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By : Jelp
  • From ANON - bloempot on December 10, 2007
    I really love this story!
    I'm glad you're not making sakura some kind of bitch and every one is so in characters.
    you're doing a great job! please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Callie on December 10, 2007
    Come on Sakura, just play nice & give him to Sasuke.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on December 10, 2007
    Thanks for the new chapter!! I'm glad the next chapter's title is Truth!! Can't wait! :)
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  • From ANON - dragonlady sakura on December 10, 2007
    Finally, the gig is up! I'm glad Naruto is finally catching on to the deceit all around him. I'm biting my nails as we speak. Another great, tension filled chapter.
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on December 10, 2007
    No complaints from me on updating this story! Loved the chapter. I enjoyed how Naruto went to Sasuke to ask if he and Sakura were involved; it was really a logical conclusion to the clues. Who would think it would be what it really is; Sakura trying to keep Sasuke from Naruto. Naruto laying on Sasuke's bed was very funny, especially with Sasuke's physical reactions to it. Sakura's reactions were well done too, it's interesting that she feels some what in the wrong to keep them a part. I guess recognizing just what they mean to one another. When you left off at Sasuke finding a little pleasure with himself and started back with Naruto going to his house I thought you were going to have Naruto walk in on something . . . hee, hee. But I really like what you did better. Can't wait to see how you have Sasuke break all this too them and how they react. I think Naruto might feel worried about if Sakura seeing it as he has cheated on her. He seems to take their marriage very seriously, which is natural I'd think. Well keep up the great work, thanks for the update and take care.
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  • From macy on December 10, 2007
    this fic is scaring me. i dont know what to expect. im scared to read how everything will turn out. the tension! *PULLS HAIR OUT*
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  • From ANON - Huck on December 10, 2007
    Awesome chapter! I'm so happy you updated, and I'm not going to yell at you for updating this before IC. I actually like this one better, I think there is more depth to it. I feel closer to the characters in this story than in Restless or IC. Especially Sasuke. I think he's very well written in this fic. Anyway, keep it up and good luck with finals!
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  • From MidnightsKeeper on December 10, 2007
    this is getting really good. i can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From lexjamandme on December 09, 2007
    Oh my god... so good! The tension build up is excruciating, but worth it. At first, I wanted to hate Sasuke (as if I could for very long) but now, I feel really bad for him. He's just trying to help his friend who he lovesssssss. Yeah, sure, Sakura too, but Sasuke!!! Hugs.
    I loved the line where Sasuke comments on Naruto's bed shopping in Sasuke's house. Laughed out loud at that one.
    Looking forward to the next.
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  • From ANON - SasuNaru723 on December 06, 2007
    I really -REALLY absolutely LOVE this story to itty bitty pieces!!! The whole plot, the side smut scenes, the love that's there between Naruto and Sasuke (well so far it shows as one-sided love), and the bit of humor wrapped all in this lovely story! I love it and I'm so keyed up to read more!! ^0^
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  • From ANON - JJ on November 21, 2007
    Jelp that was awsome. I think i know how this is going to end. But then agin you can supprise me. I think that Sasuke is going to tell Naruto and he is going to be pissed and then he is going to forgive him after he realises that he did have felings for Sasuke, then he is going to divorse Sakura and stay with Sasuke. If im righ dont tell me if i gave u an idea just remmber to mention it when u post any of the chapters that has one of my ideas. So let me know when the new chapter is done.
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  • From kati on November 20, 2007
    thanks for emailing me! ^^ I liked thsi chappie a lot, how eveerything about sasuke's thoughts and reasonng were explained properly. Poor sasuke! he seems more vulnerable than anyone in this! Im really really dying to know how everyone will take it... i guess ill just have to wait and find out! ^_^ ja ne and thankyou for the intriguing story!
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  • From serenagold on November 19, 2007
    Ok. There is something very, very, very wrong with this story. Horribly wrong.


    However, if it manages to end with a Sasuke/Naruto/Sakura threesome, I'll forgive you. ;*





    Also, might I add, that an inexperienced Sasuke trying to push sperm into an unconscious Naruto is ridiculously and absurdly funny.
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  • From LindyStar on November 19, 2007
    Yeah for anatomy! That's all I wanted to say....

    XD just kidding! This was a very original story, I must say! And the sex is great too! (Maybe Sasuke and Sakura and Naruto will all make up and make out and have a kinky threesome)

    Sasuke: Hey Naruto, I hypnotize you with the Sharingan and have buttsecks with you on a weekly basis to save your cells from chakra mutation. OhbythewayIloveyoutoo.
    Naruto: >_< You Teme! *bending over* But I have to live to become the Hokage, so I'll take it like a man.
    *they commence buttsecks, Sakura walks in*
    Sakura: OMGohshitthatshot! *grabs a strap-on and proceeds to give Sasuke a taste of his own medicine*
    Sasuke: Nyoro~!
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  • From ANON - Huck on November 19, 2007
    I'm so glad this got updated! It pretty much made my day. I liked the flashback and how we got to see what happened the very first time. I was surprised at how reluctant Sasuke was, but it makes sense. It's interesting to see how his feelings have escalated over time. Can't wait for the next chapter!
    P.S. Thanks for putting me on the e-mail list.
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