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By : Mashiro
  • From ANON - Rainwater on January 11, 2017

    I loved this and was devastated to see that it ended. I would love to read more!


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  • From flyingtackle on August 24, 2010
    GUYS HAVE NIPPLES.

    Sorry, had the need to shout it. So I'm liking the humor here. The writing is very nicely done and stays true to Naruto's character for the most part, taking into account how drunk he is and doing a good job of incorporating that into the writing too. I especially like the way Naruto decides that Sasuke is average, revealing that before this, he hadn't been able to see Sasuke's weaknesses and subconsciously let himself feel inferior the way Sasuke wanted him to. Seeing him vulnerable made him honestly believe that Sasuke is human too and no better than him. I don't know, I just personally read a lot more emotion into it than Naruto shared; he wouldn't have shared all those feelings anyway, I don't think, especially because he wasn't particularly thinking of them himself. There was also the point that Sasuke's guards were down enough for him to accept defeat, which I thought was sweet even though that notion is most likely misplaced...heh.

    Anyway. Good fic. Hooked by the first chapter. I can't say for sure that I'll be faithful enough to review all the chapters to a finished fic, though. Sorry for that.
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on April 12, 2009
    LOVED IT!
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  • From Jelp on February 10, 2009
    :) I love how real their first time was. Not wonderful, not perfect; just normal. Hardly par, but still, very interesting. I liked their first time in Wolve and in Almost Sucks. ^_^

    Awesome job. Very refreshing! ~ Jelp
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on February 02, 2009
    lol. that was cute
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  • From ANON - dicingalice on January 06, 2009
    ...which means this UNFINISHED fic will become so much better as it ADVANCES... so write that darn sequel already *wrar*

    ^_____________^ thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - dicingalice on January 06, 2009
    *snicker* lovely. liked the second chapter better than the first. not just because of the smut ;)
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  • From Mashiro on March 28, 2008
    REPLIES FOR MY DEAR REVIEWERS

    To everyone: Thank you for reading and reviewing! :D I'm so happy you liked the story! ^-^


    CHAPTER 1

    DevilLived: Hehe, well, Sasuke is just a guy. He's got his stuff and his goals and all that, but underneath he is just a guy. ^-^

    jess249: Nipples! XD Yes. Hrm. I'm calm now. ^-^

    Dragon: Thanks for reviewing! I'll keep writing. ^-^

    desolatebutterfly: Haha! Your comment about Sasuke and his alcohol had be laughing for quite some time. ^-^ Well, you can't be good at everything. And who knows? Maybe it's just the fact that he hasn't had much practice. Maybe he'll be a kick ass drinker once he gets some training. ^-^Oh, yes... Naruto's mind (drunk or not) is a very special thing. ^-^

    ursweetheartless: He is adorable in denial! Trying to find some reasonable explanation and not really managing.. Hehe. Poor thing. ^-^

    Quirky: I'm really happy you like the characters! And the flow.. And the the drunked thought process! ^-^ I have really only written AUs before this, so I was a bit nervous jumping into.. err.. not-AU. ^-^ Ha! You've read/heard that somewhere else? Cool! :D I have no idea where it came from really. ^-^

    chishio_rikka: Well, it seemed like something he would think was a great idea; and he wouldn't really think it through before starting. ^-^ And yeah! The title is interesting. ^-^

    Mindingmybusiness: Yes, I definitely will continue. ^-^

    animehead: Wah! It was realistic? Wee! I love to make things realistic when I write. I'm really happy you think I pulled it off. ^-^ And a flow too.. Awww.... ^-^ Haha! And he reminds you of yourself? Waaah.. That's scary! ^-^ I'm a very boring drunk actually. I need an obscene amount of positive attention (if I get that I have lots of fun), otherwise I get depressed. ^-^


    CHAPTER 2

    kauru_ryu: Wee! Cuteness! Cuteness is probably the thing that can make me cry the fastest. Happy you like my writing style!

