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By : Jelp
  • From MichiTheThird on February 04, 2008
    *gushing tears* Oh my gosh...the moments between Sakura and Tsunade and Sasuke and Naruto when the truth was completely revealed...it made my heart ache so BADLY! x.x And though I ADORE Sasu/Naru/Sasu and I can barely stand to read Sakura paired with Sasuke or Naruto (at least not well-written)...I can't help but understand Sakura COMPLETELY in this fic. Almost makes me want her marriage with Naruto to last...if it weren't for the fact that Sasuke is alive and trying to save Naruto's life and is totally in love with him. Sasuke may have handled that horribly, but I'm STILL backing him up 100%!!! I still feel more sorry for him than ANYONE else in this fic, therefore I wish him the most happiness out of anyone else in this fic. Sakura and Naruto had their times to be happy, it's about time Sasuke got some happiness!
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  • From kitsuko999 on February 03, 2008
    Interesting turn of events! I wouldn’t have guessed Sakura would end up getting that pissed with Tsunade when Tsunade and Sasuke were only trying to be discreet with what Sasuke was doing to Naruto. I was little confused if when Sasuke told Naruto everything if that meant Sasuke mentioned the reason why Naruto needs Sasuke’s sperm and all; that Sasuke never intended to rape Naruto despite the sex being unknown to the blonde. Hell if I were in Naruto’s position I’d be grateful that my best friend was keeping me alive, although I’d be pissed that he had to do it so secretly without telling me (that kind of screws things up horribly as seen within the story). I still like this fic of yours. It’s got a new and unique kick to it that makes me to eager to read more till the very end. I’m very interested to see what the next chapter will turn out like, in which is very close to the ending right? Or was this going to be the last chapter? If so, will there be an epilogue continuing after – like either when Sakura finally returns to see how things are or seeing how Naruto behaves while Sakura’s gone and if Naruto slowly progresses back in trusting Sasuke?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2008
    le sigh

    her being gone permanently would be SO helpful :(

    i want to see how you pull together sasuke's and naruto's next meeting. sasuke can't continue to use his eyes, so i'm interested in which direction that will go, as well as the general interaction between the 2.

    thanks for the update
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2008
    no no... i admit i dont really like it at all......wow....everythings so crazy. and.....why does it feel like he won't choose sasuke in the end? aww shit... i'm not the type that can read that type of ending so if you can ....let me know somehow?
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  • From Allys on February 02, 2008
    This is some crazy shit XD, LOL. I don't even know what to think anymore. But I definitely can't say it's not interesting XD. Holy crap... that was certainly... unexpected, LOL. I'm thrown. I'm sitting here still reeling and just trying to take it in. I have no idea where you're going with this? Is it still going to be SasuNaru? or is it gonna end up SasuNaruSaku o.0?? I guess I'll just have to wait and see. I'm glad you got your groove back and hope the next chapter just flows *hugs*.

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  • From Mort on February 02, 2008
    I didn't know what to think of it when I read the summary-

    I was pleasantly surprised-
    Honestly I am all about Sakura dropping into a hole some place- But, you've written her in a very believable way- I'm almost torn-

    Looking for your next chapter-
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  • From lexjamandme on February 02, 2008
    Oh dear... where do I fall? Did I love it? Did I hate it?
    Okay here's the thing and I believe that I have grown as a person in the last five minutes because I can admit freely that I don't like Sakura. There. I said it. I don't like her. She makes me throw up in my mouth a little bit and so when I have to read about her undying love for Naruto (And, oh god, his for her) and how she's all a big self sacrificing paragon of beauty and strength... well, let's just say that I want to find a bus and run her down.
    Okay, that said. Obviously this was an AMAZINGLY written chapter if I'm that worked up about it... right. Amazing. The emotions from all those involved were almost overwhelming. I'm glad the secret is out and as suspected I feel for everyone (Even Sakura... and that kills me) because everyone was hurt from this one.
    I look forward to more! Thank you for this one.
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on February 02, 2008
    Okay I'm in the 'love it' category. What a twist! Just what is going on within the ANBU? Or could it be Root? Will they be able to clear Sakura's name? What about what Sasuke's way of keeping Naruto alive? Is Naruto going to continue to resist or after talking to Tsunade come to accept it? He often seems to have these not going to accept something and fight against it only to finally accept what he has to do. It seems Sasuke is loosing his Sharingan. Will he be able to use it to make Naruto compliant any more or will it have to be the normal way from now on; perhaps Naruto would rather know what is going on? Obviously Sasuke will be trying to woo Naruto while Sakura is gone. How is this going to affect Naruto and Sakura? Will the love Sasuke has for Naruto be returned in time or will it always just be a mission to save Naruto's life? Oh as if I wasn't already interested in this story now I've got a renewed one! Keep up the great work, love your story. Take care.

    littleolmee
    littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
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  • From alleycat88 on February 02, 2008
    I am one of the people who absolutely loved this chapter! Wow! Sakura...is a girl after my own heart! Update soon!
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  • From MissMayumi on February 02, 2008
    Omg! *eyes wide*

    That was such a turning point..and I loved it!

    Ooh, So now that Sakura's out of the picture, Sasuke can claim Naruto's heart! (and body)

    muahaha.

    *glomps!*

    ♥
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  • From Ihadadream on January 29, 2008
    Please update soon! This story is soooo great!!! Now that naruto knows and can't ignore what sasuke is doing to him, he will surely feel broken and empty... I really want them to be together in the end though, please! I wonder how Sasuke will explain the chakra problem to naruto, that's to say if naruto gives him a chance to explain. I wanna know what happens next!!!
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  • From snowren on January 26, 2008
    I love this fic!!! It's really hot and dramatic!
    Sasuke and Naruto makes a great couple
    mmmm.....would the seme/uke roles change in the future?
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  • From ANON - Ivy on January 24, 2008
    I love your story!!! I just reread chapter 7 again as I wish for an update :-)
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  • From ANON - jj on January 19, 2008
    yes jelp we still love u and i like where u left us hanging i hope that this fic is going to be realy good from this point on and i hope naruto exsepts sasuke as a love as well and i hope that sasuke dusent kill himself. well let me know when the next chapter is done

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  • From ANON - Ivy on January 18, 2008
    Great chapter!!! Love this story :-)
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