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By : Hestia

From ANON - dragon (yes it's me yet again) on August 17, 2007
"oh, and we need Mr. Akatsuki back. Can you call him and tell him that Mr. Neji will need something like what he did for Ms. Anko for his Sai..."
Who is Mr. Akatsuki and what did he do for Neji whic (I think it was) for Anko? Will we know soon?

`dragon
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From ANON - dragon on August 17, 2007
Holly Shite!!
Was it only me or chapter 73/72 changed?
I don't remember reading Neiji at his office before the last chapter so far, which I thought it was 83/82 but now is 84/83...?
I'm confused. @.@;;
In any case I think it was just me. Good chapter anyway, as Sai said is only what Hiashi earned.
TC!
`dragon
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From sweetciel on August 16, 2007
The best sai/neji chapter to date! It was both romantic and tragic at the same time. They melded into each other with such grace and ease it was hard to tell whether you should say 'awww' or cry. *bows before you* I am unworthy.
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From ANON - Aleasha on August 15, 2007
Hey, just like to say that this fanfic is awsome. Its seriously my fetish, its horrible, I think Ive read it probably 5 times all the way from beginning to end, nevermind reading my favorite parts over and over again. I really like ur sexy spin off of the Naruto characters, unlike most, its sexy to read AND its actually got a good plot behind the loads of smut (which I love). I gotta say my favorite couple are Gaara and Shikamaru, which is not a couple that are usually put together in a Naruto fanfic, but now I cant seem to be able to see those characters with anyone but eachother. I also really like your Neji/Sai couple, and I love how you've created a really dynamic Sai character, I love how he seems to change so much, because of Neji. All your characters are absolutely perfect, and they make the read so much more, even though all the smut makes it super by itself. So pretty much to sum this all up, I really love your fanfic, its a little obsession of mine. And so keep up the good work :D
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From ANON - dragon on August 15, 2007
Very nice.
I hadn't read this chapter earlier because I was caught by a FMA fic and it wouldn't let me go until it was read.
I'm just really glad that you just had one new chapter so I wasn't that much behind.
I just have to say that I'm glad that Neji and Sai are going forward.
Also Sai is huge!! Ha! I couldn't help myself.
Please keep writing, take care.
`dragon

ps. Is Naruto's father going to make an appearance?
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From gazelovr on August 14, 2007
You are...a GODDESS amongst writers!!

One would think that after so many chapters that your "pen" would run out of "ink," so to say, but you still write such a vivid and enthralling world that one can't help but be in awe of your superior story telling. I completely teared up reading Raidou's heartfelt rant to Genma. (ch82) Absolute perfection. I just can't express how impressed and how much I loved that chapter. They are definitely a hot threesome I hope to see more of in the future.

Keep up the excellent work!
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From ANON - Dicey on August 14, 2007
O.o I really miss Narusasunaru... Any chance you could give them more screen time? Exclusive screen time for a couple of chapters even? Or KisameItachi or GaaraShika. I think the dive into other charas lives, romance, effing hot sex is good. Its interesting to see them too. But I'm missing the main charas. Kiriban number, well since your the only one who can see what review number is what *as reviewers we can sorta guess i suppose* you could sorta set a number and whoever reaches it gets a request. IbikiGenmaRaido triangle is fun.. lol what they do is fun. But still. Main characters?? Dwayne??
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From ANON - Lena on August 13, 2007
I always love naru/sasu unless it is badly written but never liked anything involving the other jounin and chunin. I really like the way you write Raido, Genma, and Ibiki, you took the time to develope their characters and now when I watch the anime I see a personality developed by you that Kishimoto never focused on
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From HumanInfiltrator on August 13, 2007
Thank you Mistress.
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From Hen on August 12, 2007
Sweetest chapter yet!

