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Reviews for Breaking the Rules

By : desolatebutterfly
  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2010
    (I review as I read.)

    Good line about how Naruto’s frowning. ____ I guess that’s In Character for Sasuke. Not wanting something that he likes. ^^; ____ Heh—Sasuke tends to fight a lot, doesn’t he. It’s always a power-struggle. ____ Lol, nice try, Naruto. Love Sasuke’s violent reaction. ____ “Not gonna beg you for anything, ever.” Oh yeah? ____ Lol, “Because god forbid the moron not get his way every damn time.” XD ____ I like that choice: “Just shut up and enjoy this ….. Or … you can not shut up and just enjoy it anyway.” =) ____ Heh—you should’ve been more specific, Sasuke…. On second thought, that was just fine, otherwise we’d never see this scene! =D ____ Lol: “C’mon. I want to hear you.” “F-fuck you.” XD The way they talk to each other is really funny. I love it. ____ HaHA! Desire defeated! Now for his will! ____ Ohhhhh, I like that bit about Sasuke’s heart beating. ____ Ooh, ouch. He made Naruto angry. I like that bit. Because I’ve read so many fics where Sasuke gives in with a line like that and Naruto’s all like “YAY! =D” I really liked this unexpected turn of events. I wasn’t expecting him to get pissed at the way Sasuke’s taking it, but it makes sense and it’s just DAMN GOOD. >:3 ____ “Not so I can brag about it later!” Love the insight! YEAH! o/' ____ That’s cool, Naruto saying that he didn’t really want to make Sasuke beg for it. ____ Heh. “Rabbit.” So cute. ____ Yup. It’s still power with Sasuke. Ah well, he’ll probably go down on Naruto sometime in the future. On his terms. Of course.
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  • From MuseMistress on March 25, 2007
    Hehe, that's just like Sasuke to make up a rule like that. And just like Naruto to make him break it. Sasuke thinks he's in charge. . .makes me laugh.
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  • From on March 24, 2007
    I never know what to say about your oneshots except Wow! And that doesn't seem like a very substantial review. But you deserve a review!! A good and long one. Well, I can say that I always love your character explorations and the tension you tease out of your prose. I'm very awed by your writing style.

    I mean really, this piece was very interesting because it explores how Sasuke doesn't want to lose control. It was an insightful touch, though, when Naruto got mad when he found out Sasuke thought Naruto wanted to humiliate him when that isn't the case at all. What can I say? I really like it, and I look forward to your next oneshot.
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