    Darling_425: Ha! More cuteness! Yes. ^-^ Aww.. I know, he's adorable. ^-^

    Karas Kraehe: Now you know! :D Hope you liked it. ^-^

    narufan: Naaah... I think it takes more than that or... hmm... or maybe not. I mean, this was Sasuke and a wet shirt after all... *wanders off in thought*

    DevilLived: Yes. She's so useful. ^-^ And yeah.. Sasuke probably have had better mornings. ^-^ Update coming now!

    ursweetheartless: Haha! Yeah! The little brain knows! :D Ooh my... Yes. An official clan costume change might be... interesting. They'd be even more dangerous, hehe.


    CHAPTER 3

    Kimra: No one knows! :D At least I don’t know. I’m happy you enjoy reading the story!

    Adi: Haha! Yeah! He’s so silly. Or maybe Sasuke’s nipples are just that nice... ^-^ Ooh... And I love that the competitiveness is still there too. It may sound weird, me saying that since I wrote the story, but... I don’t really run things. I’m just as amused by the things that come up as you guys reading are. ^-^ And you’re so right, that is what makes them special. This story has been a quite different writing experience, compared to Almost Sucks. It’s not AU and it’s quite short, so I’ve had to lean much more on the manga. I did that with Almost Sucks too, but in a different way. But it’s been so much fun, writing this. Wai! *cuddles hard*

    DevilLived: Ooh, yes. Confusion is everywhere these days. ^-^ I think he’s coping pretty well though. He’s trying to solve the “problems”. ^-^

    Zrina: Haha! I don’t know if it’s appropriate either, but I know what you mean! And I think it’s cute too. Cute and absolutely hilarious. :D

    jess249: Yeah! He is a bit of a perv, isn’t he? ^-^ It’s not like it’s the first time either. :D Of course Sasuko is Sasuke! I would have to completely rethink the story if she turned out to be Sasuke’s quite manly and secret twin sister or something, haha! They’d have to start fighting over Naruto. So you do get a cookie! :D

    kauru_ryu: Now that would be interesting! A manual to operating his brain. Or maybe a how-to manual on how to get messed with by his brain. Or little brain. Hormones are so silly. ^-^ I don’t know what’s with ‘Wolves’! :D It’s just a song. I think I’ll name any eventual sequel ‘Badgers’. ^-^

    XZanayu: I think he does know, he’s just a bit confused by the whole thing. It’s got to be kind of scary to suddenly find yourself having dirty thoughts about a guy that’s just supposed to be your sort of friend. Especially if you’ve only been having dirty thoughts about girls before. He’s adorable though. I took tons of time with chapter 4, but now it’s finished! :D

    ClosetEmo: Wai! I love that you love them! :D Aww... Smiles are good. ^-^ It’s been quite different, writing this story and Almost Sucks though. They’re... hmm... different. A bit. They know each other from the beginning and have been through lots of things. Next update is here!

    Nanaka19: Yay! I’m so happy you loved it. You’ll have more to read now! Sorry for taking so long.

    LemonsLuver: Hi! Wai! You review Almost Sucks? (Then you’ll know that this is the first time I’ve taken eight months to reply to a review... :| I feel horrible... Geeh...) My stay in Japan is almost over! I only have about three months left. It’s been lots of fun though. I’ve learned a lot. ^-^ I’m happy you like the story! Naughty Naruto! Personally I find it weird that Naughty Sasuke should be so common, since Naruto is the obvious pervert in my eyes and Sasuke never really showed any tendencies. ^-^ He’s a fierce protector of the ones he love, but at the same time he doesn’t seem that eager to accept that he cares. I suppose I understand how it would be hot to see him as being naughty, but I can’t really see it happening. He seems to just need a lot of convincing and hormonal pressure before he acts on his needs together with someone else. Naruto is less emotionally screwed up. And I guess that shows in chapter 4 here. ^-^ Haha! Well, he’s got to suck at something, doesn’t he? :D And yes, Naruto is a perv! :D Chapter 4 is up now, read it and laugh! ^-^

