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Reviews for Sunlight in a Dark Room

By : sunshinemelodi
  • From Finnel on May 11, 2007
    Squeels at possessive Itachi!!! Sooo hot!!!!
    nice chapter!! the story is moving along nicely and Itachi is starting to get more interesting then his normal icy-self!
    The bit with Sai flirting was funny!
    looking forward to your next up-date!
    ja!
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  • From marquesgue1 on May 11, 2007
    Heh I have an unbelievably wide smile on myface right now :D lol, I don't need to tell you that the way you write your kisses is awesome right? You practicaly had me drooling over that *shudders* hotness at its best :D

    As to the other part of the chapter Kisuke stealing a kiss from Sasuke made me indignant on teme's behalf loool but yeah and Sai was showing off his flirting skills heh ^_6 he can come and get info from me anytime lol

    On the other hand, the fact that the others are searching for Naruto and worried about him makes me feel guilty for enjoying the ItaNaru moments because Itachi is really the bad guy who Naruto's best friend hates. Despite the lemons I'm already starting to feel angsty about how this will end looool (I tend to worry needlessly abput things). It's actually the first time I've read a full length fic on this pairing and the questions in my head are so many loool but you're doing a great job and really making me love this pairing so can't wait for your next chater ^_6

    As always, thanks for the great update, you made my day ^_^

    Hina xXxx

    Hina xXxx
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  • From anapana83 on May 11, 2007
    My favorite one liner to close the chap *thumbs up*. Ah, don't worry, your response to my question as more or less what i thought, you made perfect sense. Have u been reading the manga? Seems like we'll be seeing a Naruto/Sasuke/Itachi reunion soon. *another thumbs up*. So now you're caught up on both sites. There's a chance though that i'll mostly review on here since i'm always on AFF, but read and review i shall. Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Mitsuko on May 11, 2007
    Yew!~I love you I love you I love you! (fans herself) and they were ony kissing! Hahah go Sai!
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  • From ANON - Kamikyo on May 11, 2007
    This chapter ended just too sweet^^. lol, sai as sex lady killer? never thought asbout that one^^ I neally fell from my chair laughing^^. Will Naruto ever get his chakra back? Will Ita-chan remove the seal? I really hope so. A helpless Naruto is the worst for fighting scenes, I think. But a caring Ita-chan is just to sweet! Can't wait for the next chapter! Bye^^
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  • From ANON - Aki WildQueen on May 08, 2007
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

    This is a well developed story with slash and a actual plot. I have enjoyed your portrayal od Itachi and Naruto. I also LOVE ItaNaru fics. I mean SasuNaru is also great and love that too, but... well, it is overdone and it's refreshing to read other pairings. Plus they are sooo cute together.Anyway I look forward to reading the next chapter.

    Aki WildQueen
    PS. Mr. Bunny also adored this fic and begs you to update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mey on May 08, 2007
    :GIGGLES: Nope, i don't think It was too soon... making the wait last too long would have meant to force thee situation too much... I mean, Naruto isn't exactly a think-before-do guy, and he had been wainting for it too long already ^______^
    You know, it was funny.. the first thing I tahught when I read that part was "Oh shit"... duh... I'm an axelled Narutard xD

    I REALY wanna know what Itachi is gonna say about this xD
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  • From sainaru on May 08, 2007
    OMG DEFINITELY NOT TOO SOON PERFECT TIMING THAT KISS WAS SOOOOO HOT *drools on keyboard* OK OK THATS IT IM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY *squeals* oh i can't wait till the next chapter to see how itachi reacts O_O wat will he do to naru-chan. Hopefully more kissing lol that was soo damn cute i can imagine it *sighs*

    btw even if it takes u a month to update i will wait that how much i like this story right now and ur doing a great job trying to keep everyone in character.

    *hugs* till next time ill be waiting for an update soon
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  • From anapana83 on May 08, 2007
    Oh shit indeed lol.

    I liked that scene vewy vewy much! So outta curiosity since i praised you for this chap on Tonfa already, i'll rant on something else.....it says Itachi had experienced sex before right...but he was or seemed unused to that sensation or act while he and Naruto were initiating playing tonsil hokey lol, pardon the expression. So does that mean he'd never french kissed anyone before, but did the rest of the physical deed? Now the stuff's really gonna get interesting from here on out, hehehe. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Amaya on May 07, 2007
    Not too soon, not too soon at all. That was incredibly hot and you played it out perfectly. *ish a happy little fangirl* But now I am absolutely dancing in my seat and waiting for the next installment to find out Itachi's reaction to the whole thing. *offers to let you use my muse* Please update as soon as possible!!
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  • From ANON - Kamikyo on May 07, 2007
    I have high hopes for this story. I really like it^^
    So, when will the smex start? *grin* The last scene was definitly not enough^^
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  • From Finnel on May 07, 2007
    Awwwwwwww cute! Naru-chan made the first move! ((so rare!!! but good!!!))
    loved the way you described it for Itachi, he almost sounded like a kiss virgin!!! ((=^-^=))
    totally agree on the Sai/Gaara front, brillaint characters, but not as a pairing! ((Gaara would desert coffin Sai in a week, tops!))
    can't wait to see more interaction!!!!
    @.@" what is it with computers at the moment???
    looking forward to the next up-date!
    luck!!!

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  • From ANON - Sancta on May 07, 2007
    Not too soon, it was just right, keep on writing!
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  • From marquesgue1 on May 07, 2007
    O_O Oh. Lord.

    I vaguely remember you asking something about it being too soon? Are you CRAZY?
    WHOA that was liek you slapped me in the face, one minute Itachi was checking Naruto's seal and the next whoa O_O were you trying to give me a heart attack? I mean really - was that what you were trying to do?

    either way that was just AWESOME!!! and no it was not too soon I don't think. I mean, you didn't exagerate on the intimate contact between them which would've been too much for them at this stage I think, but you made it good and believable at this stage. I loved the hint of reactions you gave us there too, I can't wait for the next chapter where we will really see what they think and what their position on the kiss is. I'm also curious as to who will now initiate the next kiss which may not come for a while now I know, but I'm curious about it :D and obviously can't wait for it :D

    Anyway, that was a great update to wake up to :d and as always the chapter was well written - and it still would've been even without the very very hot kiss :d I am starting to get worried about the seal though, is it going to backfire on Naruto? Hmm, hope not.

    Hina xXxx

    p.s. I think that was my longest review yet lol


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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2007
    YES! thank you for updating! *glomps author* i loved it! i was wondering when they'd at least kiss! and what naruto said made me think were where they headding? well its late and i just wanna sleep. i'll review more next update ok? well night!
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