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By : Hestia

From Allys on June 07, 2007
ZOMG!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Belated as it is. You have to tell people when it's your birthday, so we can get you stuff!! What would you like? Anything I can do, just ask. You know I love you too ♥. Thanks so much for the website, I'm gonna go drool as soon as I'm done here XD.

Chapter 59: I'm gonna have to say WOW, goddess lady you're taking this whole narcotised sex thing to a completely new level. That was amazing, I'm loving the entire idea of sounding. that can't be a one time thing right? Other couples need to participate! This chappie is so going in the books, damn, but that was good. If you ever did write anyone as actually high it would be ridiculously fun, makes me think of doujinshi I read where Saske sticks a vial of some potent aphrodisiac up Naruto's butt XD. LOL, it was fun, those things are always too short though. My absolute favourite part though was when the bugs told Kanky that their God had gone out to hunt, LMAO, that was just the best, i was dying, you rock.

The KisaIta chapter was awesome as well. I loved that. It was nice to see them do something sweet, and Kisame having to get on his knees and give thanks was just fucking priceless. I adore them, not just because Kisame is a big hunk a chunk of lovely black man with a voice I swear I can hear, grumbling deep down from his toes. Or that Itachi is the absolute epitome of what a bishie is meant to be XD. It's how you write them, it's all about you really.

Hmmn, why'd you give money? Not that that's a bad thing, websites need support and I do it all the time. But you can get the majority of the bleach eps for free from narutomania.com, they're direct download .avi files. You gotta get past the bounto arc too, I'm telling you Ulquiorra is the smex.

I have a suggestion to help with rereading, since we all love to, maybe you could indicate which couple each chapter focuses on. Something simple like

chapter 59 KankyShino

or even just

chapter 59 KS

I don't think anyone's initials double over, no wait Neji and Sai fuck it up, LOL, you could put NS, NeS.

Anyway love, thanks so much for the update. The only good thing about having a whole lot of work is that when I get back here there's a whole lot to read :). Thanks and huggles ♥.
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From sweetciel on June 07, 2007
Just heavenly! I lap up your written word like sasuke laps up his own cum. I LOVE YOU AND YOUR FRICKIN' AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Kimikiumi on June 07, 2007
I finished reading this fanfic in a day ... I think I died and went to heaven! *-* You're awsome! Please update soon! Love the SaiNejiSai!
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From ANON - Sigart on June 07, 2007
Wow.

Okay, so I'm not really interested in anything but the NaruSasu bits, (and then maybe Gaara and Shika) but... holy fucking... excuse the language, I can find no other way to show my appreciation.

I am looking very much forward to reading the rest of your story here, very much.

...I feel like I should say something intelligent. Oh well XD
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From ANON - Mademoiselle_LaCroix on June 07, 2007
.....aaaww.....They are turning into cuties......^-^......poor Itachi.....he should get a piercing, too....XD....Maybee for his birthday on saturday...
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From Reyn on June 07, 2007
Ew, you paid for your Bleach episodes? Bad site. You should have gone to Bleachportal.net The episodes there are all .rm files, which mean they can only be played on realplayer (which you can dl for free if you don't already have it), but the fact that the file sizes are smaller overall mean you can dl more faster and still have room on your harddrive when its over.
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From ANON - HallowsEve on June 07, 2007
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
I was wondering if we could see Sai dom?
also something which i would love to see is putting one of the in heels(or not) and trying there feet together and have they walk around like cleaning or something please. i am a bondage whore and when you have your feet together and you are trying to walk around it is so humiliating thing to do also one of the best things to watch people the person tied up ends up normal nearly crying or cumming and if you want to make it worse tie there hands behide there back.
belts leave red marks and sting to high heaven but they are like a paddle only normaly longer and stings alot more
but pain wise it goes (lightest) Hand, paddle , belt , double paddle (leather folded) , wooden paddle ,riding crops, cane ,wet can , (heaviest) i hope that heaps.
- HallowsEve

p.s i love your work and can't wait for more even if you are the goddess of posting.
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From poppyseed on June 06, 2007
Yay, I've caught up. And at the rate you update I was worried I would never be able to catch up, not that that's a bad thing! I could continue to read this forever. How have you not ran out of ideas yet? And the sound. Oh, I love sound chapter, but I don't think I've seen anybody but hieisfiredemon write anything about it though. There should be more! Oh maybe Kank can teach Gaara how to do it to Shika. I love Gaara with just about anybody. Mmmmm. Metal inside cocks.

Okay, well enough obsessing about it. You're amazing, pure and simple. I bow to your knowledge of D/s and your ability to continually come up with inventive scenes, and definitely your ability to juggle all the different pairings. You deserve a comment for every chapter, but I hope this one long review will make up for it, or I'll be at the computer all night long typing my praise! Oh yeah, and can't wait for Sasuke to get his beanpole pierced!
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From ANON - phoenixfirekitsune on June 06, 2007
OMG! I absolutely LOVE this story. I've been reading this story for a while, but never got the chance to review because someone would always pull me away from my computer or have to beta a story for which I am SO SORRY! AH! I can't believe that I haven't had the chance to review until now! *cries in the corner* I'm such a terrible person. My reviews will hopefully be more frequent now that I finally have the chance to actually write them down because this has got to be one of my favorite stories of all time. *sighs* I worship this story. I truly do. Once again I am SO SORRY for not writing a review before! T_T
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From gazelovr on June 06, 2007
I just had to write and tell you that...I LOVE YOU!! You're writing just sucked me right in. I love all the different character pairs and how they interact with one another. I'm loving the NaruSasu/SasuNaru, but am totally loving the GaarShika too! There is just something about the whole BDSM theme that is so hot! This is only my second story based on such a theme (first being ffpanda's Depravity [Gravitation], unfinished) and I am just completely enamored with the whole story!! I can't wait to see what kinking things Gaara is going to do to Shika and how far they'll push each others limits (I'd like to see Shika fuck Gaara again though, onegaishimasu!)I also wonder about what other toys Kankurou has stashed away. I can't wait for Sasuke's piercing too, I'd also like to vote for the library scene too!! Oooh, I just can't wait to keep reading about all the characters!! I just can't stop reading and re-reading all you've written! I love you!! Thanks for all your hard work and dedication!
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From llyoung on June 06, 2007
Happy (late) birthday.

