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Reviews for Welcome to the Island of Beautiful Men

By : ClaireBear

From Leeana69 on February 17, 2009
You KINKY BITCH!! :Dies:
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From Leeana69 on February 17, 2009
P...Poor Kiba. O.o
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From Leeana69 on February 17, 2009
Aha...hahaha....HAHA....MWAHAHA....HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH. :diabolical laughter:

GAARA IN A PANDA SUIT!! GENIOUS!!

:runs to molest Gaara:
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From Leeana69 on February 17, 2009
Tee hee. At first I just wanted to use this an a way to reply to your amazing review. But this is just so good I have to write my own amazing review.

I felt a little sad that Haku didn't know where he was, and thought that everyone else was dead. But then things got just a little cracky and just....AAA~MAZING!! :laughs:

Onto the next chapter then.
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From SumiHatake on August 30, 2007
Sakumo should most definitely be the other one. I mean that's almost as good as having two Kakashi's running around. Mmmm Yummy! You should also throw in Raidou I know he has a scar but clean the scar up and call it good. And maybe later Asuma, Izumo, and Kotetsu.
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From blueinu on June 26, 2007
maybe u can throw a gaara/lee/naruto threesome in at one point.That would be so funny and cool.All u need now is Sasori of the Red Sand to show up,he's sooo hunky!anyho,keep up the good work and hope to see more live action soon!
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From ClaireBear on June 10, 2007
Dxinsider - I am soo sorry to disappoint you but I don't write incest (is parent to child relations called incest too?) If Naruto and Yondaime weren't related then, yeah, no problem, but incest is one of those things I don't write. (I don't want to promise anything but I'll try to make it up to you somehow) :(

Tyra - I love Sasuke's ass too. I believe it needs a good spanking for all the trouble he's caused everyone in Konoha. Sasuke's always been seme material to me but writing him uke was actually pretty fun. I think I should do it more often. I love to make Neji scream, whether it's in pain, pleasure or frustration. He's always got it together and he's so stoic that making him lose it is just so refreshing. I imagine Shikamaru's pretty hung but that's just wishful thinking on my dirty, little mind's part and when all that blood rushes from one head to the other, heh he...Let's just say his I.Q. might drop just a smidge. ^_^

*Takes Tyra's proffered cookies* Yumm! Oatmeal and raisin. My fave!

And I don't think your reviews are too long. It's nice to read long reviews, that's why I try to write long reviews too. Some authors work so hard on their fics and they love it when others enjoy their work as much as they enjoy writing them and I can imagine how disheartening it must be when I see some really good stories (FABULOUS stories) that have just a few reviews and just as little ratings. But thanks to everyone for your critiques and suggestions, I appreciate them all.

Ladyfox - You know...I actually think I'd enjoy that. Heh. Just teasing! Yes, I really should get back to this and I really should leave more open ended scenarios for readers to give more suggestions to get my creativity flowing but there is this one fic I'm working on that is almost finished and I'm trying to concentrate on it for now. (This is why I didn't want to start too many fics, now my mind is a jumble of 'what happens next'?) I also blame The Sims 2. It's been sucking up so much of my time ever since I got the workaround for my graphics card problem. I'm also working on a message board and I have a project that I started earlier this year that I need to finish like TOMORROW (but will probably be completed, hopefully, by the end of this week)! Everything's catching up to me now and with the family business taking off I don't get to write as often as when I first started. That and I'm a lazy b!tc#! Sorry.
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From ANON - Ladyfox on June 10, 2007
I don't review often on AFF.NET But I just had to tell you, I love this story!! I was at all times laughing so loud my neighbors came over to ask what was going on, or I was fanning my self for the 'HOT-HOT-HOT-MAN-SEX-THAT-EVERY-FAN-GIRL-WISHES-THEY-WERE-ABLE-TO-ACTUALLY-SEE-IT' You have to keep at it or else I will find you tie you to a chair and make you write it
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From Twiggies on June 10, 2007
Omg!
I haven't reviewed in a really looong time!

I loved Haku and Sasuke's ass.. I mean I loved Haku and Sasuke! Haku's such an naughty boy! Who knew that such an girly goy would have ass fetish? ..Sertainly not me. xD But the sex scene was really wonderful! I loced the fact that Sasuke was actually uke!

