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Reviews for When He Comes

By : GoldenSensei
  • From kagomegirl on October 20, 2007
    kyaaa kawaii!!!!!!! you HAVE to UPDATE onegai!!!!i wanna read more!!!
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  • From ANON - Akatsuki-Sakura on August 29, 2007
    nice storie! un gunna update or no?? lol
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  • From ANON - Damp on July 05, 2007
    I don´t know if you´ve been informed or if you know, but I have some sad news.

    While on the way back from the hospital along with her daughter (who was in ICU) they got into a terrible car accident. They didn´t make it.

    Please go around and inform people of what has happened. Not many of her fans probably know of this and they need to be informed.

    -Damp

    Hope the yaoi´s good up there Yura...
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 06, 2007
    That's so sweet! Please continue!!
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  • From Rosebud on June 05, 2007
    Cute story!
    Hope you update soon!XD
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  • From emp78 on June 05, 2007
    When and how did Naruto happen to see Sakura's nipples? Sasuke painted his kitchen to remind him of Naruto; how sweet! I really like this fic. Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - dana on June 05, 2007
    i guess this is supposed to be the funny calm before the storm cause that last line had me cracking up. i also like how you had sasuke apartment disguised with a jijitsu (sorry mispell) but i thought it was really cool. i have been blowing my brains out trying to guess who shika's partner is and i am to choose kiba. but only because i eliminated the chicks (temari and ino) and of the guys lee was still talking about sakura and the only excitable one left to me is kiba. i can not wait to see who it turns out to be and have a nice one.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on June 05, 2007
    LOL! This was funny and sweet! Sasuke sure went all out to make his home Naruto's home too. Love it! :)
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  • From dutsada on June 05, 2007
    SO SWEE~~T... Sasuke CAN be nice LOL... Naruto moving in with Sasuke?
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  • From ANON - darz on June 05, 2007
    weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. you finally updated. the start was so good, so obviously you have to continue it. can't wait for more. update soon. ja ne
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on June 05, 2007
    Sasuke painted his kitchen orange? It must be true love.
    You are going to tell us what Shika does at night? Can't wait. It sounds not-troublesome.
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  • From ANON - TeaLeavesGreen on June 05, 2007
    erm... well, I've only read the first chapter so far, so the verdict's still out on this one, but what exactly is a "chakra shaped mercury key" supposed to be? I mean, chakra is life-energy, and mercury is a poisonous liquid.

    I like attention to detail; too often authors skimp on the little things and their work suffers for it. But there is a thing as too much detail -- I think you're trying too hard to make things seem soooper speshul. I also think that the first "chapter" seemed a bit uneventful. Naruto trained. Naruto went to see Tsunade. Sasuke was locked up. Description is good, but we could use a little more actual content, as well. Still, I only caught a couple little typos/grammatical errors, which puts far above most of the authors here.

    It could use improvement, but it doesn't suck.
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  • From ANON - Ol'l on June 05, 2007
    I loved it.
    Sakura's nipples. lol.
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  • From on April 30, 2007
    Aaaaaaaaaw that was cute!
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  • From ANON - GypsyRose on April 27, 2007
    I liked it. It could have been better if there were a bit more....build up, ya know what I mean? I just kind of feel like there should have been a bit more in between the bebining and the kiss; explaing the relationship better,but it was still good. :) Is it going to have more chapters?
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