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Reviews for D/s Naruto

By : Hestia

From Allys on July 21, 2007
LOL, OMG I would have paid money to see that game XD. Oh wait it's under water. Damn LOL. I felt kinda bad for Kanky and Shino, just for a second, but they'll figure it out, that kind of love is not as far away as they think ;D. God I'm all excited about the fitting and piercing session planned with Naruto too. Oh and p.s. Cock torture ROCKS, LOL, only when they stay hard for it and beg for it again XD. Shika and Sasuke have uke sexiness down pat, Oh GOD and ice cubes, that would be like torture in itself but exquisite not quite torture, I'm so jealous, LOL, boy's can do so much more things than girls, LOL that's why Yaoi is so much fun. And ohh, the sweetness at the end. This is so why I adore your stories, LOL (yes still thinking about it) I love that they have everything I could ever want from a story, the angst, the love, the sweetest and hottest moments ever XD. :Huggles you: Thanks so much for the update love.
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From Kerrisa on July 20, 2007
YAY!!! That was marvelous!!! All this love =( makes me so teary eyed =( I love it all so much T_T I love you too Hestia-sama!!!
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From Gwyllion on July 20, 2007
Ahhh....AFF ate my comments! O__O Rewritten: T__T

OMG....3 extra chappies here to read! What absolute heaven! Thank you thank you thank you!
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From ANON - dragon (again) on July 20, 2007
I forgot to mention that I would really like to see some progress in Kankoru and Shino. I know they enjoy being with each other, and I'm not just talking about sex but company. But I can't get a feeling of where they are going and where they stand.

Once again take care.

`dragon
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From ANON - dragon on July 20, 2007
To discover that you had posted not one but two chapter and not being able to read them was painful! I had visits and I just couldn't simply read!!
I just woke up really early today just to read them in peace.
You are very welcome from the corrections. I honestly thought someone had told you.
On Sasuke and Naruto I was drooling, and I just love how you go from kinky to hilarious in a minute.
I feel kinda sad for Naruto and I honestly I don't think I could explain why.
As for the newest chapter I was just floating on air! It was a beautiful chapter!!
I specially like this : "Public sex was common in the D/s world, but this sort of intimacy that seemed to shimmer between his brother and his pretty coffee-colored slave was something rare and extraordinary."
Oh my! Then the last part of the chapter! So emotional!! I love it!!!
Please keep writing!!
Take care.
`dragon
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From snowren on July 19, 2007
Several comments I want to make about the recent chapters:
1. Sasuke's piercings are hot! Any fan art for what they look like?
2. Correct me if I'm wrong. If Sasuke has collared Naruto, that would make them close to a marriage couple. It's amazing Naruto's still clueless.
3. Sex between Gaara and Shikamaru always looks so painful! But extremely erotic!!!Maybe there are other things that Gaara can put in Shika. Hmmm......

Lastly, just want to say that you are so great. Your updates definitely make my days!
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From AnimeCookie on July 19, 2007
In a very strange and perversed way, I don't know who to be happier for - Shikamaru or Gaara. Well done!

Cookie~
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From ANON - susanna on July 19, 2007
Where to begin... I enjoy reading BDSM-stories, and most of all S/D - I don't need a lot od blood and violence.

I enjoy as well Sasunaru, or Narusasu, as you want, and so I decided to try this story.

And still - it felt weird to read about Sasuke subbing. He is my favorite character, and I want to see him strong and independent, even though I would like him to be in love as well. On the other hand side - your story is psychologically plausible. He is extremely lonely, living among people who don't care for him, even wanted him dead, though he is family. He has learnt to survive buy caring only about himself, by staying apart, by not getting involved. No wonder that the first person who cares for him has him ready to sub and gets him deeply immersed in subspace - as if it was all Sasuke wanted to do - giving himself up into the hands of someone who loves him...

And still it seemed not right. I could not understand how one can hurt a person one loves... I thought: If he loves him, he should help him unfold his personality, not just make him sub...

(I read BDSM, but I have never tried it myself, and I don't think that I ever will...)

