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Reviews for A Family of their Own

By : emp78
  • From HumanInfiltrator on June 18, 2007
    Hmmmm. It HAS been too long. But, thank you. Sweet once again and well done on starting the intricate process of changing peoples minds about Naruto.

    Will be waiting for the next update.
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  • From ANON - lo on June 18, 2007
    This is a very sweet story.
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  • From ANON - Chibi on June 18, 2007
    Good story, please continue. X3
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  • From ANON - WraithLizz on May 26, 2007
    Fantastic. Really well written and Narutos reaction is well thought out. He's self sacrificing even at a young age. The characterisations work really well. More please.
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  • From ANON - Anise on May 22, 2007
    ch.4 was very sweet, it was nice to see that Naruto got to have a normal birthday and also that there was at least a couple of kids that showed up.
    what can I even say about ch.5, it's just so sad to think of people treating a little child like that, although I did take some pleasure in Kakashi sending the dogs after the drunks!
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  • From ANON - lo on May 22, 2007
    This is such a sad and sweet story. I really like what you are doing with this. Great work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 22, 2007
    Thank goodness for Kakashi! Glad Naruto is okay. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From Zigana on May 22, 2007
    I am so loving this story. It is so sweet. It has its sad moments but I still like the flow. It's so realistic as to what things were probably really like for a very young Naruto. All that hatred for an innocent. Iruka has such a big heart. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on May 22, 2007
    I think that was a very good presentation of what would go through most four year olds' minds in that situation. Keep it up!!!
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  • From promise2003 on May 15, 2007
    yay, I'm so glad that you updated! I love the latest chapter, especially how Lee and Neji were at the party (and the happy little KakaIru scene was an added bonus as well).
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  • From suzie on May 14, 2007
    oh please update soon
    I love this story.
    will sasuke be making an entrance?
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 13, 2007
    That was a great chapter! I'm so glad Naruto had a great birthday and the lime scene between Iruka and Kakashi was wonderful too! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - lo on May 13, 2007
    That last chapter was really really good. It was cute, funny, at times sad and, at the end went from !HOT! to very sweet. Great job!
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  • From Digitalkisses on May 13, 2007
    What a wonderful new chapter, little Naruto is too cute and Neji and Lee coming over to celebrate his birthday was such a nice little touch :) I can just imagine all those little chibi's playing together.

    And happy mother's day to you hon, I got the cutest little tile from my little girl with her handprint on it :)
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on May 13, 2007
    Oh this is just to sweeeeet!

    Please update soon, I want to 'hear' the rest of their story.
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