    LemonsLuver: The talking nipples shocked me too. Naruto’s brain is completely crazy at times. Especially when it’s affected by hormones! :D I think Naruto’s dreams are trying to tell him something. ^-^ They won’t let him be in denial much longer. Chapter 1 to 3 are more... foreplay. Like prologues. Chapter 4 is where the real stuff comes and it’s a lot longer.

    ursweetheartless: Haha! I love your description of being in denial! I laugh every time I read it. It just fits so well. And... for Sasuko, that seems like a really good idea! Though, my brain finds it quite difficult to put together Itachi with that vision. I don’t even know what her name would be! Ita...ko? Of course, you are so right. It would be the greatest offense ever. Though would it work against them? Would Sasuko get Itako to nosebleed and vice versa? I... will need to do some thinking. ^-^

    OnceUponADream: Happy you liked Naruto’s denial! :D Or, at least the way I wrote it. ^-^ Ooh... And I think Sasuko was just what the little brain needed. Nutrition boost! :D

    yummietummy: Yay for funny! :D

    narufan: Yeah! And it’s dangerous! :D I’ve actually been to a bathhouse now! There’s a lot more old guys than I thought there would be.

    sadistickiss: Sasuko is what Naruto’s brain creates when it needs to nudge him gently out of denial. He/she was just a dream. I’m happy you like it! Knowing people enjoy what I’m writing makes the writing extra fun. ^-^ And talking nipples are scary, aren’t they? :D


    CHAPTER 4

    Naru: Wai! Happy to have made you laugh. ^-^ I’m laughing myself every time I read through that chapter, it’s so hilarious. And awkward. See, I have a thing for inexperienced virgins and I have a thing for realistic stuff. And I like writing what I like to read about so... I get stuck with writing pretty awkward scenes. ^-^ I suppose I could try and write something where one of the guys are experienced and one is a virgin, but... I haven’t gotten struck by a good idea about that yet .
    It’s also very important to me that the story I write feel believable, like it could happen, so I’m really happy to read your review. ^-^

    Kimra: Yay for reality! It’s important to me that things are realistic. You don’t know what to do when you’re a virgin, that’s the whole point! And while you might pull something off without lube when you’re experienced, it’s so much more unlikely that someone gets hurt if you’re not. So because someone getting hurt would have been sad, Naruto brought lube, without meaning to. Technically-not-lube. Poor Hinata! Oh, yeah and poor Sasuke. ^-^ That guy has so much to suffer through. A blowjob could have been nice, but... I’m not sure he would have had the guts, not after Naruto’s first first-time screw up. There are lots of teeth in a mouth. Ow! Hands are safer. Sasuke is a smart kid. ^-^

    Darling425: A very virgin virgin sex scene! :D I’m happy you liked it. ^-^ I hope to have the last chapter/epilogue finished soon!

    Kaia-chan: Haha! He was pretty lame, wasn’t he? Well, that’s teenagers! They’re lame sometimes. Especially in situations when they definitely don’t want to be lame. ^-^

    Allys: Darling! Hi! :D Aww... I love your reviews to death, I’ve told you that before, right? If I haven’t, I should have! :D It’s so interesting that you were thinking ‘stop!’ in the beginning! I thought everyone would go ‘keep going! Jump him!’ Haha, maybe it’s just me. ^-^

    Hehe, but Sasuke is having a really weird day. Sure, he’s got a lot of fans, but I’m not sure all that many of them grope him. ^-^ But Naruto is special, isn’t he? Sasuke was actually the one that was most difficult to write this time. In many of the first versions of this chapter (yes, there are lots of them), he was more hesitating/uninterested and in the end it always felt wrong and got weird. I’ve always felt that Naruto was the one having to do the initiating, the *acting* for anything to happen, but I realized writing this that Sasuke’s acting is just as important. He’s too stubborn to be pushed around. ^-^ At least by Naruto. He can be pushed around by hormones it seems, haha!

    Though, I suppose if Naruto hadn’t started things, Sasuke wouldn’t have either. He can definitely act like he doesn’t care even if he does, if no one is there to poke him (or grope him ^-^). I think the reason he played along in this case was because it was so obvious that he was affected; it would have just been lame to pretend he wasn’t. And Baby’s got a lot of pride, does not want to be lame.

