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By : Jelp
  • From ANON - Vylest0 on February 19, 2008
    Oh! Dear Sasuke finally at least got some type of requited 'affection'--and he's soo happy! I myself have to note how I really adored the 'surface feel' of this chapter in the partake of Sas/Naru's 'things-to-thoroughly-discuss' list (obviously on Naruto's). Personally, I got the feeling that it's not over on the emotional rollercoaster for these two (I hope not! XD ) but rather this chapter has opened up an arc to put both of the guys on fair grounds--note I don't necessarily believe even grounds, just squared away.

    Anywayz, forget my ramblings. I luv this story as always and it's flow a lot and I am so glad to see that you updated when u did. I was worried there for a moment...:) PLZ update soon!!!!! *teary eyed*
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  • From ANON - Rachel on February 19, 2008
    Your a genius! I'm amazed at how you came up with the logical facts of this story. And on top of that, being able to make it logical and enjoyable. You must have put a lot of effort into this story, and I, as a reader, am extremely appreciative of how great a writer you are. Thank you for putting out this great story for everyone to enjoy!
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  • From LadyRonin on February 18, 2008
    i haven't seen this story in a while so i was really haopy to have a chance to. i love your stories and have to say that evn if you wote about a hundred year old naruto running from sasuke i would proably read it, i love your style of writing so much. i especially like how you got rid of the wife and and made the fifth and her loyalities a little off. i would have bet money that she would have been routing for sakura. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on February 18, 2008
    Woohoo! Finally. Naruto and Sasuke together and Naruto was accepting. Hooray, first hurtle down and now only a few hundred more to go. Nice lemon, figures there would be a fight; hee, hee so them. Hmm, Tsunade is playing a dangerous game but, after all her losses in her life I can understand not wanting to loose Naruto at whatever cost and he needs Sasuke to live while he doesn't Sakura; I can understand her thinking. Sigh, if only you weren't dealing with a sometimes intellectually challenged person on one hand and on the other a somewhat emotionally challenged person. Just is never going to make for an easy time. Love how this is going, thank you for that peek in at Tsunade and Shizune, I think that really added to things. Love that Sasuke finally sucked it up and admitted. I knew Naruto would never keep what Tsunade told him about Sasuke to himself and he even offered to help him right off the bat. What a good guy; even if he was grossing himself out on it, hee, hee. Keep up the great work. Take care.

    littleolmee
    littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Ivy on February 18, 2008
    Great chapter as usual! I loved the interaction between the two. Also, very sneaky of Tsunade... I actually didn't see that setup coming ^_^ Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 18, 2008
    Absolutely love the story. Don't stop!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 18, 2008
    Wahhhhh!!!!! So sexy I loved every minute of it. Funny thing is I had started reading this story a while back and then I stopped and I suddenly decided to check to see if it was updated and surprisingly it was. Although I had to read several other chapters to catch up, but I was so happy. It is a good story and can't wait to see how this turns out for all of them. I hoping Naruto goes for Sasuke, but that's just wishful thinking.
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  • From ANON - Neil on February 18, 2008
    I've been waiting for this for so long. I was really feeling bad for Sasuke. I really wanted him to have Naruto. I think it worked really good in your story that Sakura left because it gives Naruto a change to think things over without the guilt & distraction. I don't blame Sakura for punching the living daylights out of the Hokage. Also if Sasuke wasn't such a coward it wouldn't have had to go this far.
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  • From hpn827 on February 18, 2008
    You are the best.
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  • From lexjamandme on February 18, 2008
    OMG... finally... finally... real communication. I have marked my calendar and shall be celebrating this day for many years to come.
    Oh... and it was super hot. And those boys... written wonderfully.
    Looking forward to more as always.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on February 18, 2008
    This was such a great chapter! Both of them seem so happy, even though Naruto is probably feeling guilty about Sakura. The sex scene and all that came before it and after it, was wonderful! :)
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  • From MissMayumi on February 18, 2008
    eek!

    Good job, hun!

    It was fantastic, and I'm excited for the next chapter!
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  • From gaara89 on February 18, 2008
    I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - jj on February 13, 2008
    jelp u know u havent lost ur tuch so keepit up i love this one so how is it going to turn out is naruto going to be with sauske and leave sakura or is he going to have both is i see u got naruto to admit that he has felling for sauske and he dont know what to do so let me know what ur planing for this story and keep me posted for the next chapter and let me know when any of ur new storys are out and any new chapter u r posting till then later
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  • From ANON - Ivy on February 08, 2008
    I really liked this chapter. I hope Naruto won't keeping hurting Sasuke just because he's upset. I know Sasuke lied but I feel he's the most sympathetic character in this fic. Anyways look foward to an update =)
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