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Reviews for Double Edge, Double Trouble

By : Narutolovr
  • From bloodshound on February 04, 2012
    this would be fun if it wasn't for all the typos... and whatever they've done to the formatting is truly painful. I don't think that's your fault though. I've seen a couple of stories go all 'block of text'. it makes it damn hard to read.
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  • From mistressofyaoi on September 15, 2010
    you've got a really good well thought out story and plot here, i likw it the only thing that gets to me is the occasional bad grammer. what can i say i'm a stickler for the good stuff. but a very cool story i look forward to seeing what happends next
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  • From lilkkjo082004 on January 08, 2008
    for your next story why don't you do a shikanaru or shinonaru. there aren't that many of those out
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  • From nm1716 on November 28, 2007
    I love this story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 04, 2007
    alright i say make a naruto/shikamaru/kabuto/gaara/sasuke/itachi/neji/kakashi/kiba fanfiction because I have never seen a male harem fanfic for naruto also naruto is the one who become mpreg
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  • From xenawp532 on June 03, 2007
    i vote for.
    Kakashi/Naruto

    This pair wasn't on the list i would like a story of Iruka/naruto.
    This story is great, looking forward to reading others.

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  • From ANON - Anon on May 31, 2007
    stop it with da evil cliffy plz
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on May 30, 2007
    I loved this story i just read it all and its hilarious hurry and update please.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 30, 2007
    no fair you just cant end something like that on a cliffy. it's gonna drive me nuts plz hurry with the next chapter. thankz
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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on April 24, 2007
    (chuckles)Would that last line be literal? I wish this chapter was a little longer but I liked it anyway. Keep up the good work okay?
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  • From ANON - Stacy on April 23, 2007
    LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!!!! More please
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 22, 2007
    wow. i'd say more but you took the ablity to speak away from me [actually i lose my voice this morning but still i'm speachless]. you should keep going. i think you should create a three some for kiba and narutos first time (add kaakshi as the third). and since they like naruto naruto should be the uke but if he's wth kiba or kakshi only make naruto the seme and them the uke so they bare the kids because i've seen to many naruto m-preg and it would be KOOL if it wasn't him for once. and since you gave him the ablity to make his male mate bare kids you should. my opinion you don't have to listen to me if ya don't wanna. but still i'd be nice. well l8r! see ya next update!
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  • From ANON - mary on April 13, 2007
    please don't tease!!! more more more more!! love it!!!
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  • From sainaru on April 13, 2007
    ooooh is this a kiba/naru story *prays that it is* and is kakashi and kiba going to fight for narutos affection lol.

    p.s. if this is a kiba naru story i can't wait to see them in hot animal sex scence lol
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  • From suzie on April 01, 2007
    Great start, I hope you keep updating
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