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By : Jelp
  • From ANON - mango on May 29, 2008
    oh yeah! a new take on the title "Mine!"

    "You're the matter with me! This is all your fault," Naruto said, sobbing harder as his body began to shake with sobs. "No...it's mine. I should never have led you on..."


    you're the best jelp~! this story really does get better and better! feel better soon!
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  • From ANON - mango on May 29, 2008
    OOOOOOH i should have known that you wouldn't resort to sasuke-kill! there was suuch an amount of joy that went through my system when i read this chapter~! this is a real writer. gawd. lol.
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  • From on May 29, 2008
    I don't remember if I reviewed, but more onegai!! This is so yummy and juicy and cryfully angsty, I love it.
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  • From ANON - KinOfDragons on May 28, 2008
    ...Whoa. Talk about a mind fuck. XD I'M SO RELIEVED IT WASN'T SASUKE! I wasn't sure just how crazy you were planning to make him. Which, as it turns out, was not that crazy. Most people go for that so it's kinda the expected but that doesn't mean it's always best. Definitely didn't expect it to be Tsunade though. Like...dang. WTF. THAT BITCH CRAZY (in this story! =D) Loved the chapter. My eyes started to burn as soon as you mentioned the pepper powder and I thought, man, Sasuke's so much more tolerant than me cuz I would've BEAT Naruto's ass in that situation. Like man...=D
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  • From bluegenjutsu on May 26, 2008
    Thanks for the new chapter!! I'm so glad that Sasuke wasn't the killer (even though it would be understandable) but it's terrible that Naruto was trying to make Sasuke be the one that killed him. I sure hope that Tsunade gets there in time to save Naruto and that she confesses. It's strange that she would be a murderer but it's better her than Sasuke. ;)
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  • From Allys on May 26, 2008
    Whoa.... Okay then. I'm really freaking happy it wasn't him. But DAMN!!! What a MESS! No I hadn't really though that Sasuke would kill Sakura, but then YOU said he did it!!! LOL, I totally fell for it, I was seriously wondering how they were going to come back from that. Tsunade huh? That's crazy. Wy twisty and freaking Stupid Shizune!!! OMG!!! Didn't she realise what would happen if she told Naruto that?? WTF?? Is she just trying to get more people killed?? Is Tsunade gonna kill her? Cause she seems a little psycho right now and Shizune's stupidity damn near killed Naruto. This is me assuming that with your capitalised reassurances XD, Naruto is still alive and kicking. Can't exactly have a happy ending without the boy now can we? this story wreaks total havoc on my emotional balance XD. *hugs u*. Thanks so much for the update sweetie!! i'm off to check out the Agreement!
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  • From ANON - Sancta on May 26, 2008
    you just seriously confused the fuck out of me :angry pout: i don't like how this is turning out, i mean i see what you are trying to do, but it just leaves a bad taste in my mouth, and a really huge headache. you're a really good writer, just remember to keep it simple
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  • From on May 26, 2008
    *phew* I knew there was no way you could make Sasuke kill her like that. Really. I did.
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  • From ANON - dyessie on May 26, 2008
    you're so stupid naruto.
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  • From amazingZ on May 25, 2008
    this has got to be one of the most frustrating fics i've ever read. it's great though, and i really like it... i cant wait for the next chapter. all i wish is for there to be a happy ending. seriously, dont you owe it to the two characters after all the suffering you put them through?!

    anyway, i'll be on the lookout for an update. i totally knew sasuke didnt kill her and i'm quite happy that i was right. :) there are parts that frustrate me a LOT but i'm glad the ending is approaching. make sure you include a happily ever after!
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  • From kitsuko999 on May 25, 2008
    Poor Jelp is on crutches? What happened for the need of surgery?? I do hope your okay (and no, I didn’t see any errors and even if there were, I probably wouldn’t remember them since the whole chapter was that intense and emotional to read)! I’m glad that there will be a happy ending. And Tsunade’s Sakura’s killer! Now that makes absolute sense! But poor, poor Sasuke. I understand his position is one of utter confusion, fear, and worry what with Naruto flinging himself at Sasuke and forcing Sasuke to kill Naruto. How scary! Ma, but since this will have a happy ending, there’s no doubt Naruto will be fine. Thank you for the updated chapter, Jelp! Hope you recover and take it easy in the meantime!

    ~SasuNaru723~

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  • From jihaaa on May 25, 2008
    Oh My God My heart beated like there was no tomorrow, please hurry and update, I want, no nedd to know whats gonna happend now :)
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  • From alleycat88 on May 25, 2008
    Oh god....this story is sooo good! Please update!
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  • From ANON - sickgirl on May 25, 2008
    holy shit!

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  • From LadyRonin on May 25, 2008
    this was a blazin chapter but i expect no less from you. the only reason i am not reading the agreement is because it is a threesome. making the hokage kill sakura was brillant even if you left on horrible cliffhanger i only pray that you will update or i will proably be as crazy as the hokage.
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