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Reviews for When He Comes

By : GoldenSensei
  • From ANON - SasuNaru7 on March 24, 2007
    omg!! you better continue this story!! *freaks out* i'll go crazy if you don't!!!!!!!!
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  • From dutsada on March 24, 2007
    I love it! As long as Sasuke remains the Seme throughout the story and not the other way around somewhere near the future, I will be a loyal reader and reviewer!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on March 24, 2007
    Loved the intro chapter! I definitely want more!! :)
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  • From Mija on March 24, 2007
    awwwwwwwwwwww now that was sweet, and I would love to see more, why Sasuke came back, what will happen now, and of course the relationship part from Naruto and Sasuke if there can be one and of course the ever so loved responses of Sakura, Sai, Kakashi, and all the others to Sasu's return, ty for the read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on March 24, 2007
    Okay first tell me this isn't a one-shot . . . please tell me this teasing little bit will be continued on in an actual story?! Just on that chapter I'll say I enjoyed your writing style, I believe you did a good job capturing the characters you showed in that small piece. It was enough to pull me in at least and leave me hoping for more from this. So if your wanting an opinion on if you should keep with it than I offer up my humble one and say yes and please do, I personally would love to see more of this story from you. I will keep my eyes out for the story, hope to see more from you on this. Take care and thanks for sharing this with everyone.
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  • From YukiOfTheMightnightHour on March 24, 2007
    Beautiful, Brilliant, just awesome!!! You must continue I plead to you!!
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  • From ANON - Kim on March 24, 2007
    Why would you have a question mark next to TBC ? It is quite clearly excellent and needs to be continued. There's not question in it. :D

    I look forwards to the extension of this story. :D
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  • From manicandyshumway on March 24, 2007
    It had better be TBC!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 24, 2007
    Wow, that was interesting. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From Eternel on March 23, 2007
    That was good! can't wait for the next chapter I really want to read more of this, it really is off to a good start.
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  • From Kativachan on March 23, 2007
    Yay! Sounds really good so far!
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  • From ANON - Zrina on March 23, 2007
    awesome start!!! can't wait to read more!!! please please update!
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  • From emp78 on March 23, 2007
    continue! like it!
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  • From Bunni07 on March 23, 2007
    Frikin' Awesome!! I loved the picture that popped into my mind at the last few lines...I definately think you should continue it!! ^_^ Yes yes!! I always get over excited when I read a fic about Sasuke comming back...but this seems/feels completely different! I soooo can't wait for another chapter! Love the style of writing, too! ^_^


    *Me
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  • From marquesgue1 on March 23, 2007
    that was good :D... but I noticed you put a '?@ next to TBc, I understand why you might not be sure to continue but if you wouldn't mind it'd be nice if you would ^_^, I'm intrigued :D

    Ja!
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