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Reviews for Beautiful Dreamer

By : antilogicgirl
  • From ANON - moodysavage on June 17, 2010
    Ok, I have to review even though I'm not finished yet. That chapter 3...oh my gosh that was so hot. Wow was that hot. And after chapter 4 you said something about not having any real smut...are you kidding me?!? I'm not sure how you are defining smut but the BEST kind is exactly the kind you wrote, especially in chapter 3. Yep, it's all about the build-up, the lack of control, the chase... You name it however you want but that is what makes a scene hot. Not the "wham bam thank you ma'am we just had sex to prove our love" sort of thing. That's too typical & expected.

    Your writing...LOVE IT!

    And if this story isn't done... I'm begging you (lol you had begging in your story too which I also find hot in a story lol) please finish it!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - aoh on November 08, 2008
    wuaaaah why aren't you continuing this?? it SO GOOD!! *bawl*
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  • From ANON - pangasius on October 09, 2008
    Oh God this story is one of the best I've ever read !! Please, tell me you didn't abandon it ! It's so hot, and I love GenmaxKakashi ^^
    Please, update soon, I'm addicted to this story...
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  • From ANON - anonymous on August 31, 2008
    I still badly want to read the denoument of this story, where the shit hits the fan...and I echo the sluttacious monsters who want a scene with Raido and Iruka, yeah. :D
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  • From ANON - marine_love on June 29, 2008
    wow i wish this was continued!! i'm usually into iruka/kakashi and genma/raidou, but you make this... oh, it's just the best!! please consider continuing this
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  • From ANON - aoh on June 04, 2008
    i can't believe you abandoned this story when it's one of the view i'll add to my naughty bookmarks... it's perfect, so hot, so intoxicating!!! if you're still on aff.net you should really consider picking it up again, i'll be... your whore XD ok, just to say i let you know how much i liked it. mm.
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  • From ANON - Dysia on January 09, 2008
    This is awesome! I absolutely love Kakashi, but to tell the truth, I've never thought of this pairing. I CAN'T WAIT to read more. I love your style!
    Oh, and the Genma/Tsunade fling was priceless! I love how Shizune is freaking out because Tsunade is actually working.
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  • From ANON - Lhum on January 09, 2008
    Actually went and read the story now. I can definitely say, hawt! moar pls.
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  • From ANON - Lhum on January 09, 2008
    hahaha I've only read the intro and I already have to leave a review. Just wanted to say that's the best intro ever:

    "There may be some hetero, so don't be shocked."

    Good thing you warned us. Those straights and their perverse ways. Completely destroys traditional values. :D
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  • From ANON - Anise on September 25, 2007
    It's been so long I had completely forgotten about this story so it's nice to see you updating again! I was so happy to see Raidou brought into this, I thought Iruka definitely needed to have his own bit of fun, although I don't think I like that Raidou is involved with whatever plan Shikaku's got going on. I'm definitely looking forward to finding out how this all plays out, I hope we don't have to what as long for the next update! :)
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  • From ANON - luxeflex on September 24, 2007
    thanks sooo much for updating ^^
    I really wasn't expecting iruka/raidou but you already made me like that pairing. and genma was so funny when he woke up.
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  • From Jayderaven on July 15, 2007
    Please please please write more! I am waiting for more Genma action other than what I write and your story seems so cool! Is poor Iruka going to get any action? And what's with Shikamaru's dad? Can't wait to find out! I wish there was some way to get new chapter alerts like on FF but oh well. . . I'll just have to keep checking! :-)
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on June 27, 2007
    Oh no! It looks like Iruka is in trouble. And Genma and Kakashi are having too much fun to help him. Though it is very hot fun.

    Awesome chapter! I can't wait till the next one! (claps) Keep it up!
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  • From sunlight159 on June 11, 2007
    I am so excited for an update!!! I absolutely love this story!! Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - mary on June 11, 2007
    and the plot thickens!!!! *grinning eviliy and rubbing hands like a maniac* will the persons involved be revieled soon?
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