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Reviews for When He Comes

By : GoldenSensei
  • From ANON - jess on April 27, 2007
    awww! kawaii! i love a happy ending. ^_^
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  • From ANON - jewel on April 26, 2007
    love this story so far.
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  • From ANON - spoon10488 on April 26, 2007
    this sounds good please up date soon.
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  • From ANON - dyessie on April 21, 2007
    its so kawaii.. haha.. pretty cool.. i hope i can read the next chapter real soon.. its a great fic.. thanks for posting it anyways.. keep rockin dude.. ^^
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  • From andrea19 on April 11, 2007
    Hey just wanted to tell you YOU ARE AWESOME and you better keep writing cuz is really good and I want to know what happens ok? please update soon...
    ja!...
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  • From ANON - KawaiiKoneko89 on April 08, 2007
    That was HOT!!! You MUST update ASAP! =^^= ByE!


    Koneko-chan
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  • From Asheita on April 07, 2007
    Wicked! Please update soon! =)
    -TCK
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  • From ANON - chopsticks on April 07, 2007
    ahhhhh! you have to put more!!!! unless its a 2-shot, but it shouldnt be, because its so good!
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  • From Catsura on April 07, 2007
    Awesomeness! weeeeeee!
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  • From ANON - someone on April 07, 2007
    omg i totally love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue!
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  • From kotikiz on April 04, 2007
    WAW!!!! I realy like it!!!!
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  • From ANON - riddlestar on April 04, 2007
    nice story, definately waiting for the next chappie..

    ps : i assume ure american.. and from Texas..hehehe..

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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on April 04, 2007
    *perks up in interest* Izumo, can you PLEASE tell me what Shikamaru does at night? I really would love to know the answer...As for Sakura-NO surprise there, I figured she would be a yaoi fangirl! I think Ino could be one too, once Sai converted her...I saw this Naruto comic a while back, in it Sai was a major yaoi fanboy, and he was introduced Ino to yaoi, then Ino got Sakura too as well...So is there anyone else, that are watching Sasuke and Naruto? I know Kotetsu and Shikamaru are too, but what about Sakura and Naruto's other friends? Surely by now Neji would have noticed!
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  • From ANON - dana on April 03, 2007
    i don't know what number review i am for this chapter but biznatch #5 (fav. number) reporting for duty. i think this was another super chapter. i think you have a nice flow to your story so far and you can't tell it's not beta'd so don't worry about it because i think you are doing fine. can't wait for the next chapter. by nthe way is sasuke going to have any interesting competition like say sai or gaara.
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  • From noezel7 on April 03, 2007
    I am extreemly jealous!! I too just started a sasunaru fanfic but it is crap compared to yours. I just can't find a fluid easy way for Naruto and Sasuke to enter a relationship. Anyway, this story is very good, not relying on chliche plot lines to further the story. Keep writing, I'm sure it will only get better with time, like good wine!!
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