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Reviews for Wolves

By : Mashiro
  • From serenagold on December 05, 2007
    LMAO hahahahahahahahahaaha


    ahhhh... finally.. a story that captures the awkward and unsatisfying realism of unexperienced virginal sex. too freaking funny. that was simply not hot at all. I applaud you with standing ovation. hehehehehehe. ^^ Keep up the great work. I really enjoyed this.
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  • From GMHR on December 04, 2007
    Wow. You are my hero for writing such an awkward sex scene complete with awkward foreplay. Neither of them really knew what they were doing and as a result they were clumsy and impatient and frustrated and embarrassed and nervous and it was awesome because it was so realistic. Anyway, I think if they ever did have sex it would be exactly like this. Spur of the moment, uncomfortable, and Sasuke trying find some sort of control in the situation and then getting pissy (with good reason I must admit) and Naruto having perverted thoughts the whole time (which, you can't really blame him for considering the situation) and being a bit of an idiot.

    I've always felt that Naruto and Sasuke will never fully understand their emotions especially towards each other, regardless of whether it's friendship or something more than that (although I doubt it will ever go beyond friendship in canon; *sighs*).That's not to say I don't enjoy when they get a bit mushy, but I like it when they're stubborn too. Looking forward to the epilogue!

    P.S. I have a rather shameful confession to make. I'm a huge fan of your story Almost Sucks (that's not the shameful part) and I keep attempting to write a review for it because it is so wonderful, but I can never seem to put my thoughts into words and I end up babbling and then deleting what I've written. *cringes*
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  • From Allys on December 04, 2007
    Hehe, Hey sweetie I have come to leave a formal reivew XD. LOL, This was Hilarious! Seriously. In the beginnign I was all Oh Godd!! Stooooppp!!! Can you see me turning red like a cherry?? (*snicker* Still can't believe that hand went there XD) And then I was OMG!!! LOL, NO!! the truth is Not an option!!! A bug crawled up there or something!! Not the truth!!! *dies* LOL Yeah - Deny! Deny! DENY! and LMAO!! Sasuke's reaction was Priceless XD, from the first very innocent, "What?" *Snicker*. I was all LOL yeah you breathe baby cause I'm having a hard time between guffaws XD. And Oh God i'm only on page four I'm going to DIE!! That boy is too God damned honest for his own good XD. Hehehe, LOL, so you get the point XD. You had me seriously animated and all over the place. And there was way to much warm and fuzziness in me right then (was Bursting) The part with the nipples was hott and adorable all at once. And then *snicker* “You...” Naruto laughed nervously. “...trying to tell me something?” I was ROLLING!! Seriously thank god for being alone cause people would have been worried. I Loved how Sasuke's face/mood kept changing, so honest, like a little window into a previously locked and battened down fort. I agree with Naruto, he should show emotion more often XD. *Snicker* Naruto and his uber surprising self XD. "I have lube" LOL, Love how it came out so fast he even surprised himself XD. And I don't know why, but the two of them sitting up all half dressed and rubbing their fingers to see if the technically-not-lube was slippery enough, made me really happy. I have no idea why, LOL. I guess cause it was the moment of Huge decision, and they sat there together basically holding hands ♥ And Zomg!! LOL, just remembered the "Hellloo Gorgeous!!" from way back when XD. o.0, LOL, that does it there is no way I can tell you about all the things I love about this without it be as long as, if not longer than this. *Shakes head* I loved everything!! Right down to the end when the sex turned out to be not quite XD. LOL, Poor Sasuke *snicker* Naruto shoulda just let him do it XD. LOL, Not that I think he could have lasted much longer, but LOL, at least he had a clue XD *snicker* XD *shakes head* I can't stop grinning even now. *Loves on you* Thank you honey and I'm excited about this epilogue XD. *MWAH*
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  • From AliceInuzukaAburame on December 04, 2007
    awwwwwwwwwwww....that anding was cute ^__^...wow...Naruto....way to be lame XD....i loved it XD
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  • From Kimra on December 04, 2007
    Oh wow. You get a zillion points for the reality of this latest update. Just... wow. I'm so impressed there wasn't this whole 'oh sure I didn't use lube but it'll be fine' sort of garbage you see everywhere else (I admit I'm as guilty as everyone else on this sort of fantasy level). I'm just... And poor Sasuke! I mean... shesh poor Sasuke. Naruto could have at least given him a blow job after that fob up. Gesh.

    Anyway, excellent writing! Keep up the amazing work.
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  • From ANON - Naru on December 04, 2007
    Ah, geez XD. I was laughing through this whole thing. Wonderfully awkward, their first time. XD I could see it happening just like this in the series. Naruto gets off too fast, and Sasuke left grumbling (poor thing, like a half a second of sex and that's it XDD)... And the bickering in between. Everything. So cute!
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  • From roely on April 01, 2007
    that was just so funny!
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  • From Dream2010 on April 01, 2007
    That was really lovely and cute. I like how you wrote Naruto's denial, and his ways to fix his 'problem.' Sasuko was definitely excellent brain food, wasn't it?
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  • From ursweetheartless on March 31, 2007
    L'OMG teehee Sasuko! >.< thats like going so far into denial you come out the other side, all sticky and confused. still, Sasuko, thats an excuse to put Uchihas in awesome hemmed up schoolgirl uniforms two sizes too small ... AH an EVEN better Uchiha clan uniform, not to mention greatest offense EVER, all enemies will get nosebleeds and have to crawl away to take cold showers. ima write a letter to Kisimoto right now!! ^.^
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  • From ANON - LemonsLuver on March 31, 2007
    Reviewing another CHAPTER!!!!!

    ‘Eat us,’ they seemed to be saying. ‘We taste as good as we look. Won’t you suck on us a bit? You can touch a little first if you’d like.’
    Nipples TALK??!?!?!?!!? WOW that shocked me....I don't like Naruto's dream >P
    Just kidding, your know Naru-chan is just in denile, GIVE up Naru-chan, you know you WANT Sasu-kun X3
    These chaps are sooo short XDDDDDDDD
    Ok I can wait for the next chapter, and read Almost Suck's new chap >.>;;
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  • From ANON - LemonsLuver on March 31, 2007
    Hey Mashiro, you don't recongize the sn But I'm one of your Loyal Fans that reviews Almost Sucks!!!(which btw is still great, and hope You doing great in Japan!!)
    ....Just wanted to say I love the whole design of the Fic......Naughty Naruto FINALLY!!!!! There's always Naughty Sasuke, but NEVER any Naughty Naruto stories!!!
    Poor Sasu-kun......can't hold his beer very well XDDDDD
    Naruto is a PERV!!!! -YATTA!- I love Pervy Naru-chan!!!!
    Can't wait to read more of this funny short story.....and you should write more in AFF.....its funner (not a word) and Smuttier here too! x3
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  • From Nanaka on March 31, 2007
    *snicker* I loved it and can't wait to read more
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  • From ANON - ClosetEmo on March 31, 2007
    I love your stories!

    I have read your other NaruSasu fic Almost Sucks on ff.net and you said you had written a new fic called wolves so I came over here and I love this as well!
    The way you write Naruto and Sasuke allways makes me smile:)

    Looking forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 31, 2007
    Apparently, it hasn't clicked into Naruto brain that Sasuko really is sasuke in disguise. Well, he is a baka, but in a lovable way. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From kaururyu on March 31, 2007
    i love how naruto's logic flows here. it's like reading a how-to manual on how to operate naruto's brain. i love your writing style.

    question though.. what's with "wolves"? ehehe. it's nothing. just curious.
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