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Reviews for Beasts of Burdens

By : BleedingStarGoddess
  • From ultistarmon on December 25, 2007
    Whoa, this just blew me away! I can't wait to see the next chapter of a story this great! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on November 17, 2007
    oooooooo, Im intrigued. Please update soon and keep up the good work
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  • From oohshiny on November 16, 2007
    THIS. STORY. IS. GREAT. all i gotta say. other than that, just email me when you update, meh email address is deannathx@comcast.net
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  • From ANON - moo on November 16, 2007
    Yay you finally updated this! plz plz plz! update soon! it is an interesting story and i can't help but want more
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  • From spoon10488 on November 15, 2007
    very cool. Can't wait to read more.

    =)
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  • From trabeck89 on November 15, 2007
    I LOVE IT!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! update soon please!!!^-^
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 15, 2007
    What will happen to the stranger when he comes to? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on November 15, 2007
    This is a really interesting plot, I'd love to see more of it. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - DesperadoSweetie on November 15, 2007
    This is very interesting. Is Sasuke a traitor because he left to find Itachi or was it something else entirely? And Naruto is taking him back to the village now? Or will he end up keeping him with him?

    I like this so far and I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2007
    Great start. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From dragon04 on October 03, 2007
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like see when naruto and sasuke meet and what will happen.
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  • From LadyAquill on March 29, 2007
    Innnnnnntesting.....
    nice idea and a good beginning, but i'm going to have to say you rambled abit here....^^;; i honestly don't like critsaizing ppl but you did...
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  • From Reyn on March 26, 2007
    I would like very much to see an update. Soon. Very soon. This story has me intrigued beyond reason.
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  • From hikageame on March 26, 2007
    wow...thats really deep. Its so true people suck. I like how you described how Naruto wanted to survive, the injustice of it all on both sides. Well written. please keep updating!
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  • From ursweetheartless on March 25, 2007
    mmm, very fairy tale, nicely woven and poetic. sometimes when people write in a style and voice like that it's just annoying, and it gets in the way of what they're trying to say and i just feel like im struggling through joyce or something, but it worked here, it fit with the way the story was going. im intrigued by this, i don't think i've read anything quite like that before, go for it! Ganbatte! ^.^
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