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Reviews for The Fountain: Twilight

By : Narutolovr
  • From LilyEverlasting on February 03, 2012
    I haven't read this, I can't. It's not legible. So far, I peeked at the first three or so chapters, everything is a giant block of text with no spacing. I sympathize if you had no idea, this happened to one of my stories and I had no clue it looked like that until I was told. Anyway, I thought I'd let you know :)
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  • From oohshiny on December 01, 2007
    O-KAAAAAY!!! then update it. but i dun wanna check every day over the next 2 weeks, so email me when you update. every time. my email is deannathx@comcast.net
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  • From TakiTenshi on April 04, 2007
    Strange plot...hmm. I know I can grow to like it though, if you'd write the next chapter with more detail and information of the story. And explain the clans a bit better, like what they are. Demons....I mean youkai....or angels. And when does Naruto come in, lol.

    That was a very short but interesting star....hope to read more soon!

    Ki`Tara
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on April 03, 2007
    well, you're off to a good start, it's just hard to tell where you're going from the summary and the prologue. Well, you'll just have to show us then. Don't worry about how many reviews you get, just keep writing and updating your story. Good luck with your writing and i hope your inspiration carries you somewhere wonderful.
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