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Reviews for Sunlight in a Dark Room

By : sunshinemelodi
  • From ANON - kaesaku on May 07, 2007
    oh, man~!
    just when everything's getting so got.. a cliffy!!!
    waaaaahhhh!!!
    please, please do continue!
    i so love your story!
    i love naruto paired w/ sasuke but i also love this pairing~
    write soon!
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - kkk on May 07, 2007
    Oh wow!!! that came out of nowhere. It was kinda shocking but so hot at the same time. Definitely nosebleed worthy. I liked Itachi's reaction. How he was analyzing the situation even thought what they were doing was something intimate. It's just so Itachi *in my books anyway*. Now the fun begins.

    I'm glad I'm not the only one getting impatient. Don't get me wrong I love the pace your going I don't want this to end anytime soon. It's just so hard not to want to the good part,if you know what i mean *wink wink* Okay now i really can't wait for the next chapter.

    thank you (x3) for the last part.

    p.s. I noticed Hina88 is one of your readers. Check her story "Volatile". Its really amazing.
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  • From ANON - Amaya on May 02, 2007
    And yet another absolutely fantastic installment! *ish your biggest fan* This is absolutely wonderful and thank you so much! And if you do end up going with your other idea for a story i will gladly read it! Please update soon!!!
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  • From Finnel on May 02, 2007
    yay! my computer is working again!!! and that means that i can review!!!!!!! =^-^=
    Sasuke, Gaara, Sai interaction is always good! we really need to see some more of that!!!
    what is up with that seal Itachi put on Naruto?
    oh! that red head guy sould've made Naruto dress up in a skirt ((soooo cute!!!))
    again two brillaint chapters!
    keep it up!
    luck!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2007
    another good chap, keep it up!
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  • From serenagold on May 01, 2007
    I just wanted to let you know how amazingly impressed I am with your fan-fic. 'Sunlight in a Dark Room' is incredibly well writen and completely engaging in its story telling. While I'm sure the story will eventually turn to smut (heh, no complaints ^_^), the pace and build up of the story is wonderful. You say this is your first attempt at fan fiction and I hope its something you keep up and perhaps develop into original material. You are a talented writer and I eagerly await your next chapter.

    I know this review #60-something, but I hope it encourages others to check out the story. It is something not to be missed.
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  • From anapana83 on May 01, 2007
    Wandering thoughts suit Itachi dammit! Anyway, i find myself checking sporadically for an update on your story every week lol. I know i've said this before but you write Itachi really well. In fact all your fics should just be ItaxNaru. Lol, i'll read every single one of those suckers! Naruto has a point though, i don't mind listening to Itachi's voice either. Whoever's his seiyu gave him the sexiest voice in the bunch. Sasuke's a close second ^_^. Maybe Naruto should keep insisting that Itachi speak to him more. And maybe Naruto should tell him the real reason why I, i mean HE, wants to hear him, hehehe.

    There's one thing i've been meaning to ask you. I don't know if i missed this in the introduction or any chap for that matter, but there hasn't been any mention of the Yondaime...or has there? And does Naruto know about his 'relationship' to him in this fic? And if not or so, would Itachi fill him in on it since, in the manga anyway, he seems to know? Or...am i just jumping ahead of the gun and you are completely ignoring it? Lol. Anyway, it's all good. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 01, 2007
    Your story is good. Please update soon and it would be lovely if there was some action between naruto and itachi.
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  • From ANON - Mey on May 01, 2007
    OMG!!!!! Thyis chapter was just so good!!!!!!
    I lurv how Itachi's character is evolving. I mean, poor Naruto, he'll be stuffed along with the bastard forever, but at least he's learning feelings along the way xD
    How long do you think it will go on? Since the argument length has been sort of mentioned (two weeks to damnation according to Tsunade) I understand it will end somtime in that period, but I wonder how much will it be in chapters =)...
    Excelent wrinting (as allways X3) and hope to read you soon ^_____^
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  • From ANON - Cat-san Uzumaki on May 01, 2007
    Well, ur story is totally AWESOME!!! its fantastic!! Im so happy i found it. lol itanaru is awesome. u dont get too many of them with all the sasunaru fans out there (not saying im NOT one myself, hehehe)
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  • From sainaru on May 01, 2007
    OMG Itachi touching naruto so cute this is getting better in every chapter and i am gonna keep reviewing lol. Angry sasuke i just love it *slams hands on tsunades desk* oh i just love when hes angry or jealous thats y im kinda hoping he sees naruto with itachi still alive oh is naruto going to go back to the village *not wait don't tell i wanna be surprised* stay with itachi naruto lol. Please keep writing and ill keep on reading

    *hugs* for this chapter ^_^
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  • From marquesgue1 on May 01, 2007
    Hmm, Naruto without chakra still hadnled himself :d NARUTO ROCKS!!! Itachi - hn, better figure it out soon, fo r and Uchiha genius you're kinda slow :d heh I actually love that in this story. It's really cool :D and it's so cool that you updated!!! hehe - made me real happy. Nice chapter ^_6

    Hina xXxx

    p.s. you're just making me more and more curious as to how this is all gonna pan out :D lol
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  • From ANON - jess on April 27, 2007
    maaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! this is so awesome! ^_^ the itachi and naruto interactions are so sweet and adorable and fun! i really like how you have portayed both of them... and the whole gaara and sasuke thing is so funny! woot! basically the story is great and i will be eagerly awaiting more. thank you so much... please write like the wind! ^_^
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  • From sainaru on April 26, 2007
    once again great chapter ^^ i like how ur taking the relationship between itachi and naruto slow unlike some other stories i read where they would hate each other one minute and have sex the next lol. I also like how u r trying to keep everyone in character. poor sai though everyone ignores him lol ohh and i cant wait till ur next chapter ur on a roll ^^ pplz keep writing
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  • From Iori on April 25, 2007
    I have to say that I am really liking this fic. I like how you've personified itachi and Naruto. It's a nice change to see Itachi as a civilized and deadly efficient person, than the fannon rape and kill everyone Itachi. I patiently wait for more.
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