    While Naruto can be totally lame and make it so cool instead, haha! Or well, at least it worked. ^-^
    While writing that nipple scene I couldn’t help but think of what you wrote in a previous review about guys and nipples. Couldn’t stop smiling. ^-^

    Seriously! The way they stumble into the ‘let’s go all the way’ track is so lame, haha! It makes no sense, it was just because they were both thinking about it that it worked. Sasuke could have said *anything* and Naruto would have made it dirty, and Sasuke would have bought it. *shakes head* Not that I’m complaining. This whole ‘sex the first time we grope each other’ was pretty hard to pull off, so I’m grateful for all the help making it easier.
    I like that scene too! With the slippery fingers/holding hands. The mood calms down somewhat there, I feel, and it’s like they can think about what they’re doing and with whom and it’s still okay. Yeah. I like it too. ^-^
    I seriously always die with laughter and ‘it’s so bad!!’ every time I read the ‘Hello Gorgeous’ line. Because it’s so bad! :D That’s what I mean with Naruto being so lame he’s cool. Although in this case he’s almost not cool. ^-^ Or maybe it’s his mind, not him. And wow! This is a long reply! Maybe it will scare others from reviewing because they’re scared they’ll get a novel for a reply too! ^-^ Though maybe people don’t read the reviews of a story before they... Hmm...

    Half of me wish Sasuke would have done it, half is glad he didn’t. It’s like... Hmm... With how things went, Naruto doing the doing, Sasuke can walk home and feel a little like he didn’t *really* do it. Or at least like he wasn’t all responsible, and I think that could be comforting for him. Of course, he was just as responsible as Naruto, but it’s so new for him and he’s so sensitive when it comes to emotions that it might be good for him to take it one bit at a time. And he would have been soo nervous doing it.

    Though Sasuke does know a bit more than Naruto does (yep, he does), so it could have been nice. And while he would have been nervous, he also would have been given a chance to sort of play “big brother who knows about these things” in this toward Naruto, and he’s soft for that, despite his issues with brotherhood. Okay, so Naruto would have totally hated that. It will probably come up for their second time, even more because this time was so not quite, and Naruto will hate it. They’ve got such an interesting relationship these guys! It was very cool to get to write something that wasn’t AU and work completely with their manga characters.

    Oh! And because this reply isn’t quite long enough yet... Thank you for beta reading! :D

    *cuddles Allys and doesn’t let go*

    SandShadows: Aww… I’m really, really happy you enjoyed it, the chapter, the realism, the awkwardness. I’m honored to be your hero. ^-^ I’m quite stuck in my ‘wanting to write realistic things’, if it doesn’t seem possible, I don’t want to write it. Okay, I have written a few pretty strange one-shots, but... well, I suppose I see a grain of realism in them too. Now, everyone should head off to read Traces of Iruka’s Lap and laugh at me for that comment. ^-^ But I won’t take it back! :D

    But yeah, I always kept that in mind when writing this story, could this happen to them? Yeah, it’s pretty crazy and messy and... yeah, but... I think it could. Happy you think so too. ^-^ I really like that you saw what Sasuke is doing as trying to find some sort of control, because that was exactly what I was thinking and, I think, why this version of chapter 4 worked while the ones I wrote before this one didn’t. He was too... meek in the other versions. I’ve worked lots and lots with Almost Sucks Sasuke and he is quite different from Wolves Sasuke. W Sasuke is much closer to original manga Sasuke, while AS Sasuke has found some sort of... thing, reached some point of growth that changes how he acts. AS Sasuke is more mature than W Sasuke and om Sasuke (at least as far as I’ve read in the manga). That’s one of the reasons, I think, it got easier to write Wolves after I had finished Almost Sucks. I could send AS Sasuke away and let W Sasuke come out.

