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Reviews for Dissolving

By : KrickItat
  • From ANON - Feion Phylar on July 07, 2009
    X_X

    Oh my well...I just read the first chapter and well, everyone just seems to OOc. While I was feeling it right until, I realized the kind of role Naruto played for them, I was a little stunned.

    Because I honest to GOD can't see Naruto, who has loved Sakura forever, doing something like that with a Married Sasuke KNOWING he's married to Sakura. It's mind boggling. It's far fetched. It's difficult for me to swallow.

    Naruto's personality...consenting to an affair? Mmm~ nah. I like that you tried to do something different tho. It is different I suppose.
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  • From ANON - rhaize on December 22, 2008
    been waiting for this chapter forever! it was great, update soon!
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  • From ANON - Jennjennr on December 08, 2008
    Holy Crap, you updated. And holy crap I caught it and am reviewing, what an amazing feat of actually doing stuff is this?

    Hi, I have missed you, and this story. And shame on me for missing that last chapter, I have no idea where I was when it was updated but apparently it was nowhere near this site.

    Anyway on to the reviewing shall I? I... do not know where to start. I liked it, ok so probably loved it would be more accurate, though it seemed like half of it sailed over my head it was still so fascinating, like watching a horror movie and knowing the outcome but still being enthralled by it all the same. When Itachi was mentioned I knew this would happen - I mean really, Itachi and Sakura in a fic that is semi depressing, seriously something like this was bound to happen- but it is also fascinating that Sasuke didn't have any sort of melt down but more of a quiet one, which only leaves more questions -and screaming for the story to continue, *hint*hint*- and wanting to know what happens next and how he reacts. Also... why doesn't he seem to know the feeling of Sakura's lips, when Naruto asked, I was very intrigued by that little tid bit.

    I honestly can't wait to see what happens next but judging by past track records, yours and mine included it may be sometime till I am fulfilled, alas this shall have to tide me over till I am um... I don't know, at least until I can read the next chapter.

    Now I need to get my ass off line and go to sleep so I can study for my final tomorrow before having to take it, curse the matter of having to actually pass these courses I take.

    Until next time, thanks ever so much for updating, I will always love and adore your stories, and I hope that I can read the next chapter sometime soon.

    Love, Jenn.
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  • From Geda on December 07, 2008
    I'm in love with this story now. It's just so stark and realistic. =)
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  • From ANON - Jamie on May 23, 2008
    Please Continue this is a really intriging story, I like it alot.
    Jamie ^.^g
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  • From ANON - Kinomoto Neko on April 09, 2008
    Okay, I love this! You are one of the best authors around! I can't wait to read more, especially the whole Naruto/Sakura dynamic. Just one question though, why doesn't Sakura (who is known to have as short a temper as Tsunade) yell and scream at Sasuke, make him open up and reveal what he truely wants. I know you are trying to put Sakura in a quiet light, but, damn, she doesn't need to be a backseat driver in her own marriage. I hope to see some of her spunk back soon.

    Oh, and where is Kakashi in all this? Somehow I don't see him as the 'I'm not going to butt my nose in' type... Just food for thought...

    Neko
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  • From ANON - rhaizen on January 23, 2008
    need new chapterrr :) so good, i love all the different perspective, relationships are complicated :( they're never simple
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  • From ANON - Deedlit50 on October 27, 2007
    I just wanted to let you know that I really love this story so far and am very interested in seeing where you might go with it. This is one of those oh so wonderfully bitter and sad stories which just makes your heart twist in that oh so good way. I for one, am really hoping that things work out for all the characters involved.

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  • From angell1502 on September 03, 2007
    i like this story i think it is brilliant that you have both men in love with Sakura but neither one is sleeping with her. UPDATE SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - mimi101 on August 17, 2007
    I love you. Seriously. It is extremely hard to find a well written Sasu/Saku fanfic but even harder to find one with Naruto that does not have either Sakura or Naruto bashing. And *gasps* God forbid that it actually has depth. THANK YOU!!! ^___^
    Originally I stopped by on adultfanfiction.net because I just wanted to read some good Sasu/Saku smut but this is WAY better. Plus, aside from your friend Momo fan's fic, "Relax Sasuke" I couldn't even find good smut (by the way, I thought her fic was very good, she shouldn't be shy, be proud!! ^o^ As a matter of fact, if she has more fics that she's written but hasn't posted, you should encourage her to post them because aff.net is in serious need of quality writing.)
    Sooooo, how long are you going to toture your fans and keep us waiting? If you reach the 6 month mark I'm going to start stalking you...

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  • From mistysmysticrose on June 11, 2007
    The three of them should just get together and call it good.
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  • From ANON - Dream-Toxin on May 18, 2007
    Oh I just want to scream at these people!!! That is if they were real. I love your story and the angst you put it omg! I realize that everyone is at fault here but I mean Sakura needs to finally corner her cheating husband and so called friend (he is sleeping with her husband for crying out loud, you call that friendship?) and tell them what is wrong! That she knew he was having an affair when she was 3 weeks pregnant and not to take it out on her that he was missing out cause he was to busy getting his kicks off somewhere else. I know it seems that I'm favoring her more then them but I've been in a similar situation so I guess that is why I want to see the guys suffer so much. Why did you have the baby die? Maybe Sakura should have a near death experience and that could make them suffer some and she could yell at her husband that the only reason she fought to stay alive was for her remaining child and not for some man who doesn't (she thinks anyway)even love her. Really you are a very very good storyteller and you really have a talent of getting your readers' emotions involved in your writing. I'm just livid here! There is a song that I was listing to while reading your story and in my opinion I think it goes really well with some of Sakura's feelings I think. You should listen to it, it's called " I Can't Make You Love Me" by Bonnie Raitt. I'm looking forward to an update.
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  • From poornmiserable on May 09, 2007
    this chapter was sad...first she's having problems with her hubby now she looses a son poor girl....i just hope you make it up to her in this fic.... does naruto realize what he's doing or does he even know sakura knows...as always great work i love you update soon

    p.s SAKURA RULES
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  • From ANON - ItariShun on May 02, 2007
    Oh wow, I definetely wasn't expecting that. What a plot twist! Actually, there was a couple of those...death of Sakura's son and the fact that she brings Naruto food...I mean, Sakura knows Naruto and Sasuke are having an affair and yet, she still takes care of Naruto. How mind-boggling! I think you should definetely involve Sai somehow (as if it isn't already complicated enough:) )And um..yes...the happy ending...Is that even possible in this case? Should I be expecting a threesome ;)? Is a quick update too much to ask for ?
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  • From Selow on May 01, 2007
    This is a really intelligent piece of fiction and a joy to read. All the characters are human with their own flaws and good sides. I'm really interested in what will happen next.

    (and the fluffwhore in me hopes they will all be a happy lovin' team 7 in the end of this xD)
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