and inartifical (I allways thought that kakashi ist a born sub, but I never thougth about Sasuke or Itachi! in that line. But it so fits^x^). Even it's not possible for Konoha at least not in this extend (They would get killed caused by decreased walking abillity^^ But therefore it's an AU *grin*.)

    I'm so looking forward to Kakashis punishment. He deserves it *yup*
    I really would like to see him together (one session, maybe punishment for misbehaving/mistreating another sub (meant is sasuke and that cock sucking action *smile*)with Naruto.
    Actually in your fic it's the first time I see Naruto as a real dom (love Narudom suits him), but sometimes I can't get rid of the feeling, that Iruka is right. He needs some retraining *drop* But Iruka could also use some. His panic about Narutos whereabouts even made me nervous. Poor Kashi. He needs a strong hand. *grins*


    ah I nearly forget: your fast and regular updates are a real brownie point.

    So I hope I didn't made too many mistakes (mother tongue is not english)and you understand what I mean (expressing myself is much more difficult than reading and understanding^^°)
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on May 15, 2007
    I'm so glad Naruto and Sasuke are getting their shit together. And I really love Sai's collar... And Kisame collared his bitch!!! Yay... I'm really digging the plot you've got going on. And, oh-- thank you thank you thank you for the unexpected dash of KakaSasu. *drools* It was really interesting to see Kakashi in his own world, at the dojo, behaving normally... and then slipping so quickly into his slave persona when Iruka blew his top.

    Once again, I loooove this fic!!
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  • From LindyStar on May 15, 2007
    Hey, I'd like to send you something I wrote as a sort of extra KisaIta scene- I wanted something more dramatic, and so I actually wrote something. It is really bad with punctuation, but I just wanted to share. My email is montanawildhack@2die4.com
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 15, 2007
    Rofl. "I'm so happy to see you."

    That was aboslutely hilarious! :F
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  • From Digitalkisses on May 15, 2007
    *can't stop laughing* O god.. this had to be the cutest, funniest chapter your wrote sofar, the idea of Naruto dressed up like a business man and Sasuke being all dom towards him, he has no clue what's in store and then him calling Neji.. Ooooo that will be hot :D but knowing Naruto he will probably turn the tables on Sasuke and have him beg to be fucked in minutes.

    Great chapter hon, you brighten up my morning with your writing :)
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on May 14, 2007
    Mistress you have atained new levels of evilness. How could you stop in such an inauspisious place?

    I do however thank you for updating, I was starting to develop cravings. Please update soon.
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  • From Allys on May 14, 2007
    ROFLMAO!!!!! This was just way too funny XD. I Love IT!! Everything was funny - Naruto's opinion on the restaurant, the clothes, the wine, the wine sommelier XD. Oh God him bumping into George was the Greatest!!! "I'm so happy to see you, George" LMAO!!! I can't wait for the next chappie, you are so fantastic, one minute it's all angsty the next it's just Great Freaking Fun XD. Oh and p.s. You and Paul could lime after that comment about parents :D LOL, he always said people should beat them instead of the children O.o XD. Oh LOL, I forgot - Lime = hang out.
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  • From ANON - cfox on May 14, 2007
    wow you are continuneing to impress me whith your knowledge of the S&M scene. I like how you are working out there problems as I was worreid that Naruto might lose his Sasuke. Nice to see Ibiki, he is one of my favorites and I only wish they would do more with him in the managa. I hope you use Ibiki well in this story , and maybe we could see some of the Uchiha's parents on what they think about there sons new pet satus.

    Thankyou for the quick updates.
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  • From AnimeCookie on May 14, 2007
    So, Sasuke does know how to push Naruto’s buttons to make him feel totally uncomfortable and humiliated. I liked the way he did it; instead of putting him into the traditional bondage restraints, he emerged Naruto into different socially foreign and unconfortable settings, knowing that somewhere, Naruto was going to mess up. And then to call, of all people, Neji, in on the punishment session. Naruto did say he'd do anything to get Sasuke. But I see that we’ve got a new plot wrinkle regarding Naruto’s lineage. At least we can see from his reaction that, although Sasuke is into humiliation, he’s not into cruelty. Still, I can’t wait to see Naruto get some well-deserved payback!

    Cookie ~
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  • From ANON - ras on May 14, 2007
    naruto, naruto, naruto. he is some kind of sub he is. he's hilarious. but i think sasuke is awesome for forcing neji to punish naruto. how humiliating would that be. even i'm cringing at the thought of that. yikes. i wonder how naruto will take it. and now we have history on his dad, i wonder what that's about. lovely chapter. and i agree with naruto... is that all sasuke can do as a dom or did he do it so that naruto would feel humiliated and insecure? because i think that's a good idea really, getting naruto out of his element. otherwise he'd feel too comfortable.
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  • From ANON - JaeFire on May 14, 2007
    I adore your story, it's my favorite Naruto fanfic. I especially love your NaruSasu and GaaShika, and I have to say you are amazing because you're turning me on to KankuShino, a pairing that never entered my mind. But man, Chapter 44 -- Sasuke really does do his best as an uke. His domming makes me cringe, especially for poor Naruto. All the things he's coming up with--there's almost no sexual edge, just embarrassment. I can't wait until Naruto doms again. Again, your work is absolutely delicious.
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  • From llyoung on May 14, 2007
    I would be as uncomfortable as Naruto at that restuarant myself. Liked the humor and the angst and love how you keep bringing elements from "Naruto" into your story.
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  • From Mako75 on May 14, 2007
    Holy fucking god! That must have been the hottest fantasy I've ever heard about, ever! fuck! I'm feeling ridiciously hot right about now!
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