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Reviews for D/s Naruto

By : Hestia
  • From ANON - dragon on August 10, 2007
    Hello!
    Nice emotional chapter. I'm glad that Genma finally was able to let go of his past.
    I was wow'ed at the end with what Ibiki was thinking. Makes you wonder about his past as well.
    I thought the kick that Raidou gave Genma was a bit much, and you didn't warn us about the peeing.
    I was grossed out, I was so happy that I didn't have anything in my stomach or was eating for that matter.
    But on the overall of this chapter it was wonderful. Just let Genma be claimed!
    I'm looking forward to the dinner that you will have and see Naruto's reaction. Will his father make an appearance? Maybe give Naruto a few million dollars for his foundation as well as a few more for Naruto himself, so then he could get the collar for Sasuke?? What will Sasuke say anyway? I can't wait for what comes next whatever it is!!
    Take care!!
    `dragon

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  • From kaio on August 10, 2007
    Wonderful like always. Gen's thought pattern breaks my heart and yet gives me so much hope. I'm eager to read the next part with these three, but also torn at wanting to get to the dinner scene!

    You also have a typo in the scene where Ibiki is telling them what to/not to shave. "when I leave, stop staving everything from the waist to the collarbone." staving through me for a loop, then i realized it was 'shaving', lol.
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  • From llyoung on August 10, 2007
    Thanks for another chapter of Ibi/Gen/Rai. Wonderful emotional break
    throughs for all three of the characters. The bed scene was written
    beautifully. I really do enjoy reading about these three. Look forward
    to more of them in the future and the other chapters you mentioned.
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on August 10, 2007
    Mistress, thank you. Your writing has allowed me to escape my own problems as well. As always you have found the perfect solution to the problem and I'm sure these three will be very happy together. I'm still concerned for Sai though, there is still the dark cloud of his past hanging over him and Neji. I'm looking forward to seeing how you will resolve this. Again thank you and please keep on writing.
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  • From Julissis on August 10, 2007
    1000!!!!

    Congratulations. ^___^ Your fic really deserves it.

    But i wonder, will you involve shikaku somehow? I know, i know, there are soo many chars already. ^^´
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  • From ANON - dragon (yet again!!) on August 10, 2007
    I'm tellin' ya!
    I'm coo-dependent of this fic!
    I promise this is the last review for tonight, only if you don't post anything soon though!

    Can we get an update on Hiashi and Kimimaru? Sai and Neji? Kankoru and Shino? Or with Naruto and Sasuke? Their new nameless foundation?

    PLEASE!!

    Ok, I'll stop now.

    TC!
    `dragon
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  • From ANON - dragon (again) on August 10, 2007
    One more thing!
    Is Haku going to show some passion per say?
    He is too passive.
    I want to read how Zabuza reacts. Ha!

    Going back to Naruto/Sasuke I went to chapter 58/59, and re-read that they start to make love, but then they go wild from there, so at this point I don't know any better.
    Also could you explain a bit more about what Itachi feels or felt for Sasuke? I'm really confused in that aspect.
    Does he desire Sasuke for what happened before or feels the only way to feel close to his brother is through physical contact? Or what?

    Take care!!
    `dragon
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  • From ANON - dragon on August 10, 2007
    Hello!
    How you doing?
    I was re-reading some of the chapters and number 57/58 got my attention.
    In it Naruto was trying to make love to Sasuke, but in the end Sasuke was too much of a slut to want it.
    I just want to ask if they will ever do it in this fic, make love I mean. What with Sasuke saying that no-one has ever make love to him and such.
    I repeat my questing will it happen?
    One a side note...
    Thanks for labeling the chapters with the pairings, it makes it a lot easier to find the chapters with the pairings I like the most.
    Take care.
    `dragon
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  • From kaio on August 09, 2007
    I absolutely adore you for adding the pairings into the chapter headings. Now when I want to go re-read a specific chapter I can go straight to it ^.^ you may be the coolest thing since sliced bread.
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  • From ANON - Saru on August 09, 2007
    You are wonderful

    Im madly in love with you.

    and I would not care if you did not write anymore, because youre are that wonderful.

    dont get me wrong, more is great.

    thank you.

    you make pathetic lil me happy.

    :)
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  • From llyoung on August 09, 2007
    Love the additions of the dates/times and the pairings for each chapter.
    thanks

    So sorry to hear about Tommie - Bear and I are thinking of him.
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  • From ANON - ArtDuncan on August 09, 2007
    I'm glad you got to re-title the chaps. I'm totally rested now, so this is even better. Who woulda thunk? I really like Genma's POV, the struggle between the id and the superego. *sigh* So primal.
    -Misia
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  • From Julissis on August 09, 2007
    Wow, you are reaching 1000 reviews. XD
    I love your story and it's originality though i've never reviewed a chapter before. I'm a lazy ass..
    So, i will help to reach 1000 now. ^^

    Ah.. and i would LOVE to read much, much more. (especially kashi/ruka and gen/rai)

    Keep it on. ^^
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  • From gaara89 on August 09, 2007
    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - S_R on August 09, 2007
    I like how you've started editting in the time frame and the pairings, though it doesn't really matter to me anymore since I just always read the whole thing over again. But I guess it'll be handy for me when I'm looking for a particular chapter.

    I still really love each chapter, it's so good, and I'm fond of every pairing, except not that interested in Iru/Kaka/Iru.
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