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By : Jelp
  • From sakuyalove on June 25, 2008
    How cute, you even gave Sakura her own heaven. And even if Tsunade was crazy she thinks she's with everyone she loves.
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on June 24, 2008
    AWwwwww! This was such a sweet ending!!! I'm sooo happy! I didn't think it would end this well with all the problems they had! And one of the sweetest part is the one of sakura's heaven! I actually though they had brought her back to life and had a family! But the final part was just as sweet! I hope you have more ideas for more fics! I will make sure to read them as long as naruto is in it!
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  • From Allys on June 24, 2008
    LOL, You just wanted to torture us didn't you XD. Thanks for that little note at the beginning it kept me from wandering if aliens had stolen your brain. For a while there I was like. They brought her back and then she divorced Naruto and married Lee XD. But then Sasuke... o.0... How did he get in there? Cause if she still hadn't gotten over him yet I think I'd seriously have to jump into the afterlife and kick her ass. Especially after all the drama in this story. Wooooo... It was definitely a roller coaster ride. But in the end this turned out to be one really wacky yet thoroughly amazing story XD. I love it. You rock my socks XD. The explanation about Tsunade's youth chakra thingy was Awesome LOLZ. It would serve her right. Don't go messing with shit, just do it all naturally XD. And in the end Naruto and Sasuke are together and all is right with the world XD. I'm also happy that they found the tea. Just in case. I'm sorry, I love both boys but I just love Naruto more ♥. So Congratulations on a job very well done! XD. I love people who finish their stories *Glomps u*. It just makes you even more awesome. I'm off to read the Agreement now XD Ja. Oh and my email is mizrubble22@yahoo.com just for the fun of it.
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  • From KoibitoFemme on June 24, 2008
    My goodness you did it. You pulled it all together and though I feel a little bad for both Sakura and Tsunade I still feel like you made quite an impressive and satisfying ending. Thank you. Now if you could stop causing me an ulcer with your other story. LOL
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  • From ANON - animelover on June 24, 2008
    well, the epilogue threw me for a sec, but i kinda liked it. was a little confused on how sasunaru made up, but hey, i love a happy ending.

    thanks for sharing!
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  • From lexjamandme on June 24, 2008
    Oh no... it's over. It was so good. I loved every minute of it. Even those minutes when I bit my nails and set on the edge of my seat hitting 'refresh' every five minutes hoping that another chapter would just appear.
    I never would have guessed the outcome and love it all the more because of that.
    I won't lie... when I read the beginning of this chapter I was like "Whaaaa???" but, I'm glad that Sakura's heaven is so beautiful.
    Oh my god... the end, with the limp. Priceless.
    And then the "I love you's"... I don't need to tell you that I live for that stuff.
    Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful story.
    :)M
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on June 24, 2008
    I'm terribly sad to see this story go but I know that there will be more wonderful stories to read from you and in a way I'm happy to know you'll have time to create some new ones. What I liked about this story was the struggle Sasuke faced between doing what he had to do and how those things weighed on his mind and heart. I liked how you presented his trouble with doing what he was told he had to do to save his most precious person. This wasn't one of those situations that had a clear cut distinction of right and wrong, many times the things that happened in this story blurred those lines. I think that you presented this story in a wonderful way, I enjoyed all the plot twists, the way your presented the characters, and how things turned out. Thank you for all your hard work in creating, writing, and posting this story. Please pass my thanks on to your beta's for their hard work as well; they are often forgotten by us readers and do play an important part for authors. Also thank you for the emailing list you have created to alert readers that you have posted, it is a very kind thing for you to do and I know the other readers also appreciate it. I look forward to seeing more of your works in the future, take care.

    littleolmee
    littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
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  • From on June 24, 2008
    I'm glad you put the warning in at the top, because when I first started reading, I got a little scared, sort of pissed, etc. If Sakura seriously ended up being with Sasuke and Naruto, that would be insane. The thing that you said it felt like heaven, and because that was what it was, was genius(did that sentence make sense?). I think that was the best part of this chapter. The rest was okay, it was kind of a wrap up. I don't see how else you could have really made it any better, but there wasn't much spark? Anyways, this story was great. I love your Sasuke. But I really love the Agreement! If I haven't expressed that enough in my reviews of that story, I LOVE IT! Keep writing! (even though I know you already wrote The Agreement..)
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  • From ANON - BennyPeace on June 24, 2008
    This was beautiful and intense and just. . . amazing. I loved it.
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  • From ANON - kauwgom on June 22, 2008
    this is definitely one of the better naruto fics around
    and one of the very few sasunaru fics I actually enjoy
    You keep them wonderfully in character and your writing style reads very nice.
    keep it up! :)

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  • From ANON - WHAT!!! on June 21, 2008
    I swear if this turns into another sasu/naru/saku fic I am going to slit my wrists.
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  • From lexjamandme on June 21, 2008
    OMG... so much happened! Tsunade. Wow. What happened to made her 'snap'. Sai kills me.
    And Sasuke, I thought for sure you were going to kill him. Okay, not 'for sure' but I was very worried.
    And then, Naruto. What's his decision going to be? I can't wait.
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  • From Allys on June 21, 2008
    OMG! That is the evilest cliffie in the history of Ever!!!! Please say he wants Sasuke *Big teary puppy dog eyes*. lol, oh gods I know I shouldn't be worried cause it's you and you're a sasunaru girl when you're not playing around with naruhina XD. *loves on you* I'll have faith that you're evil enough to not throw in the plot twist just to shock us. Other than that I think was chapter was excellent. It worked everything out. Connected all the dots and the dots you set up were pretty damn far away and well hidden. I would have never gotten this far. Your brain amazes me every time *nods happily*. It's one of the things I love most about your stories. Not one of them follows the beaten path XD. I can't believe it's almost over. *Huggles u to bits* Thank you so much for the update sweetie, and for the promise of a speedy epilogue *loves on you* ♥.
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on June 21, 2008
    I'm really happy the epilogue is almost ready!!1 Thanks soooo much!
    I really liked this chapterbut...... WHAT A CLIFFHANGER!! GEEZE! At least Im content knowing that I will get to know naruto's desicion soon!
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  • From LadyRonin on June 21, 2008
    with this chapter you cemented this story as a definite rereader. i do have a question though. is the fifth really crazy or was she really out for vegence. the way the story ended up being i won't even begin to try and imagine how the story ends just can't wait to see it. i am also wondering if you will be starting another story, i really enjoy yours. :)
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