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By : Hestia

From ANON - fangirl on October 11, 2007
poke poke poke...more please? Been missing your updates and this story is way too awesome to forget.
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From LadyWolf on October 06, 2007
Ok here goes....Holy Crap!!!!!!!!!! These were the best 85 chapters that I've read. I am so sorry about you losing your work....I know how that feels. Makes you wanna go out and hunt the bastards down and torture them!!***hehehehe!!!!!! But anyway....I can not WAIT until you post some new chapters!!!!

Actually I was thinking that you can maybe do a strip tease scene with Sasuke and Naruto at Uchiha's up on stage to the Sweetest Sin Song by Jessica Simpson. Because Sasuke is the Sweetest Sin......OMG did that just sound so damn corney!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! forgive me.....!

Sasuke and Naruto are my all time favorite pairing here. Followed by Gaara and Shika, then Neji and that crazy SOB Sai(but ya gotta love somebody who'll break bones for you). Well you know Ibiki(sp)/Genma and Raidou are beginning to grow on me. That Ibiki is the shit with two subs. I just love what he put on there collars!!!!

Hestia you are the shit !!!!! I swear i can't wait to read more.....!!!!

Please let me know when you'll be posting a new one! pretty please with cookies on top~!!!!!! here is my email addy: nroberso2@yahoo.com. I swear I'm not some crazy lady who love to read about men making out and doing stuff to each other ***wait a minute, I am crazy and I love reading stuff like this*** Oh well, such is life......!!!!!

***looking at list and checking off first item: Rambling to Hestia-check****!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From Princessdragonsbane on September 30, 2007
looking forward to the next chapter and the next and the next and the next ect. ect. ect.
I know it's hard after losing some of your work. believe me I know. But you have a beautiful (sick but beautiful) thing going here. keep up the great work. Totally diggin the whole Hia/Kim thing wow what a surprise pairing fantastic. Thank you so much for sharing. Love Ya -Dragon
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From Gwyllion on September 27, 2007
I heard about what happened to your laptop! OMG, You poor POOR THING! *Hugs and kisses you* I'm so sorry to hear about this. Gods....I can def understand what and where you're going through. Someone had stolen my HD at work one time and it stored all my beautiful fanart, not to mention my fic collection, personal works and portfolio in which I had worked saved for the past 5 years. As an artist, I felt like half of my life was gone and I couldn't go through a day without mourning. Please be strong. You are so wonderful and talented, that I'm sure your fic will come out even better! As your devoted fan, I give you my support and hope you will feel better and that everything will come out right in the end. (((((HUGS)))))))
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From LadyWolf on September 25, 2007
I just gotta say, I Love Sai!!! Enough said!
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From ANON - bloody_rose on September 25, 2007
Giggle I sorry have to leave a comment about posting twice it was because my computer was Possessed!!! I didnt know what was happening so I started to close everthing and I though ( I hope it posted) so lets see if it happens again. oh and lots of hugs I just read what was stolen and I cryed like a big baby when all my stuff was stolen so I feel ya... whipper sob.
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From ANON - bloody_rose on September 25, 2007
I so sorry to hear that someone stole ur stuff. I really sucks when that happens I remembered they stole a hole bunch of anime dvds from me once and they stole a box set of Gravitation and I laughed and cryed about. I was like ha!!! U stole yaoi!!! then damn I have to buy it again. (big hugs im sorry)

I really enjoy the imagining all the beautifully cloths they were wearing. The scene in the dressing room was HOT. I like the way Sasuke went in to supspace just by looking at Narutos cloths. I think I would too I love black and red, plus suite damn thats hot. OH� Kakashi and Iruka the cloths and the scene in the resturante was just beautifully I wanted to cry (whimper and sob). Any waz here some encouragement (I guess) keep going don�t stop. I hate rewrite something I already wrote again it sometime comes out better I hope that happens to you. ^_^ so keep going because u teased me with Gaara and Neji their one of my favorites. ^_~

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From ANON - Rasengan22 on September 20, 2007
I'm very sorry to hear about your laptop. I think that's terrible that someone stole your harddrive and everything. I hope you don't get too discouraged over it, but you deserve to be upset. Take your time with the updates as you rewrite them or whatever you do. Bad stuff happens to good people sometimes. It sucks.

As for the chapter, ugh, I had forgotten how much I love this story. I just got giddy all over again reading the NaruSasu part. Everytime Sasuke gets lost in subspace I feel like I'm swooning as well. And I love how Naruto was so enchanted/intrigued by Sasuke's reaction to him in the suit. And when he was saying all those little things in Sasuke's ear, I just about melted all over the place. They're so very sweet together. And also, I liked that they used a condom. It happens so infrequently in fanfics that when someone uses a condom I go, 'neat.'

So don't get too down, we still love you and the story and you can take as long as you want. And with time your anime collection will grow even bigger!!!!
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From sweetciel on September 19, 2007
My goddess has returned! I thank the skies and the brimstone that brought you back to me! I'm very very upset about what happened to your computer. I've already sent no less than 25 hexes at the thief who dared claim your property. I'm was so happy to see an update that i almost came ^_^ I love you *kowtows*
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From ANON - bishie_addict on September 18, 2007
I'm so sorry to hear about your laptop being stolen - how awful! I know I would die if my laptop was gone.
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From WaterShadow on September 17, 2007
I have to thank you for this story, and apologize profoundly for the utter LACK of reviewing I have done, but I was coming to terms with a few things...like the fact that I find D/s exciting and arousing. I mean, men having sex with each other is hot enough, but men in LEATHER! Oh mama!

Also, I am SO sorry that you have lost your laptop! I am sure that despite the loss of those two scenes which you love(d), I know you will either be able to recreate them (they do reoccur to you sometimes) or make new that are as good or better than the ones you've written down. Either way, thank you for writing this story!

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From morbiDreamscape on September 16, 2007
Ch. 84, hot and sweet, just like hot chocolate! ^____^ I've been craving another chapter of your mega-novel, and I've been rewarded! XD

I just wanted to give my condolences to your laptop, and I completely understand... I've had three hard drives die on me so far. Anyway, I look forward to more of your excellent writing, and thank you for this chapter!
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From limonata on September 16, 2007
I'm so sorry to hear about your laptop! I never back up my files, either, but I have nothing worth saving- maybe Fed-ex will help you out since they delivered it badly? I hope you're able to get a new (better!) one, and if you have homeowner's insurance, see if they'll let you insure it through them- it was $100 bucks for me, and then I bricked my laptop with liquid yogurt smoothie- all costs covered for a new one. (That was a long sentence, but oh well).
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From Lances on September 16, 2007
Ah, Hestia the Goddess is back! Wonderful chapter, although you could've made it longer. I wish more details about Kakashi&Iruka's marriage... and I'd like to hear more about what's troubling Sasuke! Please let him be just so much in love he's out of it, rather than make him deadly sick or something... anyway, update soon again!
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From AnimeCookie on September 16, 2007
Welcome back! I'm so sorry your hard drive was stolen (WTF????). Yes, backups (DVD/CDs copies -- or if you really got serious Gigs of files, tape backups)
are such a blessing when crazy shit like that happens. And I'm going to go cry in a corner right with you over that Hiashi/Kimimaru story! I hope you can reconstruct it.

Kakashi & Iruka sound so cute! But I don't blame Naruto for being concerned about Sasuke. I hope Naruto makes it big because its gonna take a small fortune
just to keep Sasuke in the life-style he's so used to.

Cookie~
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