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By : Jelp
  • From Ihadadream on May 04, 2008
    This chapter was...WOW! Sasuke really lost it this time! He doesn't want to lose Naruto to Sakura, he loves him so much he can't take the chance... but hell! he can't kill Sakura ! (not that i like sakura anyway who does? ;-p) Naruto will really HATE him if he does!!! STOP SASUKE!!!
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  • From ANON - fujinakaheero on May 04, 2008
    ok.. still no update.
    I'm getting anxious here.

    I must know what happens next! *shakes fist*
    I personally love that you made this into a multi-chapter fic, btw.
    Just thought you should know.

    SO.. if you don't update soon, I shall boycott this story so you get no more readers or reviews! *insert insane laugh here*
    ..
    ...
    ok so that I don't have that much power, but.. it's a threat none the less!
    T_T
    So please.. new chapter soon?
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  • From roelyrodriguez1 on April 29, 2008
    sasuke killed sakura now thats a twist

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  • From KinOfDragons on April 28, 2008
    I'm not a Sakura basher but I really hope that whatever Sasuke's doing (the dipshit XD) will take her out of the picture so he can be happy with Naruto. This is one of those stories that doesn't seem like everyone can be a winner so you just have to take sides. Sasuke may be crazy but Naruto loves him more than Sakura and is happier with him so I have to take his. >.> Loved the chapter! Can't wait for the next one. =3
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  • From fujinakaheero on April 28, 2008
    I will definitely have to read The Agreement..
    but back onto this story.
    Started reading it last night and just finished reading it (with breaks in between of course)
    But I must say I am in love with this story so far.
    Gah! The cliffhanger though is going to kill me now.
    I'm going to end up checking back every day just for another update.
    But I love this take on the demon's chakra, no one really touches the points of what the demon's chakra can do to Naruto, so this story really gives good insight to that, which makes it all the more appealing.
    I even like the usage you have of the yin and yang, it works very well with this story.
    So, you have another loyal reader and I plan on reviewing for now on, on your new chapters :D
    And again, this is a really awesome and really well written story, so keep it up ;)
    until next time,
    Ja ne
    Fujinakaheero.
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  • From Allys on April 26, 2008
    Holy shit Sasuke's completely fucking lost it. Did he just try to kill Sakura?? Honestly??? Shit!! Dumb fuck! And things were going so well. Stupid... Grrrr!!!! LOL, This story infuriates me!! In a good way XD. Drama drama drama *shakes head*. No really that was such a bad freaking choice. And didn't Shizune tell Naruto?? You left so many questions with this chapter *sighs*. "Patience is a virtue." I'm just gonna keep telling myself that until you update XD. LOL, the image of Naruto and Sasuke's lives together was really freaking marvelous. If only Sasuke-bastard wasn't a Psycho!! *sighs heavily* Thanks so much for the update honey. I'll make sure to skip on over and check out the Agreement. *nods happily* I'm pretty sure I'll lvoe it XD.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on April 26, 2008
    Did Sasuke kill her? I have to say, I hope so but it would only be good if no one ever knew about it! Can't blame Sasuke for not wanting to lose the love of his life! :D
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  • From ANON - JJ on April 24, 2008
    that was an awsome chapter. i like where u are going with sauske wanting naruto to himself. is he realy going to kill sakura . let me know keep me posted.
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  • From alleycat88 on April 24, 2008
    Sasuke is crazy! Did he kill Sakura?! yeesh! I cant wait for more!
    And I do like your fic the Agreement! Its awesome!
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on April 24, 2008
    Oh...my...god.

    I was absolutely not expecting that. When Sasuke was thinking about drastic measures to take to ensure Naruto was his, I didn't think THIS was it! Sakura's not dead is she?

    Even though I wish she was...It would kind of ruin the story.

    Can't wait to read the next chapter! Evil Sasuke scares me.
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  • From ANON - animelover on April 24, 2008
    well j, gotta tell ya, ILOVETHISFICTODEATH!!!!! even better than agreement, i must say. the way you have sasu going mad is quite stimulating and an interesting take on the situation. you see that in sasunaru fics, but your description was beautifully done. yeah, i know, i'm totally weird that way. ;-)

    keep up the good work! can't wait to see naru go ballistic when he finds out sasu hurt saku (please let him go ballistic, even if it's out of guilt or something!)
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  • From ANON - tash1021 on April 24, 2008
    O____O did sasuke kill sakura?
    i love it story
    please just date when u get the chance
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  • From razorbwitch on April 24, 2008
    yes! kill sakura please for the love of god. ive never hated her this much!! awesome story
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  • From kati on April 24, 2008
    Wow. I am so in love with this story. Every chapter is better than the last and the plot constantly keeps me on the edge of my seat; your skills in creating tension and action are amazing. I love how this is all playing out and the dynamics of all the relationships. Thanks for updating! xxx
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  • From ANON - mango on April 24, 2008
    i was really excited when i saw that you suddenly updated which is why i can't believe that i feel so crappy after reading ch11. :(
    i'm surprised~! this must be a dream or something right (referring to ch11's ending)? it reminds me of School Days which ended just as horribly with more gory detail. School Days also had to do with an affair (though the relationships were not developed so i'm not sure if you can call it an affair), but both female characters started doing crazy, violent things to each other. ughhh i won't talk about it anymore. i read it on onemanga.com while on a hunt for a short, pleasant manga series. it was short, but was not pleasant at all :( oh man.


    i enjoyed this chapter until sasuke had gone crazy. i'm also really upset that you killed sakura. suddenly this fanfiction feels incredibly dark. i was so caught up with wanting naruto to accept sasuke that i didn't pay much attention to the haughty atmosphere around sakura and sasuke. AHH... this is very much like School Days. i can't get School Days out of my head with this turn of events. the build up to "this point" in both stories are very similar.

    i'm not looking forward to the next chapter as i normally do after updates for this story..., but i do want to see where you're going.
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