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By : Jelp
  • From alleycat88 on February 23, 2008
    You do know i love this story right!? And I can see why you liked this chapter! Man that was hot! Excellent work!
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  • From on February 22, 2008
    Sorry that I haven't reviewed this fic for awhile. I really enjoy how your writing the dinamics between Sasuke and Naruto. Even though Naruto is still a bit bitter and betrayed he still can help himself from wanting the bastard. I look forward to your next installment.
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  • From ANON - animelover on February 22, 2008
    cool chapter! one question ... since naru doesn't go back on his word, how is he going to fulfill his marriage vows to saku and continue doing the nasty with sasu? oooh, can't wait to see how this gurns out! lOL..
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  • From sweetciel on February 21, 2008
    This story is just amazing! I love love love it!!!!!!!!! You are an amazing writer. I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter
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  • From ANON - JJ on February 21, 2008
    You are right that is a great chapter. I like ho naruto sudenly comes to sauske and basicly said he does love sauske. I hope he does chose sauske insted of sakura. Of course that is one of the best chapters so far so let me know when the next one is out and keep up the good work Jelp. I hope this is going to be as good as ur other stories.
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  • From Chria on February 21, 2008
    Best chapter ever! I love seeing Naruto this pissed off. This is what I've been waiting for! woot
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  • From ANON - Lilly on February 20, 2008
    O_O totally amazing!
    Why the hell should I say more. XD
    I can't stop expressiing how your story is so 'full'. All the reasons of ying and yang, The body and how you looked up information is perfect! You let Naruto be so pissed which makes it all seem so very real for his situation. I'll continue to read, thanks for updating and putting this on aff!
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  • From Mignonne422 on February 20, 2008
    It was gorgeous, it was wonderful and I'm soo excited for where this is going. I'm curious how you're going to resolve the Sakura issue, but gods, I'm glad that Naruto realized that he wanted this and that he loves Sasuke and that he NEEDS Sasuke.

    I was so worried for Sasuke there when he thought Naruto didn't want this, didn't want him. I LOVE how you've written Sasuke, so vulnerable and yet still so bastardly and IC. And Naruto is always shiny, wonderful win!

    Loved it!
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  • From ANON - anon on February 20, 2008
    Man, I just always love you work! I have to thank you again for always updating so promptly. You're the best! I really like how you developed Naruto because it's very realistic. Thank you again! *waits eagerly for next chapter*
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  • From kati on February 20, 2008
    Another update! :D You rock my socks! XP This chapter was extremely satisfying, I wouldn'gt change a single thing. xxx
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  • From KinOfDragons on February 19, 2008
    Love it, as usual!
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  • From tash1021 on February 19, 2008
    Yay sasuke and naruto are together ^.^
    but for how long...?
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  • From ANON - ritsukakun on February 19, 2008
    Ahhh!!! So hot!!! Your fic emotion me more and more! Sorry for my bad english...
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  • From kitsuko999 on February 19, 2008
    Indeed, I adore this chapter as much as you like it too! These are the emotions I love to read, such intense, fervent and eloquent emotions flowing between two individuals that spark each other’s eternal fire. Plus the tone in this chapter really did put me right away (well practically all the way through the chapter) into a cheerful mood. Its creative plotting like this that keeps me coming back to read more! Keep up the excellent work (and also the great mood in this story so far between Sasuke and Naruto), jelp!

    ~SasuNaru723~

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  • From Allys on February 19, 2008
    Awww you're so sweet *huggles* And this was so freaking fantastic!!! LOL, I guess that translates to - I liked this chaoter too XD. Finally!!! Gods that was Hott! the little fight straight into sex and all the really really good stuff. I'm so freaking they finally talked and admitted some stuff. i mean they're not quite there yet but they're well on their way XD. I love that Naruto came when Sasuke said he loved him. I loved that Sasuke told him he couldn't get off unless he knew he were enjoying it. And gods the licking XD, I can't wait till they get that seriously underway. You rock my world sweetie *MUAH*. I'm so happy right now. And OMG, I almost forgot because of the hawtness!! But Tsunade!!! *dies* I think I love her XD. I mean damn, that was kind of low, and scary that she did that, but XD. It still makes me happy!! LOL, I'm such a nerd *Huggles u* Thank you soooo much for the update love!! I hope it happens again soon ;) ♥
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