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By : Jelp
  • From Kodos on May 17, 2008
    *sits, staring at computer screen, crying* I'm horrified!! Why couldn't this have ended in threesome??!? Uaaaah, Kang does not approve. How depressing! ;_;
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  • From MissMayumi on May 16, 2008
    ahh!

    Update soon, please

    *hugs*


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  • From ANON - animelover on May 16, 2008
    actually jelp, i'm not glaring .. i'm kinda proud of you! it's sad that this was basically the only way to resolve the sasunaru situation, and i'll be curious to see how they get past this, but please let sasuke get punished or something ... forced into therapy maybe? Or the yin/yang is slightly out of balance when it happened?

    i hate to be a beggin past, but puhleeeeeeee update soon, just so we can see how this part resolves. thanx!
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  • From Mignonne422 on May 16, 2008
    OMG!!! YOU KILLED SAKURA!!!

    Jelp!!! Naruto will NEVER forgive Sasuke for this. This is sooo far worse than the lying and screwing him w/o telling him. Sasuke killed one of his preceious people!! His second most precious, actually...There is NO forgiving this. None. He would go to the ends of the earth for his people and what's worse, is he knows Sakura didn't approve. I'm almost willing to bet he'd die than let Sasuke touch him again to honor Sakura's last desire. He's THAT loyal.

    OMG!! I can't believe you killed Sakura! I really can't. I...no. I really don't think Sasuke is capable of that. I think he's a manipulative SOB, but I don't think even he'd stoop that low. He just wouldn't.

    I just don't even know what else to say. I was so happy with the way this fic was progressing and I was looking forward to the way you were going to solve this problem, and now I'm just...I don't even know. I didn't think you'd kill Sakura!! *weeps* I don't see Naruto ever getting over this. It's not possible.

    Not to mention that the village is going to have to kill Sasuke b/c really, murdering one of their own shinobi can't go unpunished. Omg. Poor Naruto. All three of them are going to end up dead. Sasuke is going to have to be killed or at least imprisoned for life. Naruto is going to refuse to let him touch him no matter what the village decides and thus, he's going to slowly die too.

    Oh gods. I can't handle this. I'm gonna go cry now.
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  • From shadowsonata on May 16, 2008
    *Reaches for her scythe, glaring at Jelp* Run, little kitten, run.
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  • From sweetciel on May 16, 2008
    Aww hell...I hope Sasuke somehow gets away with it.
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  • From animeaddict666 on May 16, 2008
    WOW. OK, I have to admit that the plot seemed far fetched, but I love how insane and desperate you've made Sasuke. Very believable. The only suggestion I have for your writing style is to use more action and dialog and less narrative. It's too much telling and not enough showing. Great job though. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - SasuNaru723 on May 16, 2008
    NO WAY IN HELL HE DIDN'T??? Sakura is really dead? Damn, Sasuke... he's in way too deep of waters!! Naruto's probably either going to kill Sasuke and then himself or just kill Sasuke and live a life as a numb and no longer emotional being (or maybe there's a more hopeful and better ending?). Wow, I'm going to have to wait for the next chapter to see how this all falls into place. Obviously Sasuke had left in the morning because he knew Naruto was going to find Sakura was murdered none other than by him (plus Sasuke wanted to get a head start). Those two, no matter what peril situation whether if that's against each other or for each other, are constantly chasing one another to the ends of the Earth. Well... now my heads going to be dishing out all the possible scenarios for next chapter. Hope to read it soon whenever you have it completed, Jelp! Have lots of fun in the sun in the meantime!

    ~SasuNaru723~

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  • From ANON - littleolmee on May 15, 2008
    Oh don't hide Jelp, your safe; from me anyway. What a turn of events. How is this going to play out? What will happen between Sasuke and Naruto? On the edge of my seat here! Thanks for the update. Take care.



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  • From zimcrazed on May 15, 2008
    holy shit! sasuke's gone mad!!! i don't want to believe it! him and naruto are supposed to live happily ever after! please say sakura was clumsy and just kinda fell on the kunai!
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  • From ANON - Sancta on May 15, 2008
    :not glaring, clapping: It's about time someone killed her!!! I'm not completely bashing Sakura, but come on, how long did it take before the bitch became useful... and then you just fall back on your second choice because he's too freaking emotionally scared to know better... Women like that make me sick, just wanna beat their head in with kunai's too. So rant completed :applauds: Nice fucking job, oh and I liked the smex too... Remember take it easy on Sasuke - he did lose his entire clan in one night :huggles him: the poor thing
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  • From MichiTheThird on May 15, 2008
    Holy shit...damn Sasuke. Did you really have to go that far?? Kunai to the head...damn. Just damn. Talk about a sure-fire way to get Naruto to hate you ^^" Cosmos, I have NO idea about what's to come at ALL...I don't even have a pitiful guess. So, I can only hope and pray that you update soon!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on May 15, 2008
    Well, it is understandable for Naruto to be angry and upset at Sakura's death but he did and does love Sasuke more than he ever loved Sakura and he will need to understand Sasuke's feelings more. For too long, Naruto has been thinking more about his own feelings and not enough about the feelings of the person he knows that he loves the most. Naruto should feel guilty for pushing Sasuke to do this. It's wrong to murder but for Sasuke, it was a point of surviving. Without Naruto, he felt he was dead anyway. I sure hope that something will happen to give this story a happy ending! Right now things don't look so good for poor Sasuke.
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  • From LadyWolf on May 15, 2008
    I just knew it!!! You just HAD to make Sasuke a psycho killer!!! I'm rantin' ravin' that nothin' good was gonna come of this situation!!!


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  • From lexjamandme on May 15, 2008
    Oh... I'm glaring alright. Don't you worry about that.
    God, excellent chapter and I just love Naruto's inner turmoil but now... Sasuke. Dammit. What a way to end!!
    Looking forward to the next.
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