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By : Jelp
  • From onobaby on May 28, 2007
    Whoa! Not what I was expecting. Usually, most authors write the whole sakura bashing, kind of screwing in front of her, then calling her stupid or something. This is a new twist. I really like it. I am interested where you are going to take this story. Will Sasuke be evil and try to get naruto's body, heart and soul? Was there a three-some foreshadowing underlying there somewhere? Sakura will always be a yaoi fangirl at heart LOL!
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  • From ANON - Kaida on May 23, 2007
    Great story even for a one-shot. Would love to see it expanded at least a little more.
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  • From ANON - Kamikyo on May 15, 2007
    I would realy like this story to become a multichapter. A threesome between the three woul be very hot.^^
    The characters are very IC. I like this storyline. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - dyessie on April 21, 2007
    go to hell sakura.. you deserve to die.. the earth doesn't need another slut like you.. grrr..

    dear author.. would you please place naruto's heart in sasuke's hands..? and leave sakura in total agony..? thank you.. you're the best..^^
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  • From ANON - Halloween on April 19, 2007
    Ho'shit, that was great. Well done, keep writing. Your writing intoxicates me
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  • From cloudydayz on April 13, 2007
    I definitely think you should write more! Sad, though. Although, I admit to being angry at Sasuke and Naruto initially. I can't stand unfaithfulness. But then Sasuke seemed so...pathetic, maybe even slightly ridiculously pathetic. An interesting dynamic you have set up here. Unfortunately, and I am really not into Het, but I cannot see myself being satisfied with Naruto leaving Sakura (scandalized that I even wrote that! I hate nartuo/sakura fics!) Still, I actually despise Sasuke in this fic. Manipulative rape?! What an asshole! In this fic, I would actually like to see Sasuke suffer unto death pathetic and alone. Sakura sure doesn't deserve to suffer (I can't believe I wrote that either! The little yaoi person inside of me is screaming in rage.) and Naruto always has to suffer unrequited love in these fanfics. I would love to see the tables turn on Sasuke. I haven't read very many fics that have taken this angle. Good work!
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  • From Genderless on April 05, 2007
    This is by far the best Naruto fic I have read in a long time.
    I usually hate one-shots, but I feel this was wrapped up pretty nicely, even if it doesn't feel so final and definite; I don't know if I want more or not.
    Either way, this is still a satisfyig piece.
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  • From UzumakiLover on April 05, 2007
    *_* dude that was great!!!!!!!! I not really a big Sakura fan, but the way she came off here was really good. I mean I felt for her you know? Heheh dude Sasuke is a sneaky bastard! It was a great one-shot if you make it a multi what would be ny new addiction since I'm hooked on Restless! That was tripy...Naruto all fucked up, it would explain why he didn't say Sasuke's name when his cummed. crazy!
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  • From ANON - macy on April 05, 2007
    how sad. i definitely wasn't expecting a story like this when i opened the link. i liked it a lot though. hmm..made me think a bit. i was actually contented with this as a oneshot. i think it has impact already. besides, a multichapter fic may just be too heartwrenching for me. anyway, really nice job.
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on April 04, 2007
    It is up to you what to do with this but I've got to say it was a fantastic chapter. At first I thought you might have had it in the wrong section; with Naruto and Sakura being married, but as I read and the story unfolded I became enthalled with it. I like that you had elements from the manga and anime; like Naruto being lousey at genjutsu and even the possible 'love triangle' in team 7. Also the characters came across as they do in the series, reacting to the situtions you put them in away that seemed believable. It was bittersweet. Sakura not wanting to hurt either of them and just so long as she knew she still had a place she would keep quiet. Sasuke really in love with Naurto but not being able to get what he really wants finding a way to get enough to give him some happiness allowing him to feel he could continue living. And poor Naruto not knowing how important he really was to both his old teammates. The boy who had no one now needed by many. . . anyway thanks for sharing your story with everyone, it really was a great read. I'll keep my eyes out for it, just in case you do decide to add to it; it would be great to see more on this story but I leave that up to you. Take care and thanks again.
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  • From ANON - ai-chan on April 04, 2007
    dat was goooood~
    i actually like sakura~
    but not with sasu or naru~ cuz they make mad hott sex lol
    so i'm glad you didn't make her a bitch like other stories!
    so proud of u! lol
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  • From ANON - ai-chan on April 04, 2007
    dat was goooood~
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  • From jinE on April 04, 2007
    how...disturbing. 0.o no offense.
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  • From ANON - dana on April 04, 2007
    i really liked this but i was sad that sasuke seemed so pathetic. if you continue i would love for naruto to find out what has been going on and that sakura knew about it. maybe find out what sasuke can do when he is awake. but don't stop writing restless i wann aknow how it ends.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on April 04, 2007
    This was so great!!! But I'd love it if it was multi-chaptered and an eventual SasuNaru with Sasuke winning Naruto's heart too. ;)
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