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Reviews for When He Comes

By : GoldenSensei
  • From Silkylove on April 03, 2007
    YAY!!!! *giggles* i love those two. Love reading happy stories . Is there going to be more?
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  • From ANON - Joycelyn on April 02, 2007
    Awsome! Cant wait for the next Chap! ^_^
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  • From ANON - hentai girl on April 02, 2007
    I love chap 1 so far, keep it up
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  • From Silkylove on April 02, 2007
    there has got to be more!!!!!!!! *squeals*
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  • From YamiKaeko on April 02, 2007
    Oh Hell yeah! continue please! Please! I'll give you strawberry flavored pockey! PA.
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  • From ANON - Akiru chan on April 02, 2007
    Very nice. please do continue.
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  • From ANON - Cianis on April 01, 2007
    Oooh what happens next?!
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  • From anndragera007 on March 27, 2007
    oh if thou woulds't please!!!!!!!!!

    please continue this - you have a very promising start!
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  • From ANON - Astyra on March 25, 2007
    I am really looking for to your continued story line!!!!
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  • From Dream2010 on March 25, 2007
    A very interesting beginning. Yeh go forward! And your first one? Wow!!!
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  • From ANON - dana on March 25, 2007
    that was an ok begining you have a good start gooimg so far. if you continue will you make this a mpreg story. i hope that you continue.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 24, 2007
    its good so far so whats next.
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  • From darktoy on March 24, 2007
    WOW!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!1 Finally Sasuke did something for what he can be proud!!!!!!! (no one makes naruto cry that easely)
    Please more!!!!!!!! pretty please???
    Maybe Sasuke explaining how did he come back, if the council and Konoha are going to execute him or what... MORE SASUNARU MOMENTS!!!!!!

    UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From Stacy on March 24, 2007
    nice! i can't wait to read the rest!! update soon!
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  • From TheGingerLady on March 24, 2007
    You beter continiu this! Gargh! I'm soo curious!!!
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