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By : Jelp
  • From ANON - Bri on January 03, 2008
    Dragging it out, hunh? The suspense is too much! Can't wait to see how Naruto reacts to the news...I hope he chooses Sasuke even though Sakura is semilikable in your story, but Sasuke/Naruto tops Sakura/Naruto any day :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2008
    Wow this is a powerful story. Had me crying at Sasu's lonliness. I can't wait to see how Naru takes it. hearing about it I mean. Can you add me to the updates?
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  • From ANON - kyuubikit on January 03, 2008
    Please please please post more asap... i'm dying for more I need to know how it ends...
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  • From lexjamandme on January 03, 2008
    *Cries* I just want Naruto to find out. That's all. Just find out. Yes, I would also appreciate it if he said "Thank you, Sasuke! You are my best friend and I know you were only doing it because you love me! I know, I'll totally ditch Sakura and you can spend the rest of the afternoon 'balancing' me out! What do you say, buddy?"
    Okay, admittedly, that wouldn't be Naruto at all, but still. You have to see where I'm going with this. Right? Right?
    *Sigh* And people get on me about cliff hangers...
    Awesome update... waiting patiently for the next... patiently, I say, patiently...
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  • From sakuyalove on January 03, 2008
    Chapter six was just great. Blaming poor Konohamaru for a diry prank! Continue soon please.
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  • From mls on January 03, 2008
    I Can't Wait To Read The Next Chapter!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Sayuri on December 22, 2007
    I've watched this fic since it first began, and it's really intriguing me now. It's so emotional on the part of Sasuke. I really hope you update soon because I want to see what happens when the truth is revealed. How will everyone act? Will Sasuke and Naruto ever have their 'happily ever after'? Will Sakura understand? Will there be a permanent cure for Naruto's Yang imbalance? So many questions!!! Please please update, I want to read more~
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 18, 2007
    Hey Jelp been a while so i see you havent lost ur touch so how is identidy crises comeing let me know when its out and let me know when there is a next chapter for mine and any other stories you are writeing k
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  • From ANON - mango on December 17, 2007
    This has turned into something really good :O


    I believe you're writing this on a whim (sasuke's in my head ._.) but please update more~! and frequently~! I'm looking forward to it! :D
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  • From ANON - areader on December 12, 2007
    hey jelp. ive read the one-shot to this (now ch 1) and thought it was pretty darn good, definitetly had me itchin' for more. so im glad to come back and see that its now a multichapter fic. i'm curious to how the story resolves itself. however, i do have a bit of a concern (for a lack of a better word), the sperm-to-save-life deal seems a bit farfetched even in a fanfiction. but most of all, tsunade's "idea" to get sasuke to bed naruto dulled down the intensity of story. it would been far more raw and passionate had it been from sasuke all the way bc he would have been working his pure emotions, lust, love, whathaveyou to naruto and not from duty (although the feeling sprang from it). so it basically waters down the initial plot as set up in ch 1. I suppose it was meant as a twist, but it wasnt necessary and convolutes the story. eh, but that's my teo cents. feel free to disagree. :-) nothing personal of course.
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  • From Allys on December 11, 2007
    LOL, Okay so I loved this chapter XD. Sorry I couldn't get to it sooner *hugs* Naruto was adorable and I got kinda nervous for a second there with him lying in the bed and everything XD. I was kinda hoping Sasuke would just come out and tell him. But LOL, next time for sure it seems :). I'm really excited about that, I have no idea how Naruto would react, so I'm dying to see what you think. I can't hardly wait XD. I love this story as twisted and sort of creepy as it is if I think about it too hard, LOL, somehow I think that just makes it better XD. And well, LOL the fact that it's Naruto and Sasuke *fangirly heart thump* Thanks so much for the update. I know it's the middle of exams and everyone's really busy, so I greatly appreciate it. Good luck with finals and everything *hugs* Ja♥
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  • From kati on December 11, 2007
    Thank you for emailing me with the link to the updated chapter, I wouldn't have found this otherwise! Things are progressing, developing... Oh, the drama! The suspense! lol I liked Naruto's POV and his reasoning about the situation. I really REALLY have no idea how Naruto is going to react, he is just so unpredictable! I can see the sasunaru-ness happening, Sakura's feelings about their relationship, etc. Sasuke is so cute... I just want to tackle him to the ground and smush him with happy kisses! XD Okay... sorry...

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2007
    Next Chapter: The Truth

    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    YOSH!

    i just REALLY hope that it is sasuke who tells naruto the truth. i really REALLY hope so
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  • From ANON - SasuNaru723 on December 11, 2007
    Awww! Sasuke got to snuggle with Naruto! That was so cute! Thanks for updating chapter 5 so soon! The next chapter for sure sounds like it will be quiet the interesting turn of events if it’s named “The Truth.”
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  • From ANON - yummy on December 11, 2007
    this is good keep it going up-date soon
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