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By : hikageame
  • From ANON - yaoi_reader on October 24, 2009
    hi,

    cool fic, keep writting. You got me hook. Update soon. There are not much hybrid (animal or demon half human) fic with Naruto; and i'm addicted to them.

    :)

    read you later
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  • From Sylvir on October 22, 2009
    For bold and italics you have to write the html code.

    Put the opening tag < b > then close it < /b > Don't put spaces in the tags, I put them there so they would show up in the text.
    ex) I want this sentence to be in bold.

    Replace (b) with (i) to make italics < i > and
    ex) I want his to be in italics

    Be careful to close the tag everytime you open it

    Make sure that everytime you put in the opening < b > there is a close < /b > or everything after the opening will be bold or italic
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  • From amnestria on October 22, 2009
    This story is interesting ^^ Good work !!!
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  • From smint45 on October 22, 2009
    Wow this story is great!! I know I've read the beginning somewher befor but it has been so long that I didn't remember!!! Anyway I'm happy you are back!!! Thanks for the update and hope to see you soon!!!!
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  • From serenagold on October 22, 2009
    You're back!! :D

    I feel half retarded. I remember reading the first chapter how ever long ago and really enjoyed it. How did I somehow miss 4 additional chapters before you went on hiatus for a year? >:P

    I really enjoyed this story. Your characters are spot on. Both Sasuke and Naruto seem really fleshed out and fully realized. Keep up the awesome work! I'm going to look forward to the next chapter. ^^
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  • From Halskr on September 08, 2008
    This story is very well written with an interesting twist, a futuristic ninja story. I reaaly like the background you have laid out for this. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
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  • From oohshiny on December 01, 2007
    YAAAAAY A NEW CHAPTERRRR!!!!! you should update more often, me luvsh dis story!!! ive sent the link to a coupla my friends too, they said they wanted to read it XDD see we luvz you. but ykno what would make us luv you even more? if you go grahh and start writing like a madman. pleeeeeeeeease? NARUTO!!! CMERE AND DO YOUR KIT-POUT!!! DON'T ASK WHY JUST DO IT!!!!!

    HA NOW YOU CANNOT REFUSE, NOBODY CAN RESIST... THE NARUTO POUT!!! MUA HA HA!!! when you update this email me plzzzz ^^ my email is deannathx@comcast.net
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  • From lexjamandme on November 13, 2007
    I'm looking forward to them getting to know each other. I loved Sasuke's reactions in this chapter. And Naruto's confusion was bittersweet and adorable at the same time. I'm looking foreward to the next.
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  • From hisoka on November 13, 2007
    id half to say with such an outlook on life im surprised hes still alive and hasnt killed himself despite his morals.hope you update soon
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  • From on November 13, 2007
    Woo! I'm so happy you made a second chapter! I feel bad for Naruto... :( But hopefully being with Sasuke will brighten up his world, ne?
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on November 13, 2007
    I think this is wonderful!!!
    It's an awsome take on the Naruto story line!! Thank you so much for sharing.
    I do have a suggestion, I hope you aren't offended. I write fantasy, so I know how hard it can be to get all the information in. The way you wrote the first two chapters, though interesting, dragged a bit. It wasn't because I didn't want to know their backstory, but because it was dumped in before the action. If you put the action first, and then information, in smaller doses it will keep the reader plowing through the story instead of skimming some parts. This is known as info dumping and it's hard as hell to avoid. But I can't wait for more!
    Slave
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  • From on November 04, 2007
    Aww! Poor Naru! :( Still i can't wait to read more! ^^ Keep up the good work! :D
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  • From solitare1 on November 03, 2007
    I'll be looking for the rest of the story. I think it has and interesting hook to it.
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  • From lexjamandme on November 03, 2007
    I hadnt' read this one before. I'm looking forward to more! I like Naruto's attitude. Beaten down Naruto's are too sad.
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  • From hisoka on November 02, 2007
    I DIDNT NOTICE THIS UNTIL I REREAD SOME PARTS THAT ID ACTUALLY READ THIS ONCE ALREADY BUT IT WENT FURTHER THEN THEN IT DID THIS TIME.GLAD YOU DECIDED TO REDO IT AND POST IT HOPE YOU CAN FIND TIME TO UPDATE IT AS FREQUENTLY AS POSSIBLE
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