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By : Jelp
  • From spoon10488 on November 12, 2007
    awesome chapter can't wait for the next one
    =)
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  • From bluegenjutsu on November 12, 2007
    Thanks for the new chapter!! It was great to see the reason why Sasuke was having sex with Naruto (and happy about it!) and that Sasuke may still have a chance to know Naruto's love if he would just be brave enough to tell Naruto the truth. :)
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  • From MissMayumi on November 12, 2007
    oohhh!! This was a great twist to the story!!

    *hugs*

    Please continue soon, I'm really looking forward to this. It's an addiction..

    If only you had included the sex in the third chapter..but that last line was brilliant

    *two thumbs up*

    Sasuke and his evil Sharingan..I wish I was Naruto :/
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  • From MichiTheThird on November 12, 2007
    Several times over!! *squeal* You go Sasuke! Naruto's life and his raw emotions are in your hands!! Damn, was this a good read so far. I hope you update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Fox_Trot on November 12, 2007
    I love this and cannot wait to read the next chapter. Hurry up and post it please.
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  • From ANON - Billie on November 11, 2007
    I hope Naruto to end up with Sasuke even thought he's a jerk for taking advantage of him. I seems like Sakura is a good enough person to let that happen, for Naruto's happiness at least.
    This is going to be good fight between Sakura & Sasuke. I think Sasuke deserves to get beat up a little bit.
    Thanks for the amazing story. I hope you update soon.


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  • From basilika on November 02, 2007
    wow, quite an original storyline. VERY interesting, can't wait to read more. ^^ Please, be nice and post chapter 3. ^^
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  • From ANON - Niya on October 26, 2007
    I like your story, very original! Please update as soon as possible! :)
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  • From ANON - Aice on October 13, 2007
    I am really happy that I found this piece of fiction.
    It is soo... enjoyable.
    It's hard to decide who Naruto should be with in the end.

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  • From ANON - bk on October 09, 2007
    OH LORD YOU MUST UPDATE! This story is so freaking awesome and I am so eager to find out what happens! As usual I love this fic, just as I do everything else you've ever written. Thanks, Jelp, for allowing me the privilege of reading your work. T_T
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  • From ANON - JJ on October 08, 2007
    when r u going to reles the next chapter i want to know what happens so pleas let me know when it will be posted.
    thaks and keep up the good work.
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  • From susanna on October 08, 2007
    I can only second what renzuite is saying... Boiled down, it seems that this reviewer, thatwassarcasm, is mainly complaining that Sakura does not immediately beat up Sasuke.

    I think that Sakura's reaction is realistic - being rather shocked and confused, and not knowing what to do, and only after some time coming to her senses and beginning to act - and actually, what she does is rather intelligent, thinking which were the situations when Sasuke took advantage of Naruto and intervening then.

    The next step would be to tell Naruto.

    I do think that she is in character as well. She is not very heroic, and most of all, not spontaneously heroic as Naruto who charges in without thinking. She always has to overcome her fear. She only punches people when she can be sure that they don't strike back.
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  • From renzuite on October 07, 2007
    The above reviewer, thatwassarcasm, is so incredibly wrong (I'm so angry at her/him, I could start calling names). If you give up writing this story because of that negative review, I and a lot of other readers be VERY disappointed. I really like where this fic is going. The characters do not seem ooc to me. Please update this story!! I really, really look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From MissMayumi on October 07, 2007
    I love you!

    The smut was WAY better than what you sent me..

    tehe..!
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  • From ANON - Ayako on October 07, 2007
    Oooh, I didn't know there was a second chapter to this story. Niice. You know, even as a SasuNaru fan, I'm not sure how I feel about how this will turn out. I have a soft spot for SakuNaru, especially when Sakura's acting in a "positive" manner, and that means when she seems to really genuinely care about Naruto. Besides, her going against Sasuke for Naruto rather than her being in the center is always more interesting to me, hahaha. This is where a threesome might be an okay choice...maybe. Sakura and Sasuke might try to kill each other while they make Naruto moan with delight. XDD
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