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By : ursweetheartless
  • From Allys on November 30, 2007
    I like the turn the story's taken, it's strange and interesting, and I don't mind at all that the chapter wa short. I'm actually pleased that you thought enough of your readers to ask for help. As for putting in the threesome, you probably already know I would love it if you did, but if it's giving you that much trouble then maybe you shouldn't. There are many alternative routes that you can take. Sasuke is really drunk and probably won't remember all of it, so you do a sort of weird morning flashback sequence, where we get little bits and pieces of the lemon through Sasukes hazy pov, but you don't have to wrie a whole comprehensive piece. That way it could still be really hot, but since it really isn't, as you say, the focus of the story, it won't hurt if it's sketchy. *hugs* I'm just thrilled you're writing this again ♥
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on November 25, 2007
    I'm so glad you started this up again! omfg, that latest chapter was hawt! What can I say? I love Uchihacest. I'm wondering where this story is going, though, if Naruto would be more involved or not. haha. The selfish me is saying, "Leave him out!" but at the same time, he makes a nice addition to Itachi/Sasuke.

    Please write more! and thanks again!
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  • From Allys on November 25, 2007
    Hooray for updates!!! I love this story XD and can't wait to see where you've decided to take it. I'm so happy there are going to be more. Thank your friend profusely for me and thank you too *hugs* That was amazingly hot!! And the beginning where everyone was running around like idiots was really funny XD. LOL, they lost Sasuke, I was like and you've only just noticed this now?? *smirks* Sasuke quick like ninja XD. *Loves on you*♥
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on November 09, 2007
    aaww man! i wish you had continued this story, i'm really intrigued by it
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  • From Minjin on September 24, 2007
    I love this fanfic!!! Its so good!!!! Oh yeah please writeeeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeee!!! I love the way you are developing the SasuNaru!!!!!! But i also like their threesome so hot!!! And your writing makes me picture it all out *_* so good!!!
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  • From ringpop on August 22, 2007
    ..............was that it?......was that the end?.......if not, why do you start good stories & not finnish them??? IF YOU HAVE MORE & YOU HAVEN'T POSTED (for some odd reason) E-MAIL THE REST TO ME!!!ring_pahp@hotmail.com : )
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  • From MemphisAtari on June 28, 2007
    rawr
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  • From KiaraNxiar on May 30, 2007
    That was sooooooo sweet! But not teeth achingly sweet just adorably sweet. I like how you presented Sasuke. When's Itachi going to show up? I kind of miss him though I rather enjoyed Naruto in this chapter. Hopefully you'll update soon, bye!
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  • From DevilnBlue on May 30, 2007
    I wish I could read more but I could only manage to get to the first chapter before sleep and typing my own fanfic got into the way. I really felt like I was there in your story, just peeking out at the sidelines. You have mad skills and I can't wait to see what else you have. So until we meet again. Ja.

    P.S. - Still loving the story XP
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  • From Rosebud on May 29, 2007
    OMG this story is awesome!
    PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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  • From Allys on May 29, 2007
    That was lovely. So very sweet. When Naruto woke up to knocking though I was expecting Itachi to come in there and retrieve his baby XD. LOL, I don't know how I expected him to know Sasuke was there, but he is Itachi so... I adore the triangular love. We just need Itachi to come back and cement it. Just the idea of them all together makes my heart beat faster. Especially when they're all pleased about it XD. When the three of them are together and all in love and lust, what more could a girl want XD. Thanks for the update, Ja.
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  • From emp78 on May 29, 2007
    That was so sweet! Update soon, please.
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on May 29, 2007
    Yay! I'm so glad you updated this. I absolutely love this story, and I hope you continue updating it! Thanks so much. You have no idea how I happy I was when I saw this. Ah, the Uchihacest is just so lovely, and the Sasu/Naru is very nice, too. Ita/Sasu/Naru is so sexy...
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on May 03, 2007
    yay! you've updated! I can't wait for more, especially for more ITA/NARU/SASU ACTION! hheeehee. please continue soon!
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  • From Allys on May 02, 2007
    I'm so glad you're continuing this XD, it's along the same lines as but just a little more consentual than Matriculate This. Not to mention that I like the idea of a jaded Naruto and furiously blushing Sasuke that's hung up on his brother. This is one of my favourite stories of yours.
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