    They are a very special pair of guys/characters. I do understand your feeling that they will never fully understand their emotions, though I suppose I personally think that with time and contemplation they could get there. Or at least close enough. Still, even with all the confusion and everything, they do have an amazing connection. They’re separated but still entwined, as you say, no matter what relationship they have.
    About canon and beyond friendship... I think it would be such an amazingly huge step if they did hook up, because heterosexual relationships are so damn ingrained in Japanese society. You’re *supposed* to get married and have kids that will carry on your name forever and ever. It’s like just as obvious as ‘one day you’ll die’. That’s one of the things I really don’t like about living here. The heterosex is everywhere! It’s suffocating. So yeah, it would be a very amazing thing if they got together in canon, huge! Though them not getting together, would in no way mean that they couldn’t have, if it had been any other country/time, it would only mean that Japan isn’t ready for two main guys in a story officially getting romantically involved. Though... I suppose that goes for just about everything, geeh... Don’t know if I’ve ever seen a popular show or book or movie with a male protagonist where he ends up officially dating his best friend. So, so, so boring. *pouts* But let’s hope for the future! :D I know I plan to write books with male guy getting together with his best friend. ^-^

    Wai! I’m so happy you like Almost Sucks! :D Aww, and don’t feel bad about not reviewing. But don’t feel that you can’t babble either! I love babble reviews! The way a review is written, not just what it says, tells me what the author of that review was thinking. So if you want to try again and babble something together, know that I will love the review lots and lots and write a probably equally babbly reply. ^-^ If you don’t want to, don’t do it and don’t feel bad about it. I never want my readers to feel that they have to review. They don’t have to review. Though I love it when they do. ^-^

    Sneakyfox: Haha! Aww.... I’m happy you enjoyed the virginal sex. ^-^ When I read your review fast I keep reading ‘vaginal’ though, haha! And my head gets all weird. ^-^ And I suppose it’s not very often that ‘not hot at all’ is a compliment! :D Not that I’d mind if it had been hot, but I can definitely understand that it wasn’t. ^-^
    ursan-canine: Yeah! I did! :D I’m so happy you like it! Aww... But you praise me too much. *blushes* ^-^ I really love to work with this pairing. They’re so good together. So much chemistry. Doesn’t matter what they’re busy with really, they always kick ass. ^-^


    CHAPTER 5

    sakuyalove: Hi! I’m so happy you liked the story! ^-^ I would love to write a sequel, but I’m not sure how much time I will have to do it right now. I suppose I could try to do a one-shot. I’m not so sure Sasuke will let Naruto talk him out of his turn though... Actually, I strongly doubt it. ^-^

    Allys: I’m begging myself for more! :D I was scene-assaulted a few days ago by a quite confident Sasuke-darling and I was so tempted! I still am seriously tempted. But unfortunately at the moment that’s all I have really, just a few scene-assaults here and there and I want to build a sequel on more than that. I actually have a lot more story for a sequel to the sequel! But I can’t write that before the sequel and besides it’s kind of weird... yeah. I want to work on my original! And I want to catch up on the manga. You know how painfully behind I am.

    But I’m so happy you enjoyed the chapter! And the story! I worried that Sasuke’s reaction would make no sense to anyone but me, but he’s got the right kind of personality for that kind of behavior, haha! And Naruto handled things/Sasuke wonderfully I think. I’m proud of them. ^-^

    It would be interesting to write a sequel from Sasuke’s pov, though I am a bit worried about writing the “original version” of him. Worried that I’ll have difficulties and worried that it will mess up my sense of Almost Sucks. We’ll see what happens in the future!

    Thank you so much for reading! And for leaving such wonderful reviews! :D *cuddles for a long time (is good at cuddling ^-^)*

    DevilLived: Woho! :D They all won! ^-^ I’m happy you liked it.

    riddlestar: Wah! I love that you loved it! :D I do have a tendency to write pretty realistic-ish scenes. If things doesn’t make sense I get really annoyed so... yeah, I have to think ‘would this work?’ all the time. ^-^ And it does get awkward when it’s realistic, it’s not that hot. Maybe if they were a bit more experienced, but... nah, virgins are virgins. ^-^

    PlotAficionado: Aww... I'm just a guy with a thing for letting things be what they are. This is not a very hot piece of fan fiction, but that's not why I wrote it. It just has to feel realistic or I'll get itchy. I want to feel like it could have happened. Naruto will be Naruto and Sasuke will be Sasuke. But I'm ranting. ^-^ It was such a hilarious story to write. I reread it every now and then and laugh my ass off every time. The lube fight is a classic.

