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Reviews for D/s Naruto

By : Hestia
  • From HumanInfiltrator on September 15, 2007
    Mistress, I nearly forgot there is something I think you would enjoy. Forgive my presumptuousness and if I am mistaken, my apologies.

    http://www()literotica()com/stories/showstory()php?id=275707

    replace () with .
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on September 15, 2007
    Oh mistress I'm so glad you are back!!! This was beautiful, thank you. Can't wait to see what is next.
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  • From DuosAngel on September 15, 2007
    Welcome back! I've been dying to read more of this story! Kakashi's outfit sounds so great. Kotetsu's misunderstanding though right? I don't remember any talk of Kakashi and Iruka getting out of the scene. That would be terrible.

    Two typos in the begining. "hoping that all the fucking they’d done still had Sasuke loose enough so he would be hurt." Should be "wouldn't be hurt"
    "I’ll never, never stop wanted this" Should be wanting.
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  • From llyoung on September 15, 2007
    So sorry to hear that your laptop was stolen and all your work lost. Will you be compensated for the theft by anyone? Hope so.
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  • From ANON - tataliny on September 12, 2007
    I love this fanfiction. My favorite pairings are ****Gaara/Shikamaru****, ***Ibiki/Raidou/Genma*** Neji/Sai, and Kimimaru and Hiashi. I love all the other pairings, but I especially love those pairings. Please update soon. Thanks for the wonderful story that provides so much entertainment.
    tata
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  • From Tsuki on September 10, 2007
    please update soon! its been too long since a new chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Lychee on September 08, 2007
    Ah man! You haven't updated in forever! Please say you haven't given up on this fic?
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  • From Katheirne on September 05, 2007
    Hi!!!! I absolutely love this story...I have found some mistakes but I can't remember where they were...I got too involved in the story...I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~.~
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  • From ANON - Aleasha on September 01, 2007
    ok just forget my previous comments
    cause im oblivious like that
    oops

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  • From ANON - Aleasha on September 01, 2007
    ok you have probably gotten so many of these but...
    PLEASE UPDATE! ITS KILLING ME!!!
    PRETTY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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  • From ANON - Aleasha on August 28, 2007
    PLEASE UPDATE IM DYING HERE LIKE WOWW I CANT BREATHE
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  • From llyoung on August 28, 2007
    So sorry to hear about your laptop and the info you lost for your job (and the D/s work) but did you also loose the work you had been doing for your e-book? I really hope that some of your work can be saved from the hard drive. Good luck (and I hope Tommy is doing ok).
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  • From ANON - bloody_Rose on August 23, 2007
    WOW!! I wanted to finish reading all the chapters before I left a review.
    But is so late that I cant think of anything coherent to say. Just that was one of the most Amazing stories I have read.!!!! I have never been so completely suck in to such an erotic story. Please u must up date soon.

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  • From nawatia on August 22, 2007
    Truly you are doing such wonderful things with each of the characters! I'm not just talking about the sex. Characters that may have been originally flat have just exploded and are evoking a rainbow of sympathy from me the reader. Wow!
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  • From nawatia on August 20, 2007
    I just finished reading chapter 24 with Gaara and Shikamaru. this was by far my favorite chapter. I love the emotional intimacy and discovery that Gaara is experiencing. You really seemed to flesh out both of their personalities in a multi-dimensional way. These two seemed the most real in my imagination. I wasn't expecting these two to be my favorite pairing so far, but there you go!
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