Ah, and what about Shika and Neji. Yes Neji, you're sertainly a Screamer. And oh my! Neji actually was experienced.
I can only imagine how big Shika was.. and how tight Neji was..
OMG! I'm such an pervert! (Like you haven't noticed that by now.. xD )

And Itachi, Kiba and Naruto. Oh how hot. Kiba was treated like a dog! Good boy, Kiba-chan! xDD
Ahh. I don't know really what to say. You write the smuts soooo well!

Hmmmm... Let's just say that I love every lemon that you write, no matter what the pairing is, is it a rape or just having sex!
And I love you! Yes, you!
Wanna have my cookies? You can have 'em if you want. xDD

Update soon and keep writing! ..Umm.. Is my reviews a little too long..? I have a feeling that they are..
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From Dxinsider on May 24, 2007
The Yondaime?! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can he and Naruto be together!!!! Him on top!!!!! Cause it will be a Father/son thing cause everyone knows he is Naruto's daddy and it will be fucking hot!!!! LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!
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From ClaireBear on May 24, 2007
I must say those are very good guesses but they are not correct (love the angel idea though...I may use that on Yondaime who I was going to dress like an Indian, kinda like the 'It's Raining Men' thing). Hmmm, you're hot on the dark eyes thing and I'll give you a hint if you still want that cookie. ^_^

I think I'm developing a thing for the older men too and they're fun to write which is very surprising since I thought young boys hyped up on hormones would be easier but so far Kakashi, Itachi and Genma are the ones with serious KINK (excluding Haku). Maybe I should do a demographics just for fun...I've been meaning to keep a scorecard of who gets who and how many times they get laid.

Well, I have to admit I'm starting to develop an interest in the pointy teeth after seeing Suigetsu. I think he's kinda hot and when he first showed up I practically drooled. Well...I don't think Lee would qualify as a bishie either, (Don't flame me) but I guess beauty lies in the eye of the beholder, and by bishie standards he might not make the cut. But if you change your mind about Zabuza let me know.
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From yaoiismyantidrug on May 23, 2007
Yay for Hayate!

As far as Zabuza goes, I was just joking a little. Yes, he's hot, but that's just my own preference... I'm much more interested in the older men in Naruto (Kakashi, Genma, Iruka, Zabuza, Hayate, Ibiki, Raidou, and yes, even Gai) with Sasuke being the only notable exception. But Zabuza doesn't really qualify as a bishie, I think. So don't worry about trying to include him. This is the Island of Beautiful Men, not the Island of Battle-Scarred, Tortured, Somewhat-Psychotic Men. He'd stick out like a sore thumb. ^_^

Hayate's costume... a teddy bear? and angel? a football player (wtf? why did I even think that?... too much Eyeshield 21...) a bird of some sort? a geisha girl? I give up. I can't think of a single idea that sounds right. So... no cookies for me. :(

Oh! I forgot to say... Yes! Yondaime's coming! Hooray!
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From ClaireBear on May 23, 2007
Man you're good O_O

Yes! I am bringing back Hayate and I am giving him a very special cosplay costume too and if you guess what it is, not only will I assume you're psychic (or living in my cupboard) but I'll give you a cookie.

Hmm...I never thought of Zabuza as attractive and I didn't want to bring him back since Haku was there and ...well...I'm not a fan of Zabuza x Haku. But, if you really want him I'll bring him back just for you ^^ (Just tell me who you want him paired with, even if it's Haku)
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From yaoiismyantidrug on May 23, 2007
Whee! Yes, I can see how GaaxLee would be difficult to write... I don't think I'll ever attempt that. You did a great job, though! They were both so confused, and Gaara was so curious... it was cute! I cracked up at this: �Gaara-kun, you are so confident, to be able to express the happiness of your youth by wearing something so adorable.� And Kakashi, Iruka and Genma... mmmmmmm.... heh heh heh. So funny that they were fighting over Iruka even in the middle of sex. ^_^

Are you bringing back... Hayate? Or maybe Zabuza? I don't know about you, but I found Zabuza to be QUITE attractive. Yum... pointy teeth...
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From ANON - Anon on May 10, 2007
love the picture! they're great! well i just have one thing to say....:@ "YOU BETTER UPDATE BEFORE THE END OF THE WEEK!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING LIKE CRAZY TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!" well thats all for now! XD bye!
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