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Reviews for When He Comes

By : GoldenSensei
  • From ANON - mary on April 03, 2007
    now that is getting good.....smut if your up for it but good plot so far.
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  • From ANON - Akiru chan on April 03, 2007
    Yay, I am so glad you continued this. It really is great.

    I loved the Texas beef comment. Yes we really do have the best beef. LOL. Gotta love texas.

    anywho update soon.
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  • From ANON - uchiha-fluffer on April 03, 2007
    Sweet! Diggin on this fic. I always like to see Izumo and Kotetsu... the little side scene is a nice touch. Apart from that, it's a good start, and I'd like to read more.
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  • From cloudydayz on April 03, 2007
    Great story so far!
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  • From VRon8899 on April 03, 2007
    OMG!!! YAY!! -dances- so excited I really love where this is going!! I can't wait for more!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cat-san Uzumaki on April 03, 2007
    WOOOO! Write more! It's really good.
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  • From YamiKaeko on April 03, 2007
    Hooah!!! yes! go on please I want to see more of this story! PA.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2007
    Woah!! Did not see that coming?! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on April 03, 2007
    Great story so far!! I love Naruto's command of wind chakra too. I can see him being able to do this in the manga. ;)
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  • From anndragera007 on April 03, 2007
    more, more, more! pleeeeaaassssssssseee!!!!!!!!!
    more!!!!!!!!!

    this is so hot!

    great story line going!
    i love this!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2007
    (squeals!) hmm too cute! please update soon!
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  • From Starryeyedstar on April 03, 2007
    Oh, very nicely done! Can't wait for the update!
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  • From emp78 on April 03, 2007
    Will there be a lemon in the next chapter? That was great. Sasuke had to practically spell it out for Naruto. Update!
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on April 03, 2007
    AIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEE! NOT THERE, NOT THERE! UPDATE ASAP I WANT MORE!
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  • From Eternel on April 03, 2007
    voyerism is one of my favorites lol. Okay they were only being watched while they kissed but still, it was good. I'm glad you decided to keep writing this story, I really do like it a lot and can't wait to read more.
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