I kept reading, hoping that one day Sasuke and Naruto would manage to transform their relationship into one that is not about domming and subbing, but based on equality.

And now I read your most recent chapters, and I am really happy. Sasuke speaking up while he is subbing, helping Naruto to find Haku and a foundation to him, even offering a million bucks. That's not a slave subbing to please his master, but a lover caring for what his lover wishes at the deepest depth of his heart and helping him make it true.

Then he boldly tells about his idea how Naruto should be dressed.

And then I love it how they quickly change roles when Baki is around, and in the end of the chapter it seems as if they have changed again, without a clear line, and perhaps it is a first step out of the roles of dom and sub...

So I hope that what I consider a happy end will come true: Sasuke and Naruto in a relationship based on equality. I know that others might consider an end where Sasuke realizes that he will be happiest as a 24/7-slave for Naruto a better and happier ending...

Maybe I am a bit weird.

I am curious how you continue your story! I enjoy reading the smut, even though sometimes I feel a bit disturbed, everything is well-written, full of detail and one sees that you have done your homework. (I guess it was rather fun.)

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From HumanInfiltrator on July 19, 2007
Mistress, thank you for the quick updates! So many of our couples are so happy that I almost feel like crying. I like that not all of them fall immediately so completely it gives their relationships authenticity, especially Kankuro and Shino, they just have too much baggage for that. Can't wait to see what's up with Ibiki and do we even want to know what Sai is up to??
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From Lances on July 19, 2007
Marvelous, once again! I love this so much I can't go on a day without re-reading some of the chapters! *kiss*
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From cynaga on July 19, 2007
Better and better - amazing.
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From llyoung on July 19, 2007
Gaara threatening to fill Shika's ass with ice cream again
causing Kankuro the miss the ball and loose the game was
so funny. Loved Shino's line about the judo match looking
like incest. I felt a little sorry for Shino and Kankuro though
it was so sweet and right that they could see the love and devotion
Shika and Gaara have for each other. Poor Gaara just couldn't
concentrate on volleyball after Naruto's call. And of course the
scene and the aftermath was just wonderful absolutely wonderful.
Thank you for such a great chapter. I really enjoyed it. I really love
Gaara/Shika together and you make their relationship come alive.
And love has really changed Gaara that is just so perfect. Thanks
again for writing and for another update so quickly.

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From DuosAngel on July 19, 2007
Ah, I think Gaara and Shika are my favorite couple in this. I just can't get enough of them. But I do want to see what everyone else is up to.
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From Criticalsunshine on July 19, 2007
I loved the scene where Haku and Naruto were gabbing away like a bunch of school girls!! IcePrincess and Foxy!! Sasuke getting pierced was so hot... I cannot wait for the Dwaynes dinner!! That is gonna be sooooo much fun. Especially with company! Although with our two hot couples banned from Uchiha's whats gonna happen?? So much stuff has happened that it really really is amazing it's only been like 4 days. I think I like some of the chapters where more then one couple is featured. It sorta shows what's happening at the same time better. Although the detail on only one couple is unbearably hot too.. Arghh I can't choose... Hope you update soon soon soon! I wanna see Naruto in a red shirt!! And I think George is a total riot btw! Jealousy scenes anywhere?? Iruka freak out is the god!
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From ANON - Rasengan22 on July 19, 2007
dear...... lord. i was just all bored tonight cuz there wasn't anything to read and I thought for sure since you'd updated twice already it either wouldn't be updated or it it did, it wouldn't be sasuke and naruto.

but........................ that just made my week, i think. that was so hot again. you'd think i'd get tired of it or something, but i just love each scene more and more as they grow to care about each other, and as naruto was going on about how he'd do anything at this point i was like, oh gosh, sasuke caging naruto? i love when sasuke's dom. i didn't think i would because i didn't know if i could see him as one, but dang, when he is a dom and naruto melts into goo, it makes the feeling of their sex so freaking intense. i always want more after scenes like this. but oh it was so goooooooood!
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