I'm sorry about your cat. I hope he fares well.
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From Allys on August 12, 2007
Hestia Goddess. Remind me NEVER to read this story in public again.
O.O, I was laughing and blushing horribly the entire time, and LOL, it took me like an hour to read the chapter.
Oh God. I was dying!! Especially when Sai came in and everybody was still there on the phone, hanging around!!
I have this whole PDA phobia. It freaks me out. I can manage the little things but the big things scare the bejeezus out of me.
*Glomps you and huggles* Although I have to say behind closed doors all's fair in love and war XD.
LOL, now that've explained my condition for the past hour I've got to say, LOL, that was lovely.
I was really scared for a minute with Neji freezing up and when Sai just bloody Blurted out that he had broken Hiashi's arm O.O
But I should have known that in the end it would all be alright XD. ZOMG and LOL,
the little bits of remembering the whole scene with Naruto and Sasuke O.o, LOL, almost died all over again XD.
These two are by far your biggest exhibitionists but it seems they won't be doing that anymore. I'm a little mixed up about that.
I love the idea that now they're all exclusive but goddess I can't lie, as much as it embarrassing the living daylights out of me, I'll miss the antics XD.
*Loves you dearly* thanks so much for the update love. Got my D/s fix for the night, can sleep well now ;)
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From AnimeCookie on August 12, 2007
These past few chapters have been real roller coaster rides. Everything had started off so well with Genma and
Raidou becoming Ibiki�s subs. But then Genma�s discipline came. I wasn�t surprised when Ibiki bitch-slapped
the shit out of Genma � I kinda saw that one coming. But Raidou�s boot to Genma�s face � wow, didn�t see that
coming, and I�m sure Genma didn�t either! And that �pee-pee thing�! Whew! It�s a good thing they�re friends (???)
I�m so glad that in the end Genma understood his mistakes and everything turned out well. Although I
admit, Ibiki gives new meaning to �carrot or stick�.

Is this any way to run a multibillion-dollar corporation? God, I was laughing at the shear glee Neji was feeling
to the point of celebration, which in a way is sad because it reflects just how much suffering Neji really has
gone through. And I�m always laughing at how much these characters are into fetishes, yet underneath the humor
there are some real pains that each of them try to work out. But sometimes you just can�t help but laugh! And
I can also see that Sai and Neji are putting themselves up as contenders for Choji�s ass-cake.

But Miriam, �Sister Cougar� sounds like a she�s a fetish all unto herself! I can see her now, hunting down poor
Kouji�s �fresh, young meat� and pouncing all over his ass from behind, when he least expects it. Snarl! Bite!
Scratch!

Cookie~
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From AmberRose on August 12, 2007
yeah you know how i said i was gonna wait until all was said and done before commenting? forget all that. first of all i love the pairings you chose in this fic! you matched everyone so well and it's based on personality and chemistry rather than the typical 'OMG i'm gonna pair X with X because, like, they'd be SOOO Hawtt together!!!!1' i love when a writer can take an unusual pairing or unusual subject and make it into believable and relatable (not that i didn't like S&M before, you've just turned my mild interest into rampant obsession)

i can't wait to read more about ibiki/raidou/genma, gaara/shika and especially hiashi/kimimaro and kankurou/shino. i find hiashi/kimi so endearing for some reason. and the kank/shino storyline is extremely well-written. i adore how you characterized them both. great peice of erotica girl! and now the mandatory "Update soon!"
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From llyoung on August 12, 2007
What a lovely chapter. I really do like Sai and Neji. The
entire chapter was just fantastic. Thank you.
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From Travellyr on August 12, 2007
...The first two sentences of 84/83 had me laughing. Oh, Neji. XD Not that I'm any better- if someone who was (I thought) that big a bastard did something dumb like that, I'd be delighted too.

*laughing MORE* Oh, I like Miriam. XD I like the parallels between Neji thinking of where to fuck Sai, and Neji thinking of where Miriam was going to get Kouji!

....and then Neji goes "...wait. I'LL fuck Sai?" and there's that delighted cougar grin as he realizes no, sweet, SAI will fuck YOU. *delight, hearts*

...Oh, Neji. I'm happy he has Sai to shock and to cuddle him, he needs it so. Sai is a sexy, sexy predator, and Neji is so lucky to have him as his protector.

a few giggles for poor Kouji, who may have hemmorhaged from blushing so hard, and Miriam, who is there to "console" him. XD

One big, fuzzy "awww" for all the rest. Thanks.
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