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Reviews for A Family of their Own

By : emp78
  • From DirewolfLilith on May 06, 2007
    two words for this fic- toooooo cute!!! ahmigawd! i simply cannot wait to read more of this... you, my dear, have a stalker... -sits at you feet and stares at you lovingly-
    -direwolflilith
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 05, 2007
    That was sweet of Iruka to do that for Naruto and I'm glad that Kakashi was their to save them earlier that day. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - lo on May 05, 2007
    Nice, this is so cute. I like the way you are slowly creating this little family.
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  • From promise2003 on May 05, 2007
    Truly this is a wonderful story. I have enjoyed reading it completely! I do hope that you can find time to write more of it soon. I never read KakaIru, but I will read this story! It is a gem amongst all the crap on AFF lately. ^^
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on May 05, 2007
    Facinating! This is so well written. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Anise on May 05, 2007
    Iruka and Naruto are just absolutely adorable together in this and you've done a good job of showing the ups and downs of what they have to deal with. One of the parts that struck me was when Naruto started crying because of his birthday, it was just so heartbreaking but really well done.
    I also like how you're starting to see a change in some of the people around Naruto, Raidou is a good example of that. He's one of my favourites so I'm glad that he's one of the guys that has taken to Naruto, if Iruka didn't already like Kakashi I would have suggested he go for Raidou ;)
    I can't wait to see the birthday party because I'm sure that even if it's only a couple of people that show up it would still be better than anything Naruto's had before, I just hope it doesn't get ruined. Anyway I look forward to the rest of the story but I think I had better stop now, I've rambled for long enough :)
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  • From LadyAquill on April 24, 2007
    *squeals softly* its..its..its ADORABLE!!!!!!! :DDD
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on April 17, 2007
    *cocks head slightly* HOW old is Naruto in this? he's described as small, but it could be due to the fact he don't eat enough veggies/fruits...PLEASE have Iruka feed him some fruits/veggies if possible! Gai or Raido could do the shopping for Iruka, if nessacary...I doubt the villagers would sell a ninja unspoiled food, due to the fact it ruins their business, or someone might complain to Sandaime...
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  • From ANON - Tati on April 17, 2007
    Ok, I have to review. this is one sweet and yummy story. I just love little Naruto. He is so cute! *squeals*
    I can't wait to see Kakashi and Iruka hook up. They are absolutely my favorite pairing in Naruto aside from
    SasuXNaru. Anyway, your story just makes my day, especially after a very long and hard day at work.
    Keep it up.
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  • From noezel7 on April 17, 2007
    WOW!! Your story so far is incredibly cute! I love how you write. You don't over explain things to death but, you still manage to give the story personality. I like that Kakashi wasn't so sure on how to court Iruka and that Iruka was the first to make a move. Keep up the good work! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - mary on April 17, 2007
    ahhwwwwwwwww so cute!!!! *glares at evil men* hopefully they get what they deserved!
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  • From ANON - HumanInfiltrator on April 17, 2007
    This is evolving nicely. Fleshing the story out with detail will give it a more "completed" feel, and draw your readers further into this entrancing world you are creating.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 17, 2007
    I'm glad someone was there to help Iruka and Naruto since Kakashi wasn't there. And it was sweet that Kakashi and Naruto are getting closer. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - lo on April 17, 2007
    This is a nice story. I like what you have done so far. Nice job.
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  • From ANON - lo on April 17, 2007
    So far this is cute. I like little Naruto and what you have set up so far. Not bad at all and I would love to see more.
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