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By : Jelp
  • From shadowsonata on May 25, 2008
    *Sighs and puts down her scythe* Poor Jelp, okay, I want make an attempt on your life until you are off the meds and crutches...Hell, I am just happy that is wasn't really Sasuke;but, seriously, what the fuck? Tsunade? Like for real? *Chuckles* I sooo did not see that coming. Huh. Well, that just makes this plot even more twisted. *Smirks* At least it is going to have a happy-kinda sorta- ending. Oh and by the way, I am in LOVE with the Agreement. Okay, that's all.

    Ja
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  • From sweetciel on May 24, 2008
    Oh dear!!!! I hope he's not fatally injured.
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  • From ANON - Ookima on May 24, 2008
    What the hell did you do to my Naruto!
    Oh my god, sasuke illed him without knowing why he was acting that way!
    you big meanie
    but
    you must keep writting
    this has me soooo hooked up!
    Update!
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  • From MissMayumi on May 24, 2008
    *glares*

    damn you..=]
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  • From ANON - Mini Naru-chan on May 24, 2008
    It was... Tsunda? Oh damn, you must update!! No, Naruto! Then Sakura knew! Oh gosh, this story had me running around the house yelling about Tsunda being insane.
    Is Naruto dead? If he is... then Sasuke's going to kill himself. Oh dear!
    Update! I will not leave this computer until you do!! -stares at computer screen blankly-
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on May 24, 2008
    Wow what a twist to this story. I'm so surprised that it is all Tsunade's doing. I didn't think it would be Sasuke to kill Sakura, I just couldn't see him doing anything else that would hurt Naruto. Oh man how is this going to turn out. Again take it easy and get well soon.


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  • From ANON - V on May 24, 2008
    Thank you for not making Sasuke the killer. I'm sad that it's Tsunade thought. I've always liked her.

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  • From ANON - animelover on May 24, 2008
    whew, i'm glad it wasn't sasuke ... kinda. man, that was some plot twist and man, tsunade definitely has issues. GEEZ!

    nice job with the "keep 'em guessing" element.
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  • From sakuyalove on May 24, 2008
    Don't try and hobble too fast in your drugged state.
    It was a good chapter. If the readers are angry, it means they're still interested in the story.
    And it's fun for us writer to leave cliffies, no? ;)
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  • From Nikana on May 24, 2008
    You? crutches?well hope you get better soon!^^
    You know,when you said that Naruto got an idea,I really thougth that he was going to henge into Sakura(hiding his signature of course) and then confront Sasuke as if nothing happened,then seen Sasuke's reaction,and hearing his threesome proposal,he will became confuse and suspicious,but hey! its your magnificent angsty story,not mine *_^
    byeO
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  • From lexjamandme on May 24, 2008
    Cruel... so cruel. Whenever anyone says I'm a mean author, I am going to point them to you with a trembling bottom lip and a pointed finger of accusation.
    Excellent update! God, I never saw it coming. I hoped it wasn't Sasuke, but lets face it, he hasn't been the most stable guy this story and now...
    WOW!
    Until the next...
    Oh, please don't kill Naruto. Please. Not much I wouldn't give you actually... name it.
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  • From Allys on May 19, 2008
    LOL, I'm not going to hurt you but Holy Cripes woman!! Sasuke has freaking lost it. And by it I mean everything, not just his sanity, freaking Everything. Stupid STUPID boy!! Oh my god... I was really hoping against hope that he hadn't actually killed Sakura but was like holding her hostage somewhere but... Oh Man. There's no coming back from this. How are either of them going to live now? If Naruto kills Sasuke then how will he get his yin chakra?? (Sakura didn't exactly have time to share her discovery). And if he doesn't kill Sasuke... :(, yeah I can't possibly see how that would work. I'm really intrigued to see how this is going to end, I already know it can't possibly "well". So I've resigned myself. now just to see what your amazing brain comes up with!! I'm sorry I took so long to get to this. I've been way to busy and stories have been getting lost in my tabs when I try to save them for later *sighs*. Now off to finally begin The Agreement, cause damn you're WAY ahead of me!!
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  • From fujinakaheero on May 19, 2008
    WHOA!!!
    Holy crap... was not expecting that, i figured Sasuke kidnapped her or something... but not kill her O_O
    DUDE, huge plot twist.

    I love it.

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  • From KinOfDragons on May 18, 2008
    Anyone else hear that? That's the sound of the shit hitting the fan. DX Oh LAWD! This is so dramatic...;o;
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  • From ANON - spikemyangel on May 18, 2008
    ...damn you! you really suck! eeevil!!!! but i love you for it anyways. seriously, evil. the only thing i have issues with is Sakura's body. Sasuke is a master of fire jutsu.....and even if he goes nuts over Naruto, he's stil a ninja! He could kill someone, leave no evidence that it was him and there would never be a body to be found, then he and Naruto would go at it like rabbits for the rest of eternity and live happily ever after >_<
    i love happy endings at the end of soul shattering angst...justifies the torture you put us through. oh well, however it plays out is up to you, and even if you twist the knife and make that blank angsty void in me hurt a bit more, i'll be happy. i also admire greatly the ability to rationalize Naruto needing sex from Sasuke to survive. fandoms with chakra, demons, or magic are the most fun ever.
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