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Reviews for Along Came a Fox

By : FlammablePenguin
  • From Yabun on April 04, 2007
    I like where the story seems to be going =) Grammer, spelling, and punctuation look good (so no complaints there); however, it would probably make the story easier to read if you did not break the sentences up so much, other than that you are O.K ^.^

    I adore GaaNaru/NaruGaa, so I have an invested interest now 0.o; this means you'll most likely hear from me again! XD

    'Til next time!
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