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Reviews for Sunlight in a Dark Room

By : sunshinemelodi
  • From ANON - Mei Zamiel on July 05, 2007
    *squee* I luff your story!!!! In Ch. 9 I don't think what happened was rushed at all! Through the entire thing I was thinking "Dag, this is some good writin' but.... nothin' good is happenin'!" So ummmmm..... yeah. This may sound really weird but 'Tachi-Chan (an adorable thing for him to be called in my opion) seemed kinda.... innocent. Ha ha! Keisuke-Chan is cute too! If he didn't hate women I'd huggle him!!! Heh.... he'd kill me though, ne? Ha-ha! Sorry I'm rambaling like this but.... I just wanna say everything I (heart) about this story! I've noticed somethin' consistent in many UchihaXUzumaki stories. Uchiha's are possessive and always mark him and he gets pissed. It's funny to me.... sorry...... Whelp.... I guess I'll end my rambling!

    *heart in hand*
    ~M
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  • From torturedinsanity on July 04, 2007
    kyaa, I loved it!
    I'm really very envious of the way your write Itachi.
    I need to read more of this. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Red Blu on July 03, 2007
    i love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter. I've decided that there aren't enough ItaNaru stories out there so your story is like an oasis in a desert. lol excuse the cheesy reference but really. i love your story!
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  • From MasterofPie on July 03, 2007
    yay another chapter Happy day ^^

    Oh no Itachi's cold heart is melting
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  • From MasterofPie on July 03, 2007
    haha i loved it ^^ Itachi marked Naruto

    I love your writing skills, very lovely
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  • From DuoMaxwell on July 02, 2007
    i love the story so far....ItaxNaru pairings are one of my favorites(besides KakaxIru and KakaxSasu.) i cant wait for you to post the next chapter. i wonder wat will happen to Naruto and Itachi in the future? and wat will happen when Sasuke catches them.
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  • From ANON - jess on July 02, 2007
    ahhhh! you are amazing. ^_^ i like that naruto and kyuubi are exchanging notes and that itachi is finally starting to understand (a little) his feelings for naruto. itachi and naruto kissing is sooooo adorable! and hot... and steamy! i can't wait until we find out why the memories are so terrible for naruto... then itachi can comfort him and love him and take care of him... *cheers* this story is addictive (like the taste of itachi is to naruto) and i can't forget it... so please update soon because i long for more!!! *hug* thank you so much, you are really very wonderful! love you! *kiss*
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  • From anapana83 on July 01, 2007
    Wow, its been awhile!! You had us abandoned! I'm so glad you came back and updated. A very nice treat, along with that Princess Diana b-day celebration thingy on tv. Did i ever mention how the "Foolish little brother" line slays me every time i read it lol. Not that Itachi is far off in his musings. He is right. It's also quite important seeing that Itachi is recognizing the changes in him. I can't wait too see where this goes particualrly since Itachi has no plans in stopping the seal-breaking. Chap wasn't bad at all. 'sides, if it doesn't please you, the miracle of Editing is available. ^_^ Update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mey on July 01, 2007
    Ny, oh my! It has been so long since the last update that I even thaught you had dropped it (I'm SO glad you didn't, though ^^)
    Excelent chap! It was very plotty (I love that ^^) and Itachi keeps on getting cuter and cuter xD
    Ash, i wonder what will come out of it... it's getting more interesting by the second xD
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  • From BrucesGirl on July 01, 2007
    Oh god.

    Can I just tell you that you are amazing at building up the plot of your story before giving the reader what he/she wants? You have a beautiful way of describing things, and I'm totally digging the fact that you obviously have an excellent BETA. It's nice to read a story that's not all messed up. XD

    Anyway, the sexual tension is building to such a beautiful crescendo that I'm biting at my bit just waiting for Naruto and Itachi to get it on in every sense of the word. God, this is so good.

    Great job! I'm waiting for more...for sure!

    BG
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  • From Rosebud on July 01, 2007
    OMG I about died when I seen that you updated this story!
    And might I say that this chapter kicked ass!!!!!
    I love how you take your time with the plot. The pace is really good, perfect in fact. I'm also interested to know what it is that Sasuke showed Naruto in Sound???
    Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! xD
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  • From marquesgue1 on July 01, 2007
    Yay!!! You updated! heh, nice length of chapter too ^_^ made me so happy lol. Sai seems like he's going to be in a little bit of trouble when he tells the others, although now that Gaara is aware too it might not be that bad... Sasuke might just blow up though *sigh* anyway - I liked how we were given even more of a view into Itachi's mind, it was interesting to see his thought patterns and I think they suited his personality well, you're really keeping them in IC which is great. But the seal will break eventually :s doesn't sound good for our blond. Thanks for the update and the next one is eagerly awaited ^_6

    Hina xXxx

    p.s. Itachi kissed Naruto without any provocation this time hehe it's great lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 01, 2007
    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M LUVIN THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! *SPINSPINSPIN* SO CUTE, AWESOME, LUFFLY, ETCTERYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From DismalAbstract on July 01, 2007
    I love this story and am an avid reader. Hope to see more soon!!! Great job and another amazing chapter. I love how Itachi is developing and I'm a total Ita/Naru fangirl. Hope to see some Ita/Naru loving soon!
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  • From ANON - Imperial Mint on June 30, 2007
    This story is absolutely amazing! I love the progress of Itachi and Naruto's relationship. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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