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By : Jelp
  • From ANON - Anya on August 28, 2011
    What an amazing fic! The story was so detailed and plausible, and the ending was perfect. I don't think I expected any of the plot twists. Did you plan everything out beforehand, or did you make it up as you went? I don't often review fics, but considering I read this straight through, I figure I owe it to you. Awesome job!
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  • From ANON - venus on July 10, 2010
    I read this in one shot and i must say... You had me stuck the whole way..... Its rare to see such a complex story where not one character is in the black or in the white..... all were like a dark grey.... the way you made each character act was unreal and sooo good.... im still at a lose.... I loved this story and hated it at the same time ya know..... It was a crazy rollercoaster but i enjoyed it........... VERY ORIGINAL!!!!!!!!!!! You are a very good writer!!!!!! I cant wait to read the rest of ur stories!!!!!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on June 28, 2010
    wow. that's all I can say. wow. that was wonderful.
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  • From missbri88 on May 16, 2010
    Wow! This story was amazingly awesome! All the complicated twist and turns put me in the mind of a Shakespeare's play. I loved it and I'm happy I decided to check out all your posted works. I doubt you have a response to my meger praise but if u do, you can contact me via email at missbri88 @ hotmail or gmail (dot) com
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  • From ANON - Timber on October 26, 2009
    Mine chap. 1

    Sakura must not really love Naruto....because....she didn't seem upset when she walked in on him and Sasuke. Plus she didn't try to tell Naruto the truth or order Sasuke to stay away. (Women do not share their man with anyone.....thats just not how women are.) Seems like she's ok with it because its Sasuke. (We fans are so ok with it .....actually we prefer Naruto with Sasuke! :) heheh yay
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  • From ANON - Timber on October 26, 2009
    Mine Chap 1

    This is a totally unique viewpoint that totally had me floored. I so had my jaw on the floor in shock.(In a GOOD WAY!!) I so loved Sasuke's answers and how serious he was and how sweet he was in his care of Naruto. (Sasuke&Naruto are so my FAVORITE couple!!!) I feel bad for Sakura but looking forward to see more of Sasuke and Naruto together....cause they are just so ment for each other!! :)Sakura really does not deserve Naruto!!
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  • From Ikippiki on December 10, 2008
    This story was soooo great! I;m sad for Tsunade though, I really like her. I was kind of surprised when I started reading the first part of the epilogue, you really got me! I was like "What?! 2 husbands, 6 kids?! And Sasuke married to Sakura?!!!!" lol
    I'm looking forward to reading your other stories!
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  • From ANON - esachinaloca on October 14, 2008
    i didn't realize that i didn't review this earlier. n/e ways, i LOVED this story so much, i was checking everyday to see if u updated, for real! i can't believe ppl didn't like this story, because it was so well written, and i loved all the conflicts & how u protray Naruto & Sasuke perfectly. awesome job!! one of my favorite stories!!
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  • From ANON - Nanin on August 20, 2008
    I loved your story!
    Absolutely fell in love with it!

    I hope you make more of these!
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  • From AKissCouldKill on August 13, 2008
    God, I love this story!!!!!!It was un-believably amazing! Sasuke raping Naruto? Wowwwww. You leave me speechless :D
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  • From Turkaholic on July 09, 2008
    I thought this story was amazing. I haven't seen a plot like it, and it's you that's brought me round to thinking NaruSaku is actually sweet because you write it incredibly well. As for the SasuNaru, well you write that even better! Such a shame that Mine has finished now, though I think I'll be reading it again at some point. :3

    [This isn't my account, my e-mail is: red891@hotmail.co.uk - even though you don't have to reply. xD]
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  • From ANON - Kang on June 27, 2008
    .....Well! I'm glad it sort of ended up all right. The past few chapters made me so melancholy, but this one left me feeling a sense of closure. Great job and I look forward to more stories and updates of current stories by you in the future. Thanks for sticking this out to the end and finishing it! It was great to not be left hanging. Good luck in all your endeavors.
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  • From MichiTheThird on June 26, 2008
    Oh my goodness. *breathes* Emotional roller coaster is right. After so long, it's finally finished. I don't know where to begin. I think I'll start with Sakura's resting in peace. She deserves it, and we all hope her heaven was as happy as you described it or more. She was an innocent and it was sad/shocking/heartbreaking to see her murdered so suddenly without having the chance of settling things once and for all with Sasuke and Naruto...or moving on, or finding peace with them somehow. Tsunade's case was very disturbing...had me completely distraught for a while there, but I'm glad she's slowly recovering her senses. Shizune pissed me off with her stunt of telling Naruto that Sasuke was the one behind Sakura's death. I, like Sasuke, refuse to forgive her for that. Sasuke finally got his happy ending...which is the one character I was supporting ALL the way, even though he was dumb enough to let Sakura steal Naruto from right under his nose. I still supported him. He got what he wanted/needed...and Naruto is happy to be by his side. So, I couldn't be happier. *sigh* I'm relieved, I guess, and happy to have finished reading the end of this fic at last. Thanks for sharing.

    -yuurimaoh@gmail.com
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  • From bluegenjutsu on June 25, 2008
    Thanks for the wonderful ending!! Though you did have me worried at the beginning of this chapter!! :D I really love this story and it will always be one of my favorite all-time SasuNaru stories! Thank you for writing this and sharing it! :)
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  • From ANON - mimi on June 25, 2008
    Jelp, i really, really love you! i know you must have many other marriage proposals from better candidates, so i'm not gonna waste your time with mine. i just love you and your fics, all of them. really, i do. but especially this story, it was... i don't have words for it. yes, but that's mostly because my english is as crappy as you could ever imagine. just know that we enjoyed MINE immensely. i APPRECIATE you, JELP, and your MINE, as one of the rarest jewels in the word-crafting art found in aff's l'ouvre.
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