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Reviews for Toxic

By : punkrockerhottie69
  • From UzumakiAholic on November 20, 2007
    Ooooh! Sounds very promising! I look forward to reading more about it!! :D
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  • From suzie on April 01, 2007
    that is a pretty good start,
    please update soon.
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  • From bakacharm on March 27, 2007
    HEY YOU! i liked it! sry i couldn't be on the phone and read it @ the same time (^_^) the lemon was pretty funny though....you might wanna add more detail and check spelling & names...AND IT IS SHIZUNE! in you face! lol...u thought i was stupid...
    but i luved it! if u need a beta! u know who 2 call (^_^)
    LUV YA!
    Charm
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  • From spoon10488 on March 27, 2007
    i can't wait for the next chapter ;)
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  • From anapana83 on March 26, 2007
    Well it has a good premise so far. Just pay close attention to grammar, be consistent, and make sure to have good character development. You can't go wrong with that. Update soon.
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  • From littleolmee on March 26, 2007
    Not a bad start, the idea your going with is an interesting one and you could really work this into an entertaining story. I do have a suggestion though. . . I would suggest you would look into finding a beta to help you out. AFF's beta group is a great place to look, everyone is very nice there and it's not that hard to find the right person to work with. While we all make mistakes; trust me I make plenty of my own, it's just the story was a little hard to get through because of the errors. Hope you stick with it, thanks for sharing your story. Take care.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 25, 2007
    Cool first chapter! Please continue!!
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