    Darling425: Haha! Sasuke was acting like a girl? Aww... He's just nervous because he's about to let someone touch him and be naked with him for no other reason but because it feels good. Sasuke likes to have a "better" reason behind what he does. Naruto really does believe Sasuke can be convinced, yeah. I would love to write a sequel and see how it goes. ^-^

    Neko Izumi: Hey! You've finally read it! I'm very happy. Sorry if this will be in English. I haven't been worming from the fruit! I have been... letting things take time. They're no porn stars... I was a bit worried you'd freak out again like you did with the Almost Sucks first time, but I also had a feeling the humor would make it easier for you. I would have loved to watch you read it. With the risk of sounding weird, that was one of my favorite happenings while in Japan, watching, *hearing* you read my Wolves chapters. Take care!


    Everyone, again, thank you so much! :D Writing this story has been lots of fun, and reading your feedback has been wonderful. Take care and have fun!

    *huggles*
    Mashiro
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  • From NekoIzumi on February 12, 2008
    About time!!!

    Jisses, jag trodde verkligen aldrig att du skulle avsluta det här. Du har wormat dig ifrån allt vad frukt heter sen jag fick läsa första utkastet
    för hur länge sen det nu månne vara. Och vilken frukt sen o.O Det gjorde ont, det gjorde det verkligen... men ditt sinne för humor förlåter allt.
    Turligt nog. Ditt sätt att skriva Naruto's tankegångar fick mig att snyggt och prydligt glida av stolen och cracka upp som en nöt. Bara för härligt!
    Ett gäng tummar upp! Took you long enough men slutresultatet var (konstigt nog) värt att vänta på! ;)

    ~smooches~

    PS. Ta en pik på min profil... vet inte hur inne du är på eh... D/s men kika på Werewolves och säg vad du tycker. Har lärt mig uppskatta din kritik XD
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  • From animeaddict666 on February 06, 2008
    Ok, you are a genius. You captured their first, hormonal, embarrassing time perfectly. I've never read another author that does such an amazing job at writing virgin sex scenes. I loved this line: ‘I could jump him from here... (how many places would I have time to grope before he knocks me out?)’

    And them fighting over the lube had me rolling and crying with laughter!!!!
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  • From riddlestar on December 17, 2007
    i am amazed at this!!! i really have no words.. i loved it.. a little too realistic if you ask me, lol. but still.. wow!!!
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  • From DevilLived on December 14, 2007
    That was awesome and full of win. Great job
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  • From Allys on December 13, 2007
    This was hilariously adorable and my first instinct is to beg you for more!! and say you can't just leave it there and hit you my puppy-dog eyes jutsu, but LOL, I'll behave XD. *huggles u* It was awesomely sweet otherwise and I adore Naruto's determination, and Sasuke's well... lol, adorableness XD. He kicked him out of the bush XD hehehehe, I know I'm just stating the obvious, but I think it's really funny. And sweet in an odd way. You should totally write a sequel XD, on your own time of course, LOL, I guess I just never want your stories to end huh? But seriously we have to find out the truth behind Sasuke's 'lame' little "I was... horny" excuse XD, LOL, so much for being good. Sorry *huggles* XD Thank you for this sweetie it made me smile on an otherwise- Why did I get out of bed again? day. * chuu*
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  • From sakuyalove on December 13, 2007
    I liked this story, I wish you'd continue. I want to know if Sasuke does get talked out of his turn.
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  • From ANON - ursan-canine on December 05, 2007
    OH MY GOD.

    you updated wolves!!!! [APPLAUSE!!] fantastic update. one of the best naruto POV smut ever. you brought out the awkward in sex. LOLz. you make this pairing so balanced. neither of them are too imposing on one another. [even in sex. haha.]

    great! keep it up! :D
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