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Reviews for MFA: Mafia

By : SamaSurreal
  • From Sekre on May 25, 2007
    Love it so far!
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  • From Dream2010 on May 21, 2007
    It just gets more interesting. I wonder what Naruto's going to do now. I also wonder how Itachi's going to punish Sasuke. ^-^
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  • From Allys on May 20, 2007
    LOL, I'm still voting for SasUke as Juliet XD :leers: And I'm so glad you did get off your butt :D, cause I LOVE this story, you have no idea XD. It so satisfies my need for Drama XD, LOL. And Uchihacest :smirk: LOL, poor Sasuke, being whored out by his Aniki. I'm so excited about this, LOL. And O.o XD As if you didn't know we were perverts LOL, we all haunt an adult site where the theme is smex - constantly XD. Oh and I'm sorry about that, I'm sure Oni-chan is a really sweet person, I'm just picky, sorry, I taught english for a year and a half. But Hooray for Hina, I loves her and it's really cute, cause I'm her beta XD. Thanks you so much for the update :Glomps:
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  • From marquesgue1 on May 20, 2007
    Awww the begginning was so hot - and Sasuke was just whoa lol kinky :d i liked it but then the whole break in happened and my eyes went O_O and then when Naruto found out *sniffles* man i was going 'oh no' over and over again and i got this ache in my chest - especially when Sasuke wouldn't meet Naruto's eyes when Naruto was trying to catch his gaze... and then Itachi - lol I can't decide if I wanted to throw him on the ground and do uuuh certain things to himor if i wanted to kick him in the shins (I have a shin kicking thing)... so yeah *sigh*

    :D great chapter though, it's a cool update ^_^ and you're welcome ^_6 your stories are awesome so I'm happy you asked me to beta :)

    Hina xXxx
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  • From Allys on May 17, 2007
    Interesting XD. Very Romeo and Juliet, but question XD, who gets to be Juliet?? LOL, anyway, it looks very promising, but you need to fire your beta, I'd do it, but I'm already beta-ing for 6 authors all of whom have multiple stories O.o, yeah, I have no idea how that happened. I'm excited about this though, so heres hoping you update soon, Ja.
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  • From KiaraNxiar on May 12, 2007
    Amazing start! But evil cliffy! More please! Puppy dog eyes!

    P.S. No problem! I just hope LeeLeey gets better soon!
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  • From ursweetheartless on April 14, 2007
    nice, jaded!sasuke and jaded!naruto in a small backroom somewhere with alcohol and inevitable boy smex. what could go wrong? ^.^ s'nice, and i'd love to see where its going so write more, k? :p
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  • From Dream2010 on April 13, 2007
    I thought that was a very interestng chapter. Great job!
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  • From yaoilover07 on April 12, 2007
    This is a great start for this story. I can't wait to see what the plot is going to turn out to be. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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  • From marquesgue1 on April 12, 2007
    Lol I have to give it to you guys, you specialize in 'new and untried but ultimately successful' types of stories lool :D can't wait to see where these two take it *giggles evilly* and gangas? heh :d that'll be interesting :d Ino and Neji are in Naruto's YAY!!! Sai and Kiba too hehe :D cool!

    Hina xXxx
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  • From YamiKaeko on April 12, 2007
    uh oh....is this going to be a romeo and juliet type thing? if so don't kill them. kami i hate it when that happens. Very interesting btw. Can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - animehead on April 11, 2007
    I don't co-own it. I am just the voice of various people. The story is all yours. I see you changed the heights although some of them are still a bit tall. LOL The (sort of) lemon scene we did earlier was so freaking twisted. I am really starting to like that pairing. I hope you're feeling better. Bye! I would say update...but I already now everything about it LOL.
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