I'm glad you decided on Ichigo and Renji for Shika and Gaara.

I forgot to mention earlier that I liked the way that you had Itachi humming Barry White since that fits in very sweetly with the songs that Kisame sings to him.

Glad to hear that Gaara/Shika is coming up soon and that you plan on an Ibiki one next. I do like Ibiki (along with Shika and Kakashi he is one of my favorite Naruto characters).
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From Inigeshi on June 06, 2007
Wow great chapters!

i really love kisame's reaction! funny i never expected that he would pray... the chapter with shino was a little confusing at first when kanky started to halucinate rapture (either one). all in all you still have me hooked on this story.
grins like an idiot (yet again)
good job!

Inigeshi

P.S.
(not that you might but...)
heh my mom was playing barry white in the car and i couldn't help but laugh and blush. my face was bright red and my skin is kinda like a coffee with milk color (b4 you stir) yeah they thought i was sick.
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From llyoung on June 06, 2007
I enjoy reading Kisame and Itachi. Thanks for another unique chapter.
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From HumanInfiltrator on June 06, 2007
I agree Mistress. Simply indescribable.
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From ANON - ObsidianLace on June 06, 2007
I'm at a loss. This story is just...gah!...can't even find the words for it. I could kick myself for not reviewing earlier. I think I started reading it when it was on chapter 30 something. No excuses, none at all.

I think my favorite part of the whole thing is how you write in the emotions that come with each action. How, even when they're being punished, they're feeling love or pleasure or some other thing along with it. I can finally understand the bdsm stuff. I've been interested in it for a while but was much to sheltered/scared to go out and find more about it. You've all of a sudden become my teacher and window into that world.
But back to your glorious story.
I LOVE Kisame. Period. If Itachi hadn't snatched him up I would have. I don't know what made you have him to be a black man but I could kiss the muse that did. It's a stroke of genius.

And speaking of genius....Shikamaru and Gaara. Holy shit. Gaara's backyard is fucking awesome! Both of their personalities are so cohesive to the other. I'm alternately sighing and fanning myself.

Lee and Gai made me laugh my ass off.

Neji and Sai are a match made in heaven. The way they met was priceless. I mean, of course, the first time they were scening together and Sai wrote that he wanted to rape him. Kinda felt bad for Neji but it was good for the long run.

Kankuro and Shino. Dear Lord, I'm in love. The latest developments of these two are pure gold. I'm glad Kankuro was able to help Shino and I'm glad Shino is able to like/love Kankuro despite him not being totally handsome.

Iruka and Kakashi have issues. But they're good issues. You go so in depth with Kakashi's character that it's good to see you picking up on Iruka's now. I was so shocked when Iruka took Kakashi to Manda's for his punishment that my jaw dropped. Orochimaru creeped me out muchly btw. That was a good way of showing just how much Kakashi letting Sasuke suck him pissed off his master. The scene back at the club where Iruka was crying and Kakashi was oblivious under the table nearly had ME in tears. I'm ecstatic that things are better with them now.

Ibiki and Kotetsu. I'm drowning in the overpowering love and hotness of that relationship. It fuels my inner romantic in so many ways.

Naruto and Sasuke. HOLYSHITOMFGKILLMENOW! Can I bow at your feet now oh Mistress? Words fail me. They're just so them. I don't know how you do it. Everything they do is different then what they've done in the past. The way they go back and forth between dom and sub, love and hate, is inspiring. It gives a depth to their relationship that most authors don't go into. I sit and read in wonder, wondering what they're going to go through next. Will something scare Sasuke off for good? Will Naruto get sick of Sasuke's flip flopping? Is Itachi going to be a problem for the love/lust birds? *sigh* Marvelous.

Kisame and Itachi. If you change anything about them I will hunt you down and whip you with a wet noodle! *glare* Itachi is perfect for Kisame and Kisame is perfect for Itachi. That you didn't have Itachi immediately fall over at the chance to be Kisame's sub gave you a dozen brownie points in my book. Having him think it through and then come to the realization that he really and truly loved him took some damn good writing. When he opened up that safe and saw all the tapes and the necklace I gasped and got teary eyed. When Kisame opened the door and picked Itachi up while singing to him, I really did start crying.

Hestia-sensei, for you really are my teacher now, I'm truly enjoying this story. You've done a wonderful job in the writing of it and by writing I mean the grammar and technicalities as well as the content. It does my English major heart good. I think this is the longest review I've ever written but you're well worth it.

Allys too I want to thank for being an excellent beta and artist.

*smooch* Luv ya both!

Continue to teach me sensei and I'll